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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is just a short piece on what I think Nandini feels at a given point of time. There will be a companion piece on how I think she overcomes it at some point. Its small but I hope its impactful.

She woke up in the middle of the afternoon, her hands clammy with sweat even as her heart beat faster, constricting her ribcage. She felt his hands on her, the feeling of dirtiness pervading all her senses, her mind. She stood in the shower every day, letting the water run, willing it to wash away her nightmares of his touch. She diligently scrubbed herself each time trying to remove any traces of his fingers on her, till one day she peeled the skin of her arm in her frenetic need to remove any sign of his assault on her. They said get on with your life. She tried. But every time she thought she got the better of it, she would wake up at night with her own hands clutching at her throat, desperately trying to breathe, her nails bitten to unrecognisable stems, the panic sucking her into a vortex of never-ending despair.



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Posted: 10 years ago
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Adhhii
Why don't you write often
This is soo good.👏

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Reserved.
To be unreserved once we get the companion piece.
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I desperately waiting for the day when you will write a complete OS...So I will be able to gush over and tell you how damn good of a hidden-lazy writer you are...But woh din jane kab aae ga...
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Originally posted by: A.Hajnal

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I desperately waiting for the day when you will write a complete OS...So I will be able to gush over and tell you how damn good of a hidden-lazy writer you are...But woh din jane kab aae ga...


I have written complete OSes here before😆😆😆 but yeah I know what you mean about lazy😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Adhi this s brilliant
i lovedd ittt😳
wil u continue this or something😳
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Originally posted by: Anapneo3003

Adhi this s brilliant

i lovedd ittt😳
wil u continue this or something😳


I want to write something on her recovery, I intended it to be that but then realised I cant write recovery without writing about her state. So long story short, I will continue😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I'm not in a mood to praise you. Like. At all.
Go and make biryani and send me and I'll see😳

Also, I'm waiting for the chocolates you never sent. Chu chu chu Adhi😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This was Beautiful Adhi ..
The emotions are so natural in this small part .. I can feel the suffocation of this innocent soul ...

Beautiful piece Dear ..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Short but crisp !!! Good one..do continue 👍🏼
Btw ...the chocolates ruby mentioned... do you intend to send them only to her???😭

In addition...the Biryani sounds interesting too 😉


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