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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Princess3618

any one want update or not..?


Yes plz update fast... plz pm me..waiting...
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Tonight i will update, till then wait 😉 😊
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update yar...eagerly waiting...frm 2 days.😉😉😉
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sooo guys your wait is over. here's your update.

PART 15

Everyone claps for them, and started praising them..

Neonika too clapped for them and silently she gestured to nandini to come out.

Nandini escape from there and reached to neonika.

Neonika: well done nandini. Kafi achha act kar leti ho tum.

Nandini: ma'am me kuch samjhi nahi.

Neonika: oh come on nandu, tum acche se janti ho k jo bhi tum kar rahi ho, its only for money and which we need.

Nandini: but ma'am...

She was interrupted by her: shhh nandini..(She came near to her ears) i know k tumhara boyfriend he, so this is only acting, right.?

She winked at her, and left.

Nandini was shocked hearing it.

Nandini looked at manik who was standing far away, and was smiling and laughing...

Nandini's POV

How can I do this to him.?

How can I forgot i have boyfriend.

I can't hurt manik.

I know i feels for him, but what about aditya..?

Kya karu.?

She was interrupted by mukti.

End of POV

Mukti: oye, kya soch rahi he.?

Nandini: aa wo kuchh nahi.

Mukti hold her hand and pull her to the classroom.

Mukti: tujhe kya lagta he nandu, mujhe kuch pata nahi chalega

Nandini: tum kya bol rahi ho mukti.?

Mukti: janti hu me tu manik ko pasand karne lagi he.

Nandini was hell shocked.

Nandini: kyaaa.??? Noo aisa kuch nahi he mukti.

Mukti: dekh nandu, life sabko dusra chance nahi deti, if u have don't let it go.

Nandini stays silent.

Mukti: janti hu tu uss jerk aditya ke bare me soch rahi he haina.?

Nandini nodded in yes

Mukti: dekh nandu, he is not right for u, u know that, aur manik is very nice, just try once

Nandini: mukti tu sahi keh rahi he, yaa i feel for manik, but phir wo kya sochta he mere bare me i don't know.

Mukti laughed

Mukti: uske muh pe likha hua he, he likes u from the very first day. Tu dekh nahi sakti.

Nandini blushed

Mukti: blush karna bandh kar.

They were interrupted by cabir.

Cabir: haa ye bahot blush karti he jab bhi manik ka naam lete he tab

Mukti: see cabir also agree.

Nandini blushed: guys aisa kuchh nahi he, but we have to figure out what manik think of me.

Cabir and mukti nodded in yes and they left.

Nandini was still in class room.

Nandini: aiyappa plz help me.

Me sahi kar rahi hu na.?

All gathered to the campus. And praising each other

Dhruv: buddy, it was super, ekdum magical.

Alia: ha manik seriously, ye song to bahot hi achha hua.

Cabir: are thoda credit hamari nandu ko bhi dedo.

Navya: ha hamari nadu ki awaz ne ise kitna superb bana diya.

Mukti: waise mujhse puchho to ye dono ki voice ne iss song ko hit ko hit kiya he. What sat nandu.?

Nandini blushed: ha wo lyrics bahot achhe the.

Manik: tumhare voice use achhe bana rahe the nandini.

They both are looking at each other like there is no one around.

Nandini: aisa nahi he tumhara music hi itna achha tha

Manik: par tumhari voice se achha nahi

Nandini: tumhari voice bhi bahot achhi he

Manik blushed and looked down.

Cabir coughed and they came out of their trance.

Cabir: kuchh zyada hi "Love" wala atmosphere ho gaya he na.?

Mukti: ha vaise in dono ne to atmosphere me pyar hi pyar fela diya.

Dhruv: LOVE IS IN THE AIR buddy.

They both blushed and nandini started leaving where mukti hold her hand.

Mukti: are kaha ja rahi he.?

Nandini: are bas arrangement dekh lu ek bar.

Cabir: oye nandu, wo maine dekh li he and juniors are doing there work so chill..

Mukti: haa aur LOVE ki baat nikli hi he to lets discuss.

Navya: matlab?

Mukti: matlab kon kya sochta he pyar ke bare me.? Like wise for me love is friendship, agar tum log achhe dost nahi ban sakte to i dont think u can fall in love.

Everyone shocked, but no nandini and cabir, coz they know how mukti is.

Navya: for me love is "Sagar", agar wo na hota to kuchh bhi nahi hota and she blushed.

Mukti: cabir what is love for u.?

Cabir: love is being not afraid, Freedom, say it loud to the world that you love someone,and you care.What is love for u dhruv.?

Dhruv: love is forgiveness. (He looked at alia, who also was looking at him) agar aap kisi se bahot pyar karte ho, to aap use uske sare flaws ke sath accept karte ho, aur uski sari galti bhi maaf karte ho.

Alia was touched listening to this.

Manik: what is love for u alia.

Alia stayed silent. Then she walked to dhruv.

Alia: kya jo abhi tumne kaha wo sab..

Dhruv put a finger on her lips: shhh, alia, I know maine tumhe bahut hurt kiya he, par i wanted to say ki I m really very sorry, jo bhi hua 3 years pehle, i know it is my mistake, but please forgive me.

Alia started crying: to phir itne saal tumne itna rude kyun behave kiya.?

Manik: kyunki he thought k usne tumhe bahut hurt kiya he.

Alia: ek baar puchke to dekhte, ek baar maafi mang ke to dekhte...

Dhruv: i m very sorry alia.

Alia: its ok dhruv..

While cabir whispers in nandini's ear: tumne abhi tak ye sab nahi bataya.

Nandini: ha cabir, i know, aaj bataungi.

Alia: thanks manik, for being always there for me and as well as for dhruv. Agar tum nahi hote to i dont know what i will i do.

Manik: its ok alia, we are best friends right.? To tum dono ko aise sad to nahi dekh sakta na.

Cabir: ab ye romeo juliet khatam ho gaya ho to, love pe discussion chal raha tha, abhi bhi do logo ka answer baki he, Manik and Nandini.

They both said in unison: love is trust...

They both looked at each other and smiled.

Mukti: wooo, good..!!! Par how.?

Manik: agar aap dono k bich me love he par trust nahi, to it is waste...

Nandini interrupted: kyunki agar trust nahi waha pyar nahi. Dono ke bich me itna trust hona chahiye k life me kuch bhi ho jaye na they never get separated, never ever, they are unbreakable.

Everybody was looking at her, how deep meaning she found of LOVE.

Cabir: hmmm so "LOVE" is Trust, Forgiveness, Friendship, and Freedom. Wohoo means love is...

Manik looking at nandini: love is everuthing...

They were sharing an eye lock; both are smiling, remembering all the moments.

Mukti: ahem ahem, kuchh log please ye look look bad me khelna.

They were looked down.

Manik: guys i think now i leave I have to go to the office, so catch u later. Dhruv r coming or..

Dhruv: buddy tu ja, i m here, help them out.

Manik: ok guys see u (he looked at nandini)

Everybody nodded and manik started to leave, suddenly nandini called his name.

Nandini: manik..

Manik: haaa... (he turned around)

Everybody got shocked

Nandini: woo mujhe aaj ghar jaldi jana he to can u please drop me home.?

Everybody was stood there smiling.

Manik: ha come.

They left silently.

Manik opened the door of the car for her.

Nandini: thank you (smiling)

Manik closed the door, sit on the driving seat: anytime.

He started the car.

Manik: vaise aaj tumne bahut achha gaya, your voice is perfect for that song.

Nandini: thanks. But me nahi gaa pati agar tum nahi hote.

Manik looked at her smiled, she just blushed and looked down.

Manik: tum itna blush kyun kar rahi ho.?

Nandini: woo kuchh nahi... manik idhar se right.

Manik: are nandini, your house is on left.

Nandini: i don't want to go home, plz right lo..

Manik got confused but he did that, whole time nandini was giving instruction to manik left right le right.

Finally they reach.

Manik irritated: nandini what is this, kabse left right, kya kaha le ke...

He stepped out of the car and saw the beautiful place, where he can see the entire city.

Manik just amazed to see that.

Manik was just looking at the view, and nandini was looking at manik.

Manik happily: woow nandini, its really beautiful.

Nandini looking at him: yess, it is really beautiful.

Manik looked at nandini: but ham yaha kyun aaye he.?

Nandini pointed to something, manik looked at it, and surprised and mezmerised seeing that.

It was sunset, from the city it looked soo good, so beautiful, little bit of lightness, and the darkness too.

Manik: woooww... i never seen that.

Nandini: hmmm

She was just looking at manik, who is smiling like a kid, like a kid who gets his favourite chocolate.

Nandini: manik...

Manik still looking at sunset: hmmm...

Manik: tumhari smile bahut achhi he, hamesha aise hi smile karte raho.

Manik turned to her and smiled and again started watching sunset.

They both silently watched it, now its dark, all dark, but there is shine of starts and moon.

Manik lays on the bonnet of the car, nandini too lay down there.

They both were looking at the stars.

Manik: tumhe pata he nandini, i love stars, i love their shine.

Nandini: even i too love stars.

Manik looked at her she was smiling at him.

Manik: you are special nandini.

Nandini's heart started beating fast.

He came close to her, and hugged her. She too hugged him back.

A tear escape from nandini's eye.

Manik noticed it, he broke the hug.

Manik: are kyun ro rahi ho, did i hurt u.?

Nandini: tum mujhe kabhi hurt nahi kar sakte ho manik.

Manik: vaise thank you for this nandini, itni peace mujhe yaha mili he, thank you so much.

Nandini got up from the bonnate: tumhari smile ke liye kuchh bhi manik.

Manik too got up from the bonnate, pull her close, put her hair behing her ears.

Manik: kyun, kyun he itni special meri smile.?

Nandini didn't reply anything

He pull her more close

Manik: tell me nandini.

Nandini: because...

Manik went little bit close: because...

Nandini: because, u are a special friend manik.

Listening "Friend" word he left her. He understood that, she wants to go little slow.

Manik: hmmm friend.

Nandini mischievoly: haa to tumhe kya laga...?

Manik just smiled: nothing, ab ghar chale ya puri rat apne "special friend" ke sath guzarni he.?

Nandini nodded in noo

They both sit in the car and went to nandu's house to drop her, then after he went to the office, for pending work.

He knew about his responcibilities towards the company. He worked there about 3 hours, its 10 in the night, he went to his house.

As he entered the house, he found some guests are there. His mom was talking to them, he didn't looked at them, but started going upstairs.

When suddenly nupur calls his name, he turn around and found nandini and her mother, he was hell shocked..

Shaily: are tumne mujhe bataya nahi tum aaj meri dost se mile.

Manik: wo mom, i was busy to me bhul gaya and...

Nandini interrupted: aunty, mujhe to ghar 8 baje hi drop kiya tha, abhi kyun aa raha he, kaha tha puchiye na...

Nupur smiled at him.

Manik: wo office gaya tha mom, pending work.

At that time alok came from studyroom.

Alok: manik beta itna late..?

Manik: haa dad wo sunah se ek bhi bar office nahi gaya tha, so socha ke jake aau, phir itna kam nikla ke late ho gaya, sorry.

Alok looked at him with proud: I m proud of you beta.

And suddenly hugs him. Manik too hugged him back.

Shaily: are ye sab chodo, tum jaldi change karlo, aaj nandini aur uski mom hamare sath dinner karenge, tumhari hi wait kar rahe the kabse.

Nupur: ha bhai, aap nandini ko wait kyun karava rahe he.?

Manik hit her playfully.

Manik was hell tired: mom, actually i m very sorry, i love to have dinner with them, but i m very tired, i just want to crash some where, so u guys carry on.

And straight he went upstairs.

Nandini feels sad.

They all led to dining table, they sat there.

Nupur: but mom bhai bhukhe soyenge...

Shaily: ha beta ek kam karo me tumhe plate deti hu deke aao.

Nupur take the plate and left.

Nandini stood up from there and escape, went to nupur.

Nandini: nupur...

Nupur: are nandini, tum.

Nandini: aaa tum betho na khane k liye, me deke aati hu plate.

Nupur understood and gave the plate to her.

Nandini went to his room, she knocked on the door, but no one replied so she just peeped in the room, there was no one.

She got in the room. Put the plate on the side table, and started remember the moments she spend in that room.

Manik came out of washroom and saw nandini in his room, he smiled and stand just behind her.

Manik: wassup...

Nandini got scared and moved from there: tum.? Tum yaha kya kar rahe ho.?

Manik: ohh hello, this is my room, ye sawal mujhe tumse puchna chahiye. Tum yaha kya kar rahi ho.?

Nandini: wooo wooo tumhe khane ki plate dene aayi thi.

Manik: achha...

Nandini: haaa.

Manik: thank you.

Nandini just stood there and asked: waise tum sach me office gaye the.?

Manik understood that, she is insecure, so he decided to have fun: aaa nooo...

Nandini: to kaha gaye the.?

Manik: aaa tumhe bataunga pr promise tum kisi se nahi kahogi.

Nandini: haa ha promise, bataona.

Manik: me naa usase milne gaya tha.

Nandini carelessly: usase kisase manik.?

Manik: usase, are ek ladka rat ko kisase milne jata he.?

Nandini got shocked and jealous too: kisase?

Manik: you are so dumb nandini

Nandini: manik tum kisi ladki se milne gaye the.?

Manik pull her close to him: kyun me kisi ladki se milne jau to tumhe problem he kya.?

Nandini trying to free herself: noo mujhe kya.

Manik: really.?

Nandini agrily: yess really, chhodo manik, please, leave me.

Manik again pull her close: shhh..., kisi se milne nahi gaya tha, sachem office gaya tha, tumse college me bhi kaha tha k office me kaam he, phir ham waha gaye to isiliye.

Nandini looked at him: to phir wahi pe bolna chahiye than a manik, hum waha nahi jate.

He was still holding her: nandini, aisa nahi he ki tumhari wajah se me late hua hu, or hum pehli baar kahi akele gaye me tumhe naa kaise bol sakta tha...

Nandini blushed: manik leave me...

Manik leave her.

Nandini started running from there, she stopped at the door: khana kha lena, bhukhe mat sona.

And she ran out, manik stood there smiling like an idiot.

He ate his food and lay on his bed and smiled how his day spent today

Manik: perfect...



do comment please...😳😃 soo sorry for the typing errors...😒

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Posted: 10 years ago
loved it
aditya ka exit kab hoga
But ut was so cute update
Awsm update
Cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice but I am feeling sad for manik as he doesn't know the truth about nandani having a boyfriend its so unfair but he will gets to know the truth he will be hurt she should tell the truth before anyone else do
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Posted: 10 years ago
this was so good
i will sound crazy but i want adi back
i want him to treat nandu badly and maniks reaction
and ya its just a suggestion dear
do not feel offended😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
So sweet I don't Manik trust to get broken
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Posted: 10 years ago
so sweet yar..but pls make it more...thoda sa padh kr mann nh bharta yar..so update its nxt part soon..thanks for pm...pls pm me always nd yes u r a great writer dear...👏👏👏
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It was just perfect and thanks for.the.pm dear waiting for the next update nce story line...
And thanks for the pm and next aalso do.pm me ...

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