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Posted: 10 years ago
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9TH PART

DAY OUT IN UDAIPUR!!!

I woke up with the sun rays falling on me...i LOOKED AT MY MOBILE AND FOND THAT IT'S 5 AM ONLY...I was not feeling sleepy so i decided to go to MAUSI but when I came out I fond corridor very silent..."everyone must be sleeping"I thought to myself...I decided to go for jogging..I dressed up myself into my white t-shirt and track pant..The ground around the palace was really big I started jogging and was quite tired I took the bottle from nearby centre and while drinking I saw something really scary...from which I wanted to escape!!!seriously!?How can he be here??I spitted water


and he saw me too!!

"OH!OH!look what a coincidence...kahin tum mera piccha to nai kar rhi!"He was manik malhotra he said these words while coming closer to me...

"Wait!?No...how can u be here my bhai said this by KingCoupon">HOTEL is fully booked for his marriage?How?"I asked him with questioning eyes!

"What do u mean I m here to attend my sister's wedding..wait are u someone related to this marriage"He said with a questioning brown eyes

"Yeah my brother ARMAN have marriage here"

"OMG!!Again a big co-incidence!...believe me its gonna be fun" he said with a smirk

"No no fun"I said as i was no mood of handling him!

I started jogging again actually running to avoid him but he was following me...what happening!?why is he following me!?

"Wait!!stop running we need to talk"

"what!?what talk...we don need to talk...and i m not running u r walking slowly"I said with naughty voice

"Aha.."he said while catching my arms and turning around..."so lets race?"he said with wink

"Okahe!!"I said

And we decided a round of by KingCoupon">HOTEL parallel to boundary and we started ...and as usual I won

"U won"he said while taking long breathe

"HAHA...that was must...i was athelet champion in usa in my school"

"What USA!?"

"Yeah!!Okahe bye" I was talking to him in friendly manner??yeh...because he was behaving too

Again he catched me again

"Wait!!what's ur programme for today!!"He said with really friendly manner

But i was not in mood of sharing anything with him

So i avoided by telling

"NOTHING"

"seriously?tell na"

I was tired so I entered garden and sat on the bench with water bottle

"Actually! I wan to be a traveler so today there is no function so I m leaving for sight seeing"

"Alone!?"He said with curiosity...as if he want to come

"Yeah!actually everyone is going for shopping and i have done that in Mumbai itself!"

"Yeah!!I made u did that"he said with giggle

I stared him

"Actually I too want to go for sight seeing...Okahe so i m coming...there everyone is busy in some kind of puja..so be ready at 10"

He left by saying that...he is real monster he shd have asked me but he was ordering me...seriously

I went upstairs and Mausi called me in her room

Mausi"Sun where r u going?"

"VO i thought of traveling here...maine mom ke journal me padha tha!"I said with smile

After listeneing my mom's name everyone use to give me any permission

"Yeah!thk hain but isse le...yahi pehnna"She handed me some clothes..I was in mood of wearing my favorite frock with scarf but...I saw it was long skirt I made yakk face

"Mausi..."She interepted in betwwen"No u have to wear this...vaise bhi u r going alone..new place atleast wear this even ur mom loved these kind of dresses"

"Okahe!"

I said while exiting from room..I entered mine and after bath changed myself into it..I straightened my hair and putted my jhumkas..I picked up mine sling bag with my goggles and mobile...I was all set...I thought of leaving him and go alone but I heard my mobile ringing and fond his no.

I picked

"Yeah!!come out i m waiting with car"and he switched his the call


I went down and saw him standing by the car...He saw me and started checking me out

"Listen we r not going by the car"

He was not listening me I repeated

"stop checking me out I said we r not leaving in the car!"

And he came out of his trance..."Why the hell u r wearing this indian wear...u look good in hot pants"he murmered with wink

I was willing to kill him "What!?"

"...Nothing but not car then!?"he said in confused manner

SHE WAS LOOKING SO GOOD IN THAT INDIAN WEAR!!I never saw someone soo beautiful in indian wear

"We have legs we can go with the help of that"i said...actually i read in mom's journal that udaipur can be explored in the better way if we walk!!!And we can get little creative of people I wanted to go through everything as mom's suggestion...We started walking and then I saw rickshaw I hired it...well it was 3rd time I was travelling on rickshaw...It was fun...well It was looking like I was ragging manik..haha his face!!...Then I was quite hungry and wanted to have UDAIPUR kind breakfast..I mean I read in mom's journal which is now in my TABLET..that udaipur gives a kind of thali really very tasty ...I asked rickshaw wale bhaiya that drop us where we can get really very famous thali and he dropped us somewhere named AMBRAI...we entered it was not AC hall but many people were there...Manik was looking them like anything..

"COME" I said him

And he followed me... we got vacant place and waiter came

"MADAM kya cahiye..ye rha menu...vaise hamare yahan COUPLE special dish hain jisme poha ke sath extra breakfast milta hain..."He said while staring me and manik

I was like what the hell!?couple?me and MANIK??

"Chup!!"i said

and manik was giggling

Then I took my tablet and fond mom ate Natraj Thali..I ordered

"Mujhe bread with omelet"Manik said

"Bhaiya ye vegetarian restaurant hain"waiter said with a smile

"What?"he said with furious voice

"Okahe 2 plate Natraj thali"i ordered one for him too

"What i never ate these kind of thing and will not be eating"He said

"maine bhi kabhi nai khaya...try it maybe it will be good"I said

And after sometime they bought thali...I opened my tablet and got the instruction how to try it and what to try first...from the journal written by mom

Okahe so i took the chapati and tried each and every vegetable and stuffs present in the each kaatora..there were 7 katora there..It was spicy and yummy too

I don know how he dint ate that..he jut took a bite..then we started moving to city palace and then lake pichola...I saw a western restaurant near and saw manik's face he was struggling with the sun...i was doing all these first time too but he was overreacting

"U have money?"I asked him

"yeah! Why?"he asked

"there is western restaurant go and have ur breakfast there...i am shopping here"i said him pointing at the restaurant and went for nearby market

She is caring...but i m hungry now

We went through different places and even I buyed Diamond rings for both bride and groom as per dad's instruction and ordered chocolate boque from a shop to be delivered on the same day.finally it was 6 and we decided to leave..but one thing was left mom mentioned abt almond milk but seeing manik frustated i decided to leave...

"u r taking revenge ri8"he said with his frustated voice when i asked him to walk with me..

"ya i think but this won be enough for that"i said with smile then i took a cab while going i saw a man i stopped the car and saw a man holding two glasses with hot milk and was dancing with them...

"now what!"manik said with furious look...i went out and bought a glass for him to i gave him to drink

"Yakk!!"he said

"Look drink it.."I said

after drinking them we started leaving

"How do u know abt all these place..i mean u said u r from USA..research?"He asked me

"No my mom use to write journal for me so that i shd not struggle for finding places..so from that"I said with smile and gave him tablet in which there was mom's journal epages

"It's beautiful...ab to aunty se milna padega" He said...I dint answered and just gave him a smile!

I was really tired i never struggled this much for just travelling!!

And finally we reached hotel...aha actually i dint fond him monster today..but he can be !!i smiled and said him goodbye...but behcara he was not in mood of smile...super tired!!

After changing myself into shorts and loose tshirt I went to bhai's room as my cousins and bhai's friend was there everyone was sitting here there but the bed was vacaant...bhai wastrying his dresses!I went and sat on the bed crossing my legs and started using mobile...and then heared bhai recieving someone's call

HELLO!!Yeah!!okahe no problem

Wing 3 room no.305 yeah!

Send them..haan haan!!

And then someone opened the door

"SO u all here..."Bhai invited them

I looked up and fond someunknown faces with one known face..MANIK!!Oops not again

Everyone sat there..I avoided him but somehow i felt him staring me...Then bhai ordered icecream..when everyone was having I decided to leave as I stood I fond Manik's icecream fall on his t-shirt!

"Oops"he said"can i get the way to the washroom" He asked

"Ya...there"Bhai pointed towards toilet..as someone was there so manik returned...bhai saw me and aid

"CHOTTU!! Tera room busy hain?"

"No bhai!"

"Okahe take him..he will get fresh!"Bhai ordered me

Chottu he called me chottu in front of Manik

I asked him to follow

"CHOTTU nice name..."I ignored him

I showed him washroom...and sat on the bed with my mobile

He cameout and asked"Which mobile?" and because of my bag's rope he fall on my bed just above me..GOD!!

I stared his eyes..I could fell his hot breathe...I closed my eyes to fell it in better way!!What are u doing Nandini are u mad!I thought and opened my eyes...and again his intense brown moist eyes caught my attention...I was so much in him that was not able to fell his weight on me..again i came out of trance and said with low voice"Manik.."And pushed him little

He too came out of trance and stood..then he gave his hand for help..I took it and stood...there was awkward silence in the room..to avoid it i spoke

"Iphone 6"i said

"What!?" he said with weired voice

"my mobile"

"Ooh"he said

Then after some gossips in bhai's roo...i went to my room and climbed my bed and went to sweet sleep




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Edited by fireflies_love - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#72
Aww.. Lovely
Manan's day out..
Superb cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#73
Awesome updates. Thanks for the pm. Waiting for the next one.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#74
Hilarious update.😆 You made me crack with laughter. Give a fun filled next part too.
Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome update...loved it...pls continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#76
GUYS I HAVE INSTAGRAM ACCOUNT!!!
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DO ADD ME I MEAN FOLLOW ME IF POSSIBLE AND WRITE UR USERNAME IN COMMENTS SO THAT I CAN DO THE SAME...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#77
Awesome update...
Loved it...
Waiting for next part...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#78
Wonderful update
Manan went together for sight seeing...
Natraj thali..haha manik ordering omelet
Superbbb
Liked it
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Posted: 10 years ago
#79

10TH PART

WE WERE CLOSE!!

Next day went on with lots of shopping and some fun together

And here comes HALDI DAY!!

As per mausi's instructions i wore my new white Salwar Kameez!!as she said it is shadi vali holi!!


It was 11am and we were ready for playing that holi and waiting for the haldi to arrive from Girl's side..and then i saw manik in the white kurta coming with haldi...Mausi went and took the haldi..after one by one everyone started putting haldi on bhai's cheek...I was staring manik who was really looking hot in that dress and fond his eyeball finding someone..and then he looked at me as if he was finding me...We had an eyelock..and then Mausi called me"Nandu..."which helped me to break the eyelock

"Haan"i said

"Ye le ab ur turn" mausi said by handing over haldi pot to me

"Yeah!!my turn get ready bhai!!"I said with my devil smile

Before i could put them to his cheeks he stood and took the pot "Ur turn!!haha mujhe haldi se paint karegi"he said returning me a devil smile

I started running and he was after me and he cought me putting haldi all over my face..all were laughing

<MANIK'sPOV>

<haha nandini turned yellow..this is aww moment i never saw someone so cute>

We had little fight like little children...

then mausi came to me and handed me a haldi pot and said "go to bhabhi an give her...go with manik he will show u the way!!" I gave him a smile and sighed to leave..we were at 6th floor..we called elevator..

and then he murmered something to me

"You coloured urself yellow..but u r looking good"

"Thnku"i said

We entered the lift i was standing with the pot...there was silence mode there..and suddenly a moment occured in the lift and it stopped..suddenly the lights went off...

"Manik are u there?"I said

I was quite scared and felling suffocated in the packed area and then light came back but the elevator was still not working..

There was really an awkward scenario..and then i fond manik coming closer to me..And i started moving back..I was at the end of the elevator..I was pilled to it..he was too close to me. He started circling his firm thumbs on my nourished, smooth skin...he looked into my eyes with so much intensity that I felt like I would collapse.. My heart beat raised and breathing inched high.i could smell his body,i could feel his hot breathe...I was flowing with his brown sexy eyes...and then was intrupted from the flowing by a touch which i felt on my hand..i looked down and fond manik raising his hands from my palm to arms..his touch was smooth i was kind of loving it."U have a soft skin"he said with hasty voice..which caught my attention again.but then the scanerio of 10years back appeared to me I started sweating and pushed manik a little...and tried avoiding eyecontact but again he holded me from the waist and pulled me near him...we were really close...I was feeling his hot brethe with great smell on my cheeks..and then his eyes landed on lips...and then again same scanerion..this time i pushed him hard...And said"please don touch me"with sob

It was first time i was loving someone's touch and she was not loving..whats wrong with hre..i have to findout

"Not after that...no i don want"and then i started sobbing after some seconds lift started and i handed over manik the haldi and ran out sobbing...

The whole day i avoided him...somehow..but honestly if that scenario wouldnt have came infront of my eyes i would have been his today..

i loved the way he use to see me..I loved the way he use to speak my name..i started loving...WAIT nandini what are u thinking..he is the same guy who was playing with ur brother's life..u can't fall for him...whole night I was going through tis thought!

<MANIK's POV>

no Today whatever happened between us was like something very dreamy...I was willing to touch her body ...i was willing to make her breathe higher as usual...but what made her said that that she don like my touch...she don want me to touch

...Nandini murthy ...do u know what?If i thought of finding out what is the reason behind this I will find..trust me!!

I don know what was happening with me but whenever i touch her whenever i feel her it makes me happy




PRECAP

MANIK NANDINI IN TERRACE
NANDINI TELLING WHOLE STORY BEHIND HER ACT
NANDINI SOBBING


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Edited by fireflies_love - 10 years ago
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#80
Yeah...!! I m First...🥳
Superb Update...
I m loving ur writing sense...
Waiting for next long part...
Please Update soon...
Edited by PrettyAaShu - 10 years ago

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