Hi guyzz...i am Ameera i am not new to this forum...i read a lot of OS ,ff of Manan...😳😳😳
Actually my IF friend told me to write..any story on Manan so I thought of writing OS...
THANKS ANANYA...for motivating me ...hope u like it ...
MY FIRST EVER STORY ... ENJOY
Guyzz...in this cabir is not gay and mukti alya dhruv role is not much...i don't want to exaggerate...soo plss don't mind...
The reason I breath is you
Showering with fear and smirks on face ..scared and feared...shortness of breath... ...heart beats goes high and loww...shouting NAVYAA...NAVYAA..
Navya came fast ...holding hand tight and consoling her...(kuch nahi hai NANDU its alrite your safe...main hoon na yaha...chup chup..)keeping hand on her head...
In morning at hostel...
Nandu got up suddenly..shortening her breath...then.drank water...after she is relaxed...taking pillow on her lap regreting that why her past always comes in her present and distubes her...by thinking that she went to washroom ..and looking at mirror and thinking about her past...
(NANDU..aka nandini..she is very positive in nature, straight on her path...a arrogant girl ,who never believe on boys... she think that all boys are cheaters..they just use girls and throw them when their will is full enough with that girl...but very sensitive and kind girl from inside... she has a childhood frnd cabir..they met in cllg ..they use to study together in mangalore..after many years they met ..her frnd mukti who also supported her but she do not now abt her past..mukti also have the same thinking as nandu have...she quit good...she has two more frnds dhruv and aliya...just frnds ... and she have her grandmom..in mangalore..(she know abt nandu"s past))
Nandini: uth navya ...der horahi hai cllg ko jana fir bolna mat ki maine uthaya nahi...main fresh hogaiii..tu uth ab...
Navya:ruk nandu abi 7 hi baje hai...bhot der hai...
Nandini:7 hehehe...madam 8:00 horahe hai bas half an hour hai ..tujhe ready hone hai...
Navya:kya...what...ajj to hum pakka der honge...
Both R ready for cllg ...on the way to cllg...
Navya:ek batt bolu...
Nandini:ha bolna...
Navya:tujhe kal fir se woh khwaab aya tha..kya...????(nandin was justshook her head)...maine kitne baar kaha hai...tu apne past ko apne present pe kuin effet ..karti ho...
Nandini: what shld i do navya... jabhi mai use bhulane ki koshi karti ..mujhe wo khwaab satate hai...agar tum wo din nahi hoti to mera kya hota...(then she stop)
Nayya says...
Navya: acha ..chod mood off mat kar ...and try not to think abt him...
Nandini: acha...main ka serious hoon ...acha chal..
Both laughed..heheh...
(OOPS ..forgot
Navya she is best frnd of nandini she know abt her past ...she was the one who did the admission in cllg..as her parent were dead in road accident...she was the one saviour..when nandu was lieing on road side...protected her ...gave strenght ,made her strong and face challenges...)
Navya and nandini at cllg...
BothTalking... suddenly...awwchhh...
Abe woh andhe dikhta nahi...
What ...???andha..aur main. Nandini pls abh fir se shuru mat hojaoo...
Nandini:ohh tum ..THE GREAT MANIK MALHOTRA...
(Manik the handsome young man ...hot...all girls are mad of him but he is mad of nandu..Yup.but he never shows his feeling ..to her..he loves her eyes hair..etc...coz he know she will never except his love .she is frnd of his buddy cabir...and manik best frnd is cabir with that relation they know each other well...manik have fab7 including navya and nandini..the all R best frnds...but not nandu ...whenever they meet they start fighting..they stay .together becoz of their frnds..)
Manik: haa..main... abhi nahi nandini...roz ka jhagda,,even cllg is fedup of our fight...har choti baat pe jagda..kabhi canteen mein to kabhi music class main..etc
Nandini :tum ne hi start kiya yeh sab...(and her lecture goes on...)
Manik: acha meri maa...sorry meri hi galti thi..ok
Nandini: hmm...ok..
And they both went to the opp direction...
Manik and cabir conversation start
Cabir :tu kab bolega apne dill ki baat...main thak gaya hu tujhe aur nandini ko ek sath late late...ab bas..
Manik: are yaar sahi time pe..plsss aisa mat kar..(bussy with his phone).
Cabir: wow thats ..nice ek ladki ke liye manik malhotra plss... kehraha hai... i loved it
Manik:chup baith...(beating on his head)its nothing like that..
Cabir : are yaar tu marta kui hai ...baat keh ke bhi bolsakta ...na..
Both having talk and masti...
On other hand..(means nandu and navya side)
Nandini: navya itna crowd kuin hai ..
Navya: i dont now lets check...
Both went ..even manik, mukti, cabir...where there
Mukti : tu nandini...(both huged) main samjhi tu nahi ayi..kuin ki tu mujhe class main nahi dekhi...
Nandini: haa yaar ajj der hogayi thi..but anways... yaha kya horaha hai...
Eevery one went to stop their fight..
Manik: alya tu yeh ky kar rahi hai...
Alya:..he was harassing me.. ...par sahi waqt par dhruv came..
Manik hold dhruv hand..and mukti and navya was consoling alya
Dhruv: i am not gona leave him...manik chod mujhe...
Manik : control buddy ...jane de use...
And the big lectures given by navya nad mukti...abt womens respect...by hearing it nandini start sweating ...she is imagining abt her past...scared , showering...she ran from there ...but manik saw nandini...running
M p.o.v..anik
Nandini ko kya hua why she was tensed.and ran away..usse to alya ke sath hona chhiye tha..as she hate this thing ..now what happen to her...
p.o.v ends..
manik:cabir handle this...i will jzt come...ok..
cabir:ok..come fast...
manik was finding nandini madly..corridor class rooms ,toilet... he was shouting nandini ..but no response at .the last music room...he checked there..she was sitting in corner and crying...sweating .showering ...manik was shocked...and went there..
manik: nandini...what happened to you... look at yourself..he touched her but she back off...ok easy...take a deep breath..(tensed and shocked to see her first time like that)
manik:nandini kuch toh bolo...say something...
suddenly ... nandu tightly huged manik... (then the music..)then his hands slowly goes to her waiste...and then their hug...after that nandini break the hug ..and acted as nothing happened...she gotup and was leaving ..from there
manik: stop nandini(he hold his hand and pulled towards him..) tell me what happened ??? u cant leave like this..(in searious mood)
nandini: manik leave me..i dont wana talk abt that..
manik: u cant leave like this nandini...(after a movement )ohh sorry i fogot (my pushing her back..)tum derti ho agar tumhari sachai cllg ko malum chalgayii ...tooo... How can you face them rite...hmm now i get...you r scared nandini murthy...you dont have that dare that you can answer the questions of the world..you r looser..miss nandini murthy he continues...
this made nandini irritated ...each word of manik was echoing in her ears...she hold her ears tight but could not get out of it...
nandini: stop it... just stop it manik ...u want to now abt me ..naa soo listen..
she start..it..this is abt my past ..which is still back of me..
Its the time when i was in class 10th AYAZ..(nandu"s classmate) was studying in my class ... he was famous among the school..every girl was mad of him...he only use to use girls...he was a MONSTER ...he was good in studies..her mom was schools princi...one day after the school over that day was the last day of our school (farewell) party was there at school every one was enjoying after party was over every one was leaving for hostel as they were tired ...i was going to hostel...it was abt 6...i was alone on the road...ayaz also left at same time ..suddenly it started rainning...ao ayaz told lets go in jungle(i was scared as it was raining heavily so i agreed)...(we waited in jungle for long time but it was heavily raining) we saw a cottage and went there...but i was scared ...we went to cottage ..after sometimes rain stop i was just leaving he tightly hold my hand..i said ayaz leave me what r u doing ...i shouted sceamed loudly but...no one came ..he tried to molest me.. harass me i ran from there ..i dont know where to goo...somehow i went somewhere and hide..but then he found me and use to beat me ..with belt...(nandini caugth manik hand tightly and manik was cirsing on himself..)he use to go out side but locking the door...and again the other...the days passed like that ..no one tried to find me..not even my hostel frnds..not even princi...one day i planned for to run out that time..no one was there but the door was lock i was in high fever ...i was not well but i tried to get up ..and broke the lock and ran away...i was running..i went far from hotel and school..i don't know wher i was going.. while running feeling dizzy i fainted ...when i got up i was on bed... i tried to get up but.. not able to walk.. ,..not able to talk.from 10 days i was with that monster only i use to get a piece of chapati. navya supported me... she was the one who supported me took care of me my wounds..was all clear and slowly i started tlking with her and told everything what happened...i am soo lucky to find a frnd like her... (tears were coming from her eyes)
by listening to this manik huged her tightly ...and started crying... i am really sorry nandu...
Nabdini: its ok manik...i am feeling better by saying this ...i don't know why but...
The other hand ...every thing is solved and they were sitting in canteen...navya strikes nandini coz she couldn't handle these things...
Navya: guyz... where is nandu...
Cabir: yaa where is she ... and where is manik ...he told he will come..aur itni der hogai..
Every one got up and stood ...
Cabir:lo ye log to yaha hai...kaha that u manik
Navya : nandu where, were you...aur tum theek hoo...
Manik: kuch nahi yaar main wo kuch bhul gaya tha class main to...
Nandini: navya kuch nahi bas yahi thi... mujhe kya hona hai.. i am perfectly fine...guyzzz come on..lets sit together kitne din hogaye hum log mil kar baat nahi kare ..rite...
Every one i shocked to see nandu ...
Cabir: nandu tujhe kya hogaya tu itna weird behave kuin karrahi hai...
Nandini: weired..main to normal hoon..bas ajj bhot khush hoon..
Cabir: ok..then lets go guyzz after this drama i have to rest...
All agreed.and left..
Manik and nandini smiled at each other...
At hostel..
nandini was in deep thought ..thinking abt manik how he huged her...
Nandini p.o.v
Manik itna bhi bura nahi hai jitna maine socha tha...he is good and ..caring one..thinking abt him she was blushing in herself. ...suddenly sound came near the window...she got up from the bed and was...tumm(shockingly)
Nandini: manik ...tum yaha kya karahe ho...????(showing actions with her hand)..goo from hear..
Manik: you come down ..(in a whispering voice..coz watchman was sleeping)
Nandini: nahi...i will not come...(again showing action with her hand...)gooo...
Manik : noo...(shaking his head left and right..)i will not go ...
And this continues for 1 min and manic got angry and he said loudly ..nandini if you r not coming i will come up..(.suddenly watchman got up...but till that time manic got hidden back of his car)and after that the watchman slept..ignoring every thing...
Nandini: how...??tum hare pass koi rasta hi nahi hai..hehehe...(in her own voice but slowly...)
Manik: how..hmmm will show u see that ladder from there i can reach your window...
He was going to come then nandu said wait i will come...
Nandini: manik...tum yaha kya kar rahe ho..wo bhi girls cllg ke bahar..???...do you have sense ..agar watch man uncle uthte toh...
She keeps on scolding manik ...and then he
Manik locks her mouth with his hand ...chupp...and
Manik: ssshhh...dhire..watchman uth jaye ga ...(by keeping hand on her lips he strted saying) woh main puchne aya tha ..that u r ok...i now tum sorahi thi naa...main bhi kitna stupid hoon..SORRY..ok na...(he sound very tensed)
Tum kuch bol kuin nahi rahi ho...nandini i said naa SORRY ...ab ya karu main..
Nandini: ammm...ammm...(trying to say something but she cant)
Manik: oops sorry main bhul gaya tha ...(he noticed his hand is on her mouth)
Nandini: auuchh...
Manik: sorry nandini...i was soo tensed after u said this much to mee...you will be ok or not..for cheking i came...
Nandini: bhul gaya..???.tum itni der se mere mu pe hath rakh ke khade hue ho ..and you say u forgot..
Manik: (manik"s sad face)
Nandini: acha theek hai..koi baat nahi... (by putting her hand on her lips ) acha...leave it..tum kya keh rahe the ...haa main theek hu...and you got this time to ask me this question..???kal cllg main bhi puch sakte the rite...
Manik: hmm... i told na sorry ...by the way u was sleeping ..
Nandini: mai...mai... woo...(by thinking what shld i say him..) haa.. yaad aya record complete kar rahi thi..
Manik :record...??? agar jhut bolna nahi ata to why do you lie...kahi tum mare bare main to nahi soch rahi thi..(teasing her)
Nandini: (nandini was blushing at the same time she said)... bye...manik.. i dont have any time to ans these stupid question...now you gooo ..(pushing him toward his car and opened the door of the car...and closed ) bye...(and was going)
Manik :nandini..(nandu looked back)i now tum mere bare main hi soch rahi thi..
Nandini: stop it manik...now goo..mujhe sona hai...(and she ran ...)
Manik left and nandu rwent to room...and was blushing...talking to herself..
Nandini tujhe kya hogay... tu use itna nafrat karti thi and then ...you started liking him..(laying on the bed she was in his thought)
And then she slept...
Morning...
Tring ..tring..(alarm bell)
Nandini...: ahhh ..
Smiling and thinking abt yesterday... caching the pillow and was blushing... she walk out of the bed and took her towel and went to the washroom .. after 15 min came out of the washroom...with her wet hairs ...
Nandini: navya uth...
Navya got up and look at nandini ...
Navya: nandu...kya baat hai tu muskura rahi ho... ajjj..kya hua..kuch special..???/
Nandini: kuch nahi nayva ...(she hides her smile)kya special...??? kuch bhi nahi ..
Navya: ok ..and smiled...
Both ready for cllg and left hostel...
At cllg...
Gang was set up there in canteen ...nandu and navya came ...and join them ...hi guyzz...
how r you all...manan saw each other and smiled...
cabir : ok...then ab sab agaye to ... i am hungry...if any one want somthing say me ...
nandini : ha... cabir ek hot chocolate...
.every one was shocked
cabir: are u serious you want hot chocolate...tum to har waqt black coffee order karti thi... rite...??
nandini: haa lekin ajj mujhe hot chocolate chahiye...tujhe nahi lana hai to mat laaa..i will get it for myself...
cabir: nahi nahi nahi...main to bas aisa hi bol raha tha...acha lata hoon aur kuch guyzz..
every one said noo...yaar.
and the day goes by attending clases ...every one busy with their own schedules...manik and nandini did not got time to say HI to each other..manik waited a lot for nandu but she didn't came ..
at girls hostel ..
nandini was sad ...
nandini: ajj main manik ko HIII bhi nahi kaha...(and was thinking about her)
she looked at window thought of may be he would be there...but he was not there...waiting near the window nandu was sleepy..she tuned around and going to her bed...cars tyre sound came...she tuned it was manik... she came down ...
manik : ohoo mera wait karahi thi...nice
nandini : noo ..why shld i wait for you ...
manik : acha ...so how do you no i came...
nndini: main woo...(kya bolu main abb... in her mind)
manik: ok...( he smiled..and ignored it)... so...kya krrahi thi ...tum...
nandini: wo actually...i was going to sleep..
manik: ok then bye..
nandini: BYE...???? kuin ..
manik: haa. U told na..u was going to sleep...??(came near to her ears and said) kuin tum nahi chati main jaoo...
nandini: no...(by pushing him back) maine aise to nahi kaha...
manik : (he chached her waist pull towards him ...) to tum kya kahna chahti ho...
manik was irritating her ...to confess that she also don't want manik to go...
nandini: manik...mani nahi chati ki tum yaha se jaooo..(ayappa...ye main ne kya kehdiya)
and she moved back and..manik was like ...and both was laughing......they were talking and after an hour manik left and nandini in hostel ..she couldn't sleep she was thinking abt manik and the whole night
nandini: shayad..i like manik...(on her bed)
on other hand manik decided to confess his love to nandini...
next morning..nandini left hostel with navya...
In cllg ...
cabir: hii manik..kya hua..kal mai tujhe call kara tha ..kaha tha...
manik: kal ..woh main soo gaya tha...
cabir: so gaya..??? pllsss manik itna pathetic joke maine ajj tak nahi suna ..tu woh bhi so gaya... itni jaldi ...it was 9:00..
manik: haa kuin nahi mai nahi so sakta...
cabir: soo sakta ...lekin itni jaldi???
Manik : ha woh ..i was tired (by ignoring cabir ) acha dhruv kaha hai.
Cabir: i don't know...shayad alya ke sath...
Nandini and manik were coming from opposite sides an again crashed...
Cabir: pllsss guyzz...ab shuru mat hoo..
Nandini: sorry manik...
Cabir: shocked nandu tujhe kya hua har waqt nak pe ghussa hota tha ab ...SORRY..
Nandini: haa .. is time meri galti thi..jab meri galti rehti...i accept it...
Cabir: waaw...thts really good...(making weired face..)
Manik: stop it cabir...its ok nandini...
After ...some time...
Every one gathered at canteen as nandu said...every one shocked ki why nandu...called in canteen ..and she also said its urgent...everyone reached their ...
Cabir: kya hua nandu ..all ok..
Nandini: haa cabir..all ok..
Cabir: to tum ne announcement mein kuin kaha ki jaldi aooo ..it urgent..
Nandini: ruk na cabir bolti hoo sab ko ane do...by the way where is manik...???
Cabir: ata hi hunga ...u literally scared us..huh..
Manik came...tensed...
Manik: kya hua nandini ...what happened ??
Nandini: cool down manik...tumhe kya hua ..i am ok...bas kuch kehna tha sab ke samne soo i thought will say in front of every one...
Manik: ok... soot um baad maon bhi keh sakti thi..na... why did you call urgently ..
Nandini: manik...mujhe tum se kuch kehna hai...
Manik:kya??
She bend down on her knee l...(he was confused.).i want to say something ...in these days i have totally changed i feel like ...i don't know what is this feeling ...(jab se maine tumhe apne past ke bare mein kaha main badal si gayi hoon mujhe alag si feeling hori...i don't know..mai tumhe kuch kehna chahti ... hoon( she take a deep breath...)she stand up..aree...yaar i don't know how to say...mujhse ye sab nahi hota...ok...i will say directly...
I LOVE U MANIK ...(quickly and nervously) i now this soo fast but ..without knowing your feeling I said... coz i can't control the feeling...agar tumhe kuch prlm hai is relation ko age bada ne mein soo i don't have any hurry to be in this relation u can take your own time...
And the reaction of every one and specially ..THE GREAT MANIK MALHOTRA...he had gone into shock.. ...totally blank...
Cabir: yaar samne se invitation ara accept karle ( whispering in manik ear )
Manik didn't response...and cabir..manik ..manik...kya hua and then.. manik..haaa(came out of shock)
Manik: I LOVE U TOO NANDINI...(he was sooo happy)..he hugged nandini...
Cabir: wah yar before u say...usne he tuhjse keh diya...waise yeh sab kya hora...??? tum log ek dusre ka chera bhi nahi dekhna chahte the,,,and now this...waise yeh kab se chalra...
Manik: its long story yaar...
Navya: nandu ...tujhe kuch ho to nahi gaya...jis ladke ko monster kehti thi..ajj usi se apna pyaar ka izhaar kardiya...
Nandini: navya aisa kuch nahi hai...actually i wanted to say everything to you but sahi time nahi mila...sorry..(catching her ears)
navya: its ok dear ..mujhe to yahi khushi hai ki ..tum apne past ko bhula kar ..age bad gayi hoon...
nandini: ha..navya..i know..main apne past ko bhula chuki hoon...now i don't care...
cabir: ha...manik jo hai uske sath...
everyone was happy with their relation...that night they was having a late night party ..in manik resident...
and slowly..manik and nandini relation became strong...they completed their graduation...and met after 5 years..in manik and nandu marriage...
cabir: congrates yaar...(they hugged..both was happy to see each othe after a long time)..congrates nandini...
manan: thanks cabir..
cabir: acha yaar main tum log ko kisi se mila chata hon...meri girlfriend..navya...
nandini: navya...(they hugged) omg ..tum log relation mein ho..wow ..great news...
manik: congrates to you both...
and slowly...mukti, alya ,dhruv...came they was happy to see manan...they congrates them...and..were enjoying...manik mom did the kanyadan of nandini...she was a good mother in law...after every thing..they took a family pic..with frnds and relatives...
END OF THE STORY...
Hope you guys enjoyed it...plsss ignore my mistakes...plss do comment...what ever you think...say openly..i don't feel bad...
With that comments... at least i can improve myself...in shallah next time i will try my level best to get more attractive...more realistic...
This is for you ananya...hope you like it...
Thanks for reading...😳😳😳
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