manan new journey part1 coninue page 6 updated tum hi ho

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Continue manik daughter asked him what is love Dada manikTorah


ies how can I explain u my angel it can't be expressed in words it it's just a feeling... I tell u some or the other day .. I tell u about it...
Angel: no Dada I want to hear please... Yr angel is ordering you dad...
Manik: ok my anna what do u want to know
Love is a feeling like i love u the most
Angel: oh dad toh kya aap inse pyar karte ho(nandu) mere tarah... Yes
Toh aap inke barre me batao me god se pray karungi aur woh uhne hamare pass bhejdenge
Manik : kash aisa hota my Anna
Dad inke bare me Kuch aur batao
Aacha tell me aap firstly inse kaha mile
Manik: hmmm.when I helped her fireflies dad
Yeh fireflies Kya hoti hai
Manik explained her daughter in quite nandu style pata hai these are tiny creatures when ur true love is around u its shines like a star...
Anna : aur bata inke barre me she is soon pretty
Inko Kya aacha lagta tha
Manik: she was filled with positivity beautiful heart spoke everything without any hesitation.. She was life of mine aacha baba ab aur Kuch jaanna hai merit daadi Maa...
Anna : woh abhi kaha hai
Manik: pasta nhi
Next day...
Anna room she was holding nandu photo in his hand and was staring at her and said I love u very much mom
Manik was standing outside the room and was listening to Anna his eyes filled with tears he said listen nandini Anna calls u mom...
Anna : aa jaha pe bhi. Ho me aapko papa se jarur milwaungi promise
Phir hum sab sath rahenge... Happily ever after... Mere sab friends ki tarah mere pass world ki best mom hogi
Kaise lagi guys... Whether I should continue or not
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Posted: 10 years ago
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amazing...loved it..pls continue soon...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Guys... Please comment so that I can make it more interesting.. For those who liked it pls share your views very faithfully whether u liked it or not even if u don't like then also suggests something your views are required ... Thanks for support everyone.. And for warm welcome
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice
Please clear that manik is married or adopted a child
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Posted: 10 years ago
#5
its nice story..pls do continue..
in nxt part hope to see nandini's manglore part
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Good
I have a advice that plz write the next chapter in this topic it will be easy for the readers (it's just an advice)
And loved this part
Cont soon
Edited by Dhariya_ - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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good 1...👍🏼ya plz continue here only...nd is manik married?nd how old is anna...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Continue part 1 pg 3
Manik was getting ready to go for the office,he came to the breakfast tableeverything nna calls him
Anna: Dada aaj me apko breakfast khilaungi...
Manik: OK my baby...
Manik office scene he was sitting in his cabin and suddenly he opened the drawer and saw dhruv and his photo
(FLASHBACK) 8-9 yrs ago the shocking twist that changed everyone life forever which force our manik to leave Mum. i
Dhruv and alya are married and alya is pregnant...
Scene
Dhruv is out of town
Alta calls manik that it's an emergency she needs doctor manik told her to calm down.. She told that she had already called the ambulance... Manik told her to go he Will be there in hospital
Manik was driving his car and trying to call dhruv ,he picked up manik call and manik told him every thing he rushed out from there... He was drivinf so fast that he met with a car accident...
Hospital scene
Manik : where is alya
Receptionist told him that doctors have taken her in operation theatre... He goes there the doctots came out carrying a baby girl in his hand and congratulate manik,he ask can he go and meet Alya doctor said yes
Manik : congrats alia you are mom now I have called shrub he will be here and suddenly alia started to have pain manik called the doctor the declared her dead manik was in shock he was crying he goes out of the room he saw a large crowd there and goes there and sees dhruv he was broken the doctor said that he is in critical condition we need to do something otherwise no. Chance
Dhruv : manik iska khayal rakhna and sorry... And he was over there ... Manik was totally broken he fell. Down over there he was carrying baby in his hand her parents are not in this country anymore...
Manik : he decided to keep the baby and loved her the most...this was the twist that aana is daughter of dhrulya...
Present(in his cabin)
Manik : he has not forgiven himself for this incident



Scene 3 (In Mangalore)
Nandu get up and take bath and everything... He goes in the room to wake up rishab he gets up ...
Our nandu in kitchen preparing pizza (with olive maniks favor) he still remember him in his heart aaj bhi dil se woh yaddein nhi gaye ... Woh din aaj bhi mujhe yaad hai and tears wept in her eyes
How is it will continue naandu Mangalore part
Do u guys... Like it the twist that Anna is dhruv and alya daughter
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Please share your views about the twist that Anna is dhruv and Alta daughter...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow
so Anna is dhrulya daughter that's a nice twist and now I am waiting for the twist which seperated manan
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