Manan FF: Lets fall in love **Discontinued** - Page 23

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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome Update..nandini confused about her feelings and manik is concerned with her behavior...just nandini talking to another guy will bring forth his possessiveness for her..well interesting update...waiting to read more of the story..please don't take too long for the updates continue soon and pm me if possible:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
thanks
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for updating
try to update quickly
and i just love it
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Posted: 10 years ago
After sooo many days??? Where were u all dis days? I thought u stopped ur amazing ff... Btw awesome. Plz can u tell me when u wl update nxt part? So dat i can luk 4 it...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shreya_preets

hey my lovely readers my exams got postponed to 17 I m so very sorry but I promise after that I will give u back to back updates :)

love u all

another question anyone else who agrees with saisha77?


2day is 17. I hope ur xam went well. So plz update soon. N plz tell dat when u wl update nxt part?
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Posted: 10 years ago
at last u updated..
Its nice..
Nandu is jealous..confused with her feelings..
And Manik is concerned for her..
waiting for more..
Plz dnt make us wait for long..
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Posted: 10 years ago
yepiii my exams are over and I will be updating tomorrow.

love to all my sweet readers :*
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Posted: 10 years ago
Dts awsm yr... ki ur xams r ovr...nw dnt be late n update nxt prt soon .. wid lots of manan momnts..nd plzzz try to be refulr..ur stry is soo intrstng...
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Posted: 10 years ago
thnk god ! finally ur examz r over 😃
pls update regularly.. pls pls 😛

will be waitin 4 ur update
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 10-

Nandini beta come fast we are getting late, her mom was shouting and taking glances of the wall clock... Nandini came downstairs fixing her duppatta yes mom I m ready lets go.

we have not much time Nandini I hope we are not late for sangeet ceremony, Amrit's voice was full of tension. Nandini rolled her eyes why mom is that much desperate to go there, as if that was not Minty's sangeet but her own daughter's.

Mom we are not late, chill...

They entered inside the ceremony hall, which was full with guests, Nandini quickly rushed towards Minty's room, Minty is daughter of Amrit's childhood friend. They have some far relations too... she wrapped her hands around her shoulder hey Minty...

Minty ran to her direction with wide smile then her smile suddenly dropped, she folded arms across chest and said with complaining tone, Nandini...tu ab aa rhi hai, she pouted and turned her face.

sorry, said Nandini touching ears, u r looking beautiful Minty, by this comment she forgot everything and started explaining her about jewelry, dress and makeup, see Nandini this lahanga I brought from Delhi, isn't it beautiful?

Yes its gorgeous, specially the minor embroidery.

Your lahanga is also very pretty Nandini and curves looking sexy, with playful smile Minty winked to her.

She blushed little and smilingly said thanks.

After some time the ceremony started and all girls made their way to the dancing hall... when she was dancing with group, catching attention of almost everyone, one of Amrit's friend asked who this pretty girl is?

Amrit moved her eyes to her...she is my daughter Nandini, told Armit proudly and you know she is very good in studies, cooking and all domestic works, bohot sankari hai meri Nandini.

Kitni pyaari hai, she was small when I saw her last, Amrit if you don't mind can I ask you something?

Yes of course.

I want to make her my daughter in law, you know I always wanted a girl like Nandini for my Harshad.

Amrit was little bit shocked with the sudden marriage proposal, she hesitatingly told her that my daughter is not big enough for marriage, she is still studying.

I have no problem Amrit, she can continue her studies, waise bhi bas ek saal hi toh baki hai, when she would complete graduation we think of it, I hope now u have no problem.

Haan lekin...

She cut her off, see Harshad is coming... Amrit turned her face and found a handsome looking boy coming near.

He stopped front of them, beta she is Amrit Aunty.

Namaste Aunty.

What Namaste touch her feet, his mom whispered in his ears, he looked at her surprisingly but followed her saying. He bent down and touched her feet.

Amrit held him by shoulders are beta iski kya zarurat hai...but she was very much impressed by him, they have nice reputation in society, in financial point of view they were also good, so after thinking all this she made her mind to be agreed.

Just then Nandini also came to them, beta meet my friend Peddy and he is her son Harshad, she smilingly greeted them, then turned to Armit, mom can we go home now? I will have to go tomorrow early to the college.

But beta how can we go so early, what would your Aunty think?

Ok then you stay, but can I go? it's very important mom, plz na... Nandini was childishly requesting.

It's ok Amrit let her go...

But Peddy how can I let her go alone?

Don't worry Harshad will drop her.

Amrit was not so happy with the idea of letting her go alone with a boy but she finally agreed.

Nandini doesn't wants to go, she tried to make her mom understand by some eye expressions but she ignored, Nandini has no choice and also can't say directly no front of everyone.

Harshad was looking her with the corner of eyes and small smile playing on his lips, Nandini turned to him, he lead her towards main door and they left.

Amrit and Peddy was smiling as if got accomplishment in some mission.

The drive was silent, Harshad wanted to start conversation so he broke the silence, so Nandini, you are in commerce 2nd year right? She nodded, but how do you know, we just met few minutes ago, he laughed softly we are in same college, I have seen you many times.

Oh sorry I don't remember.

Its ok but I hope after our meeting you will remember me, he said this part with a wink and cute smile.

She smiled back yeah of course...

He was intentionally driving slow and also took a long way to spent more time with her, they were talking about some more other things and after a while of talking she started feeling comfortable, he was succeeded in making his image as a nice person and she was impressed by his knowledge and intelligence.

He stopped front of her house... bye good night.

Good night Harshad and thanks for dropping me.

My pleasure... see u in the college.

In a college Nandini standing near the notice board and checking if they get any new info or else, then someone tapped on her shoulder, she turned and found Harshad was standing folding arms, hey Nandini

hii Harshad.

Yesterday's sangeet ceremony was good na...They were talking and laughing with each other, which may be someone doesn't like, Manik was watching them furiously from few steps away and smashed his cigarette box in anger. My friend is talking with my biggest enemy, how dare he even approaching her, I m dam sure he is doing all this purposely. Abhi and Dhruv came to Manik and found him starring someone angrily; they turned their neck and saw them, which they also didn't like.

Manik, Abhi and Dhruv moved ahead, they pushed her behind them and blocked him as a wall between him and Nandini, she was shocked by their sudden appearance and aggressive expressions.

Harshad smirked to them, hii boys...they didn't respond, ooohhh seems like u guys are not happy to see me...

Manik narrowed his eyes and said U fatichar, we warned u to not mess with us but I think you have some memory problem, how dare u talk to Nandini?

He laughed no I have no problem, but surely u have one, ruling on everyone, you want everything to go as u please but no Manik, u have to understand this but don't worry I will make u understand soon, that last part was more like an admonition. He continues, and if u talking about Nandini then let me tell you she is also a human who has her own desires, whom she wanted to talk or with whom not. she is not your father's property.

blood rushed to his veins hearing this, he jumped to him and grabbed his collar, Harshad also attacked back and clutched his collar, Manik tighten his fist and about to Punch him, but Nandini pushed both of them and screamed by top of her lung, STOPPP ITTT... they both turned their faces to her.

They loosen their grip from each other... what are u guys doing, haan... may I know what is going on? Manik tell me... Harshad... speak up damit... Dhruv. All were silent.

Manik grabbed her wrist and dragged to him... Abhi and Dhruv also walked away after passing a dead glare to Harshad.

Manik what are u doing... leave me, its hurting... plz Manik. He stopped finally where nobody was present, pushed her to the wall and stood so close... he said in an angry voice, U will not talk to him ever again, this was more like an order which she doesn't like.

But why?

He gritted his teeth...and kept both palms on wall beside her, God dam Nandini... u will do this because I m saying.

Why? he is a family friend and a nice person. I will talk to him whenever I feel, he is your enemy not mine, and what is new in it, you have lots of enemies, yahi toh aata hai tumhe sirf jhagadna, She pushed him out from her way and moved to go, but he grabbed her wrist and again pulled to him, their bodies were touching. His grip on her soft hand was so tight which giving her pain, she looked at his angry eyes which turned more dark, she was also angry on him, leave me Manik, let me go and by the way who are u ordering to me? u have no possession on me. Understand... I m not your bloody personal property.

His anger increased more to hear same thing from her mouth, that one line hurt him also, he pushed her again and pinned to the wall, pressed his body on hers, she was shivering and shut her eyes in fear, she can see a real bad boy and a monster in him, u are... bad.. ruthless... his anger increasing more and more by her words...he roughly gave pressure to grip on her wrist, her voice turned in whisper U are hurting me Manik... u r hurting me.

she stopped struggling and a tear rolled down her cheeks by closed eyes, He came in senses to see her pale and wet face, looked down on her wrist which has a round red circle because of his tight grip, He moved away from her, slowly stepping back and then left from there, when she felt herself without under a weight, slowly opened her eyes but he was not there anymore, she looked here and there for him, but he was gone.

She sat there on her knees, couldn't figure out whatever happened, tension between Harshad and Manik... Manik's rough behavior with me. I called him Bad, did I hurt him? Why you are like this... sometimes so sweet and then suddenly so harsh. Kyon Manik... kyon...touching her wrist which has red marks of his aggression, slowly got up and fixed her hairs and clothes, wiped tears by her long sleeves... walked to the corridors, Abhi and Dhruv was standing there with worried expression, when they saw her took a sigh of reliefe, they quickly came to her... Nandini... are u ok?

She nodded.

Where is Manik?

Nandini looked at them surprisingly, I don't know...tum logo ko bhi nhi pta.

No...they both said together.

Let's call him... but as expected he was not picking the phone, then Abhi and Dhruv moved from there to find him.

Nandini was also looking for him everywhere, then suddenly something popped up in her mind and she ran towards the old library...the place was dark, she stepped ahead and found someone standing there with back on her side, she was not sure he is Manik or not, so she called him, his mobile buzzed, he pulled it out from the pocket and kept aside after cutting the call, she moved ahead folding arms... so... now you don't even wants to talk to me? Plz Nandini... Go... leave me alone... he said without bothering to look at her...

And what if I won't?

Why u can't ever obey me? do as you are told.

She ignored and took step closer, he warned... stay away from me Nandini.

She asked with a soft voice... why?

Because I m bad.

How much?

Bad enough... to keep you away from me.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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