MANAN FF :Undeniable Crush part2 pg 5 (updated) - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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I didn't see the first part.. Sorry
But I read it just now...

It's time for some Mangal in the Jungle :p
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
😳Wow..Jst loved it yar..
Continue soon😃😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
Manan in jungle wow. Such a cute couple. cont soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
Amazing start..
Both MaNan have crush on each other but no one is ready to talk..
Looks like Navya and Cabir are gonna play Cupid...
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
seems really interesting..and beautiful concept..
plz continue soon..😊😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
Wow...!!! This is Amazing...
Please Continue Soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
forest looks interesting
btw the part was awesome
cont. soon😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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PART 2

The next day,I reached college at sharp nine am as we were told. We headed towards the bus stop. It was camping for 3 days. As I climbed on the bus..I saw him on the last corner seat with his eyes closed. Mukti and aliya were gossiping. I sat on the front seat to avoid him. The spot we need to reach was a journey of full 9 hours. As the bus started to move, navya on top of her voice said," Arrey, how boring u all have become, I mean let's sing and dance, what say?" After hearing this ,the driver played the song 'party on my mind ' and everyone were like oooh and aaahhh!! Cabir came in front and started dancing insanely and mukti, navya and aliya also joined. I turned back to see manik sleeping..Aaah..how hot he looked even while sleeping I thought and suddenly shifted my gaze away in fear of what others will think. After Singing,dancing, cabir' s jokes and sleeping,we finally reached our destination. It really was a long journey.

We again had to walk for some hours to reach the camping spot. We were guided by our teacher. Manik talked with cabir. I talked with navya and finally we reached. we set up the camps. There were four total group to camp. Different camps for boys and girls were set up. After that it's was dinner then bonfire and finally we were headed to our camps to sleep.

Outside it was already night. For our girls group it was a big camp.we were about to sleep then suddenly a knock was heard outside. Navya was deep in sleep. We were scared to death..what if it was a ghost,we thought. Mukti turned on the torch light and opened the chain of tent. It was none other than cabir. " cabir, what are u doing here",mukti showed her anger . " Oh actually dhruv wants to meet aliya.",cabir said. "Come in dhruv",aliya spoke. I was like what... even though dhrub is aliya' s boyfriend.. ..it's a girl's tent. But I could see a tall figure outside. OMG it's really him..out of shyness,I covered my face with sleeping bag and pretended to sleep.

I could hear both cabir and dhrub coming inside. Then suddenly mukti spoke, " manik come in what will u do there alone, come in". "No I am fine, I just want some fresh air",he spoke . Even his voice was making my heart race. Then mukti pulled him inside and said," others are fast asleep u can come. My heart beats were increasingly on and on sensing his presence.
Then suddenly, aliya spoke loudly," Oh shit, the teachers are checking the tents..if they see u boys here, they'll kill us, u ppl just hide in our sleeping bags." DAMN", manik spoke. Suddenly dhruv hid in aliya' s sleeping bag,cabir in navya' s. Mukti hadn't opened her bag so she pointed towards mine. Oh no!!!! LIKE SERIOUSLY...I thought.. Suddenly he reached inside my bag as he had no other option. I was in shock...no that's not the exact word to define my emotions..my cheeks were flushed, I was all red from blushing..adrenaline rushed over my blood ...and my heart was beating to fast like he'll!!! I was all breathless... His smell was so heavenly good...I gasped for breath as his body was pressed against mine . I mean who thought that my crush would be with me like this...our very first meeting would be like this...so passionate... his face was so close to mine that his warm breath was brushing over my face... he was holding my waist...sending current down my spine... I felt like I was in heaven...it was dark so I couldn't see his face but I could feel his loud heartbeats...like mine... I just closed my eyes pretending to sleep.. then suddenly mukti spoke..." guys, the teachers are gone u can go now"... on hearing this he suddenly got out was went to his tent...I didn't wanted him to go...For the first time..I felt...so different...

The whole night was sleepless for me...




So.. guys...here goes part 2... do like and comment.. for the next part...which will be more "HOT"...😳🥱


Edited by HeavenAngel - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awsome...loved it...pls continue soon dear...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
Wow.. Awesome yar.. Manan hv a crush on each othr
Loved it.. Cont soonsoon

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