CaVya OS *Divergent* - Page 2

Originally posted by: -DamnedDrooler-

You know Radz I am a fan of your writing...always in awe not matter which couple it is..

You writing this one for me... i am touched ... thanks alot darling ❤️

Ansah🤗

u're finally here 😃

Now moving to the worm it is beautifully down, all the emotions so right on the place.

This one couple is very interesting and building a relationship not a easy task but u done do well..

Hope they go the way you are penning them down

I hope the same ...I really like these 2 !!

Awesome as always

More and more I am so eager to read more

I will..dont worry

Originally posted by: Aresha_uchiha

Wow awsum Os dear!!!

I m glad u liked it dear😃

I lov it wow cabir in a serious mood interesting!!!!

well given the drama all around them...I thought why not!!

lov d way u described it!!!

I am glad u did😳

Is there an another part!!!

nope I have stopped writing SS/FF coz I m plain lazy and forget to update on time ...making the readers go murderous on me😆😆

Pls do write

will write more OSes soon I promise😃

Love

aresha

Originally posted by: mkakkar93

omg a cavya os

I didnt realise there were so many CaVya fans until I read kiddo's OS...so Here I am ...welcome to the club😃

just by reading the name i knew that i wil be in love with the os 😳 and hats off really hats off to your writing skills 👏👏such a lovely poetry and symbolization of their lives .iy seems that the things which was in my heart u kept that in words and that too with so much beauty

awww...thamks for the kind words dear😳

love the poem looking forward to ur os please update soon i am just waiting restleesly to read 😳

thanks a lot for giving this amazing poen and i am luking forward to the os 😳😳

errr...this was the OS...I combined both Fiction and poetry into one...I am sorry abt. the length though..

I am not used to writing long stories..this might as well be called a Drabble but whatever

Originally posted by: Anapneo3003

hmm res🤔

wil edit this weekend hopefullyy😳

Originally posted by: NonComposMentis

Reserved.

Let me tell you how much I appreciate the dedication.

Thank you so much!

I'll edit as soon as would be possible for me, haan?

Originally posted by: NonComposMentis

Reserved.

Let me tell you how much I appreciate the dedication.

Thank you so much!

I'll edit as soon as would be possible for me, haan?

Okay. Unres-ing.

So, firstly, I really liked this! The poetry and prose combination works really well, and it suits you too! Loved the imagery! <3

I would, though like to point out something.

I think you should remove the hetero-homo comparison. Coz a) it's not a comparison. Heterosexual or homosexual or bisexual or asexual or whatever, you're still a human being, and there is nothing abnormal. It sounds offensive. b) Technically, wouldn't it make them stand on a common ground? Coz both Navya and Cabir are interested in men?

Other than that, though, it's nice!

Thank you so much for the dedication!

🤗