Manan FF: The Angel and the devil. Discontinued. Author's note pg 38 - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
#21
manik's pari wow sounds gud hope u will cntn soon m eagerly waiting
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It seems interesting..
do continue soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you guys for your appreciation. I'm here with the second part. Hope you like this part too.
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"Nandini vardhan? So you are Mukti Vardhan's sister?" The teacher asked her being sceptic.

"Umm. Yes mam" Nandu replied slowly.

"Strange" Mrs. Sanya, the teacher thought to herself. How can she be Mukti's sister? This girl seemed the exact opposite of Mukti.

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Nandini was walking in the corridors when she heard someone calling behind her.

"Parineeta. Pariii. Wait up"

She turned to see a cute guy running towards her. "Hi" he said coming towards her. "I'm Danny"

"Hi." she replied back and started walking again.

He started walking with her. "So Pari since we both are new here , I think we should be friends. What say?"

Nandu glared at him.

"Sirf friends yaar". Danny said winking at her.
" Its not that. Its just.. Ok. We can be friends."

"Then what is it? Say na Pari."

"DONT CALL ME PARI." She shouted at him." I hate that name because he..." She stopped suddenly realising what she almost said.

"But why not. It suits you. Because tum dikhte ho aise.. bilkul ek pari ki tarah"

She started glaring at him again.

"Ok I'll call you nandu. Is that okay?."

She nodded.

"I'm hungry. How about we go to the cafeteria?" Danny asked.

"Ok." She replied and they started walking.
Strange. She thought to herself. She thought that she had changed but it still hurt her when someone called her that. Because HE used to call her that...

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Meanwhile in the cafeteria the entire Fab5 were sitting and discussing about... well none other than Nandu.

"Mukti tumne kyun nahi bataya Ki Nandini wapas aayi hai?" Aliya asked her.

"Main bhoolgayi aalya"

"Anyways when did she return?" Dhruv asked

"Last week. I thought she would continue her studies in US but that idiot had to return."

"Chill. Mukti. Now there'll be no lack of entertainment. "Manik replied. "Anyways where is she? This wait is killing me guys."

There she is. Dhruv said pointing to a girl in white standing near the counter with her back to them.
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Nandini was lost in her own thoughts when someone tapped on her shoulder.

"Pari tum wapas aayi aur mujhe bataya tak nahi"

She didn't have to turn to realise who it was. She'll identify that voice anywhere. Because it still haunted her in nightmares sometimes... The voice of Manik Malhotra.
Edited by ..Amekha.. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
Awesome update
But it was so chotu sa

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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
Itna chotu aa update 😭 n what has did monster done to our pari

But the update was really nice..

Love
Amby
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: navk

Awesome update

But it was so chotu sa


Will update bigger one next time. I promise 😆 and thanks for your opinion
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: Ambylicious

Itna chotu aa update 😭 n what has did monster done to our pari

But the update was really nice..

Love
Amby


He hasn't done anything alone. She was the most scared of him because he usually started the attacks on her. That's it. 😆
I was running out of time. That's why this one is small. Next time ill update a bigger one. Thanks for your appreciation 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey this is cheating ha itta chotu sa update...want a long one next time
I like ur writing do update soon 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
Thank you white lily and rima4ever. 😊 I will try updating tomorrow and definitely a longer one
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: Kuushi

Hey this is cheating ha itta chotu sa update...want a long one next time
I like ur writing do update soon 😊


😃 Sorry for the short one. Will definitely update a longer one next time. Thank you for appreciating it.

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