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Nandini pulled into her driveway after a long day at the Research Center. She collected her belongings, locked her Mercedes and walked to the main door of their lavish 2 story bungalow. She smiled when she saw his sedan parked, on her way. As she made her way to the bedroom, she half expected the door to jerk open and him pulling her inside to kiss her. It was their routine, Manik would yank her in, and they'd kiss, those long, wet 10 minute embraces. But nothing of that sort happened. Manik was on tour, him being a rock star and he wouldn't be back for 3 more days. Manik had asked her to come along with him but she had been stubborn and fought with him that she had to complete her research paper and so she couldn't go. And now she missed Manik so much, she cursed her luck and went to sleep. On the second day since Manik's absence, she only had the conclusion of the paper left. She was sitting on the bed, with books spread all over it. It was becoming too much, she wanted to see him so bad. She was suddenly angry at herself and got all cranky. Then someone knocked on her door, she said "What is it?" quite rudely thinking it was her maid servant, she was usually sweet to her but you know, the crankiness. And the person outside the door said "Oh looks like someone's not in a good mood". There was no mistaking the voice, she jumped out of her bed, pulled the door open and attacked him. They kissed violently and Manik's hands were wild. He eyed the bed, saw it full of books and decided on the couch. He lifted her up, and laid her on the sofa as she ripped open his shirt and he started unbuttoning hers. Shirts and pants bounced off the side tables and both bodies entwined deep under the cushions. The sofa rocked and squeaked on the hardwood floor, but it was used to it all.
Fin.

I am not a writer at all. IF is making me do crazy stuff. I see everyone here writing such amazing stuff, I somehow wanted to get that feel :D
And the romance here is inspired from two novels actually, they are thrillers but the minimal romance they contained, I could only imagine MaNan. This is my take on the romance I read, not entirely the same but similar definitely. Like I mentioned, I am no writer so it doesn't come naturally to me. :| Hope you all like it :D

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Posted: 10 years ago
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ohhh myyy myyy...😳 😳 😳
bold nandu... 😉

loved wild manik... 😉

why dont you write more?? u write so well...

willing some more from u...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: musicialtie

ohhh myyy myyy...😳 😳 😳

bold nandu... 😉

loved wild manik... 😉

why dont you write more?? u write so well...

willing some more from u...

Thank you so much for liking it and for encouraging! I'll surely try to write another one :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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WOWWW ITS SOOO GUD
I LIKED IT FAB UPDATE
ITS AWESOME .PLZ CONTINUE SOON M WAITING
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Manik and Nandini can't stay away from each other for long. 😆
They're so in love
Bold Nandini is a treat😉 (For manik, of course)
Beautifully written!
Do write more!😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Natashaaa

WOWWW ITS SOOO GUD
I LIKED IT FAB UPDATE
ITS AWESOME .PLZ CONTINUE SOON M WAITING

My goodness, I just did not expect such praise, thank you so so much! And about continuing, sorry but I thought of this as only a drabble, can't think of a further story :/ Maybe you can help ;)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: kria1996

Manik and Nandini can't stay away from each other for long. 😆

They're so in love
Bold Nandini is a treat😉 (For manik, of course)
Beautifully written!
Do write more!😊

Oui Oui Oui! MaNan are so in love and I am so in love with them :D Thank you so much kria! I can't believe you all liked it, given it's my very first attempt! :')
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: nymphadoratonks


My goodness, I just did not expect such praise, thank you so so much! And about continuing, sorry but I thought of this as only a drabble, can't think of a further story :/ Maybe you can help ;)


if u want u can believe me if any prblm then pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I see a very bold Nandu.. 😃
Tonks ..you and your imagination! 😆

Keep writing such stuffs..! 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow it was a very nice drabble..
keep writing😉

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