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Posted: 10 years ago
Geet i've read ur poem ..
It was just Beautiful simply beautiful no other word ... took my heart away...
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Posted: 10 years ago
@Aps: its better, but still hurting..no swelling of thumb now at least :D but i must be careful!

@coochu: HEY!! U DID!! may i read???
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Posted: 10 years ago
@angel: 🤣 its sad but true!
And wow, thanks a lot! 😃
Glad u liked it!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: geet.a

@angel: 🤣 its sad but true!

And wow, thanks a lot! 😃
Glad u liked it!

i loved it😃...
ur injured how come??
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: geet.a

@Aps: its better, but still hurting..no swelling of thumb now at least :D but i must be careful!


@coochu: HEY!! U DID!! may i read???

hey! i hope ur doing fine now😊
i read ur poem. it was beautiful!😳
you really are an amazing writeršŸ‘
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: geet.a

DON'T SCOLD ME!
READ


jab shabdon se humari kahani
bunne ke liye dhaage kam padh jaayenge
inn aasuon ki roshni
ko dhaagon mein piroh kar
apne haathon pe
likh dena
kuch khwaab
jo poore hone ki aas mein
ek doosre se jhagad kar
do bacchon ki tarha
jo shararaton se thak kar
so jaate hain baahon mein baahe daale
tum bhi mujhe apni god mein sar rakhne dena
aur sunana woh gaane
jo tum kehte the tumne mere liye nahi likhe
aur bichana meri palkon pe woh ehsaas
jo tumne mere liye nahi mehsoos kiye kabhi
tumhari jhoothi baaton ko
sachh maan kar
tumhare pyaar mein
khud ko paa lenge ek baar phir
taaki jo sannaton ne ghera tha hume
ek baar phir
tumhare chhoone se
chhat jaayenge




This is the hindi one..Written by geet^^
I've translated it for SWANCY


When you feel threads are not enough for you to weave our story,
Just soak these threads into the ink of sunshine of your tears and write our destiny on your palms.
The way some of our dreams ,with the hope of getting fulfilled ,fight with each other like small kids and get tired only to sleep in each others' arms...You too cuddle me that way and sing those songs for me you say you haven't written for me.
Just lay down those feelings of yours on my lashes.. above my eyes ..those feelings you claim you never felt for me.
In your lies..I will find the truth..I will find myself..
So that the clouds of darkness surrounding me wil move away with your every touch..leaving behind the brightest sky for me.

P.S Correct me wherever I am wrong.


Edited by CooChi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: geet.a


@tonks: hello love! how are u?
Am okay, thumb still hurts, but managing...
ur free aaj? :P

I am good, you take care di :)
I should be studying, I have an exam tomorrow. 😃 But I am not studying so, yeah I am free šŸ˜†

I am so looking forward to Manik in shorts today, oh how I missed them, I find his legs so sexy šŸ˜†
Edited by nymphadoratonks - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
has anyone noticed this?
Nandini keeps on getting more beautiful with each episode😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: CooChi



This is the hindi one..Written by geet^^
I've translated it for SWANCY


When you feel threads are not enough for you to weave our story,
Just soak these threads into the ink of sunshine of your tears and write our destiny on your palms.
The way some of our dreams ,with the hope of getting fulfilled ,fight with each other like small kids and get tired only to sleep in each others' arms...You too cuddle me that way and sing those songs for me you say you haven't written for me.
Just lay down those feelings of yours on my lashes.. above my eyes ..those feelings you claim you never felt for me.
I your lies..I will find the truth..I will find myself..
So that the clouds darkness surrounding me wil move away with your every touch..leaving behind the brightest sky for me.

P.S Correct me wherever I am wrong.


SHIT COOCHIII This is just OUT OF THE WORLD ...
Like PERFECTLY PERFECT...
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Posted: 10 years ago
@geet - wow! Amazing poem...šŸ‘
@CooChi - d translation is too Gud! Mashallah!
Edited by roseash - 10 years ago

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