Manik's ILU spl: shades of his love. part 1 pg5

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Nandini_goyal

@Nandini_goyal

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

His Pov was so beautifully put
I am looking forward to future posts from you :)

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pavi_

@pavi_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Woo ow
The Memory Lane.
From where it all started, their journey towards Love.
Your explanation for his obsession and of making her his spot "he wanted her face to be the first thing he sees in the morning and the last thing in the evening. She came and did what he asked but something more. Something he had always wanted, to be taken care of like a child." This is beautiful.
The starting is brilliant, their meeting during egg scene , emotions of Manik is described perfectly.
Keep updating.

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rithanya

@rithanya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Amazing update
Bt who was those in the car
Continue soon

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TomBoy14

@TomBoy14

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

When will u update the next part!! Really liked ur story how u connect with the character is just awesome and if u can wud u give me the links of any other ff/ss/os you have written on Manan