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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing story , pls update fast
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Posted: 10 years ago
i loved satish part...the most...
and navya and cabir are awesome..
i even liked alya and dhruv part
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Beautiful wow!!!!
lovely kya manan scene hai@@!
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Posted: 10 years ago
So sweet update...!! I loved it..!!
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Chapter 9


All are ready.


Nandini : I will take babies stuffs.


Mukti gives her a bag.


Mukti : I put all babies things I mean, bottle, milk powder, pampers...

All are shocked, to see Mukti so caring.


Mukti : Why you look at me like that?


Nandini : When U will become mom, Mukti? Did u think about it Abhi?


Mukti : Actually, I have to say something!


Kabir: What?


Mukti : I don't have my... You know girls maybe it's for a good news.


Everyone : Wooow really!!!!


Abhi hugging her : Why you don't tell me anything?


Mukti : Because it's recent and I don't know how to tell u?


Abhi looks at her and pecks on her forehead.


Navya : Samalo don't forget children are here.


Mukti smiles to them.


Manik : I am so happy, when I said last year you are my sister I don't say it just for words. So know I will have to a nephew.


Abhi : Hey Manik I don't want a boy but a girl seems to Mukti.


Mukti : Ohhh guys it's not confirmed still now so calm down.


Nandini : But I am sure it will be positive.


Manik : So let's go.


Mukti takes Manan, Aliya holds Nadira and Nandini is with Satish.


All are in car, Satish is in back with Nandini while Manik is driving.


Manik : Hey Satish u steal my wife.


Satish : Because she loves me more.


Manik : No way it's me.


Satish : Isn't the truth that you love me more that ur husband.

Nandini : Of course I love more Satish any doubt.


Satish is so happy that he kisses Nandini's cheek.


Satish : U loose and I win.


Manik : so I will divorce her u marry her.


Satish : Ok Manik


Manik : What???? Never she is my life yaar.


Nandini : Ok boys stop it I love you both, and Satish u will find in some years a pretty girl for you.


She hugs him.


While Manik smiling to them.


They come come the the engagement venue where it's all decorated in white and red. Someone comes and tends a rose to Kabir.


Navya looks at the girl and him.


Kabir: Dekho it's not what you think Navya. And u how u can give me a rose in front of my wife.


Girl : Excuse I just tend to you for that you offer to ur girl.


All laugh.


Kabir blushing tends the rose to Navya, she took it. But Aliya holds the rose.


Aliya : U are a cupid for other so u have to propose Navya in a most romantic way at least.


Kabir : What???


Mukti : Yes she deserves it.


They took Navya and Kabir is sad.


Kabir : Help me.


Manik : What Kabiraaa need help for these things I don't think so.


Kabir : What yaar!!!!


Manik : Ok ok simply ask her hand. Tell me first what is she for you?


KAbir : What question is it? She is Madhubala. Because of her I have our Satish. She cares for me.


Manik : Express ur feel with a song.


Kabir : U mean I have to sing for her.


Abhi : Yes u are good in music.


Kabir smiles : Actually you are right. Manik there is a guitar with the group so play for me.

Manik : Ok


Kabir takes a mike : Mukti mam can take my future wife to the stage?


All come.


Mukti : Kamini what mam and all?


Abhi : Sssh come with me.


All light turn off but all can see Kavya.


Kabir starts to sing :


When you love someone, you'll do anything

You'll do all the crazy things that you can't explain

You'll shoot the moon, put out the sun

When you love someone


You'll deny the truth, believe a lie

There'll be times that you'll believe, that you can really fly

But your lonely nights have just begun

When you love someone


When you love someone, you'll feel it deep inside

And nothin' else can ever change your mind

When you want someone, when you need someone

When you love someone


When you love someone, you'll sacrifice

You'd give it everything you got and you won't think twice

You'd risk it all, no matter what may come

When you love someone


You'll shoot the moon, put out the sun

When you love someone


Navya has tears.


Navya : I am very happy that my Satish has my best friend as daddy. Both of us are lucky to have you.


Satish is playing and throw some juice on some lady.


Lady : What have u done????


She hurts Satish.


Navya runs to him following by the others.


She hugs Satish.


Lady : This idiot spoilt my saree.


Navya crying : Tameez se baat kariyai app. He is a child.


Kabir and Navya's mothers come to them.


Lady : Why u don't another girl for our Kabir more beautiful and still virgin.


Kabir anger : Stop what nonsense are u talking? He is my son and she is my wife. So shut up.


Kabir's mom : Please Kabir calm down.


Kabir : No maa u see how she talked about Navya and Satish? So everyone hear us, after now they will be my world and no one can insult them. I hope I am clear. And u I never want to see ur face again. Samji.


He hugs navya crying.


Manik : Take her from here.


Kabir : No Nandini I will handle her.


He makes her sit on the chair, still hugging her.


Kabir : Wipe your tears.


Navya snobs.


Kabir : Please mere liye. It's our day don't spoil it because of them.


Kabir mom comes to them with Satish : Yes Navya leave them, if they can accept my daughter and

my grandchildren I don't need them.


Navya hugs her : Thank you.


Kabir : Thanks to you to accept my Kabir while you know his truth.


All dance together. Mukbhi, Manan, Dhrulya, Kavya and Satish with his grandmothers.



Next morning all are getting ready.


Nandini is fixing her sarre when Manik enter.


Nandini : Manik help me with this pin.


He sees his wife with a black net saree. She is wearing a backless blouse.


He is speechlees. He comes to her. He moves her hair and holds the pin and her hand.


Manik puts the pin.


He bites her neck.


He takes the neckless and place on her neck.


He kisses her forehead.


She puts her hands on his chest.


Someone knocks.


Nandini : We are coming.


Manik : You are too sexy today.


Nandini shy : Thank you.


He crossed his finger with her. And they are going out.


Nandini holds her princess who is so wearing a pink dress and Manik takes Manik who is in small shevrani.


Mukti : Ufff you are amazing.


Nandini : Thanks


Mukti : I don't mean you but the babies.


Nandini : Oh.



Navya's mom : Kabir's mom waiting for us.


They leave for the registar office.


Kabir sees Navya wearing a yellow lenga. He puts a gold shevrani.


Nandini : U look hot today Kabir.


She smiles seeing Manik's jealousy.


Navya : Give me my gudiya.


She gives to her.


Kabir and Navya playing with her.


Registar officer comes to them. Nandini takes the baby.


He starts the registration.


Registar officer : So Miss Naveli do you want spouse Mister Kabir Dhawan?


Navya seeing Kabir : Yes I want to become his wife.


Registar officer : And you Mister Kabir Dhawan...?


Kabir interrupts them : Yes I want since one year ago.


All are shocked.


Registar officer : Oh I see the groom can't wait anymore.


He gives them the rings.

They exchange the rings.


Registar : Now u can kiss the bride.


Kabir becomes red.


Navya is shying.


Kabir comes close to her and kisses on her cheek.


All applauds.


Mrs Dhawan : Congrats behenji


Mrs Naveli : Apko bi.


They hugs each others.


There are girls and boys hugs.


Nandini : Finally you are Mrs Thakur, Kabir U are a good friend so please never make her cry.


Kabir : Don't worry Nandini.


Satish runs to him : So u are my papa forever now.


Kabir : Yes


Satish : I love both of you.


Kabir holds : Me too.


Kavya kisses Satish's cheeks


Nandini : Lets go home.



They come home.


Kabir: I am tired guys. Goodnight.


Mrs Naveli : But suhagrat?


KAbir : Kiski?


Mrs Naveli : Apki?


Kabir : WHAT??


Mrs Dhawan : Shut up Kabir come with me


She takes him in the room.


Kabir : Mom I can't.


Mrs Dhawan: But Navya is also a human who wants maybe.


Kabir : But...


Mrs Dhawan : Think lo.


On the other side, Mrs Naveli asks Nandin to make Navya ready.


Nandini makes wear a red saree.


Mrs Naveli : Tum boghot sundar lagrihoo. Listen me, u have to impress Kabir and make him urs.


Navya : Likin maa...


Nandini : Navya comes with me.


Navni comes to the door.


Naveli : I can't


Nandini : You can.


Nandini knocks.

Manik is here : So here ur wife.


Kabir : Tum bi naa Manik.


Manik holds Nandini : Goodnight and enjoy.


Nandini closed the door.


Kabir feeling strange.


Navya : I know I am ur best friend. Belive me Kabir I will never force you but the truth is that I love you. I never said you that because I knew it's one side love. Just relax.


Kabir is shocked to listen her confession.


She takes a bedshit and a pillow. She puts it on the ground.


Kabir : Navya : I can't sleep on the ground.


Navya : It's for me not worry.


She removes all her jewelries.


And goes for sleep. While Kabir lays on the bad.


She offs the lights.


Everyone are in their room.


Nandini : I forget something.


But Manik doesn't ler her go.


Nandini : What are u doing?


Manik holds her waist : Loving you.


She smiles.


Manik : Since morning you make me going crazy. In this black dress without backless blouse.


She is blushing. Holding her hand he puts a kiss on it.


Nandini : Manik...


Manik : Not break the atmosphere.


He turns her and she her back he loans on it and does a hickey.


Nandini moans.


He puts her on the bed.


She holds his arm.


Manik : I am urs in two.

He kisses on her forehead.


He takes some candles and light them.


Manik comes to her.


Nandini kisses his forehead. Manik is kissing all over her face. Then he leans toward her lips.BUt Nandini in teasing mood pecks on his cheeks. Finally Manik laid on her and she can't move and he crashes his lips on her. Both are doing that passionate French kiss. Nandini needs breathe.


They both deep kissed he is sucking her lower lips and also licking her tongue.
Then they broke the kiss Manik is looking so intense and going down. He kisses on her waist and


She moan his name : Manik.


Then manik is going up and kissed her neck. He gives so many love bite on her neck. He is looking his nandu and she is enjoying.


He stop and Nandini said : Don't stop manik I want you tonight.


She kisses on his lips and Manik replying her back...

They are so close, no space for air.


Then Manik kisses her chest and going down.

He open her blouse note.


He is removing her sari and Nandini also takes off his clothes.


Then when Manik open her blouse and removing she trying to hide her self in his chest.


She is hugging him tightly . He is kissing on all over her body.


And he is going down to her thigh. When he kisses there she is moaning his name and pull him up. And he kissed his face and bitting his neck.


And Manik enjoying this a lot, she kisses his bare chest and licks it.

Manik is moving his hand all over Nandini's body and pressing her boobs very softly.


She is moaning and she's realizing manik hand near her thigh.


And she is stopping him and Manik understand that she wanna come with.


Finally they both are making love, hardly and passionately. They slept with that position.





I am shocking what I have wrote. Feeling very shy. Now will be transform like Mr. X lol. Leave ur comment please. Love u all.


bokul thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
yippi me first
thanks for the pm
amazing update
Edited by rima4ever - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow fab update
loved it
cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
dear its so hot n amazing but i m shocked that it comes from oue seetha????so evrybody is becoming bold in dis forum lol...love u dear cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
jaan 18+ to likh deti
m feeling shy so no comment now first mujhe ish shock se bahar aane de
its sooo hot yrrr
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome..update..so bold...and really hot...
it was a shocking surprise for me baby doll...
thanks a lot for the pm...take care...

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