MaNan Three Shot - Just One? | Completed - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: annboleyn

Aditi thanks my lovely...this is special. Three of my favourite characters in the mix...it was naughty,funny,wicked yet it gave me the pheels... Hayyye! You liked it? 😳 Okay, so my effort did paid me off 😆 I know, those three together are just...

Drunk Nandu on the loose...#tallinandurocks Tell me about it Doc 🤣
Cabira being the boss #biralovin As always 😎
Manik being overbearing #PaDocshipper 😳 Hayyyee! If it were upto me, I would parcel wrap Parth and gift it to you 😆


Doc you be this complete sweetheart who I want to hug humesha 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22
YOU WOMAN! This is sheer brilliance. Not res-ing for once, you need to update! DON'T LEAVE ME HANGING :OOO
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
This is amazing!!!
Looking forward to part 2. Please update soon:):)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: TheShipWeirdo

YOU WOMAN! This is sheer brilliance. Not res-ing for once, you need to update! DON'T LEAVE ME HANGING :OOO


I know I am woman 😎 🤣
AM I DREAMING??? YOU ARE NOT RESERVING???? 😲
THIS DAY SHOULD GO DOWN IN HISTORY WITH GOLDEN WORDS!!!!!😲😲😲
I have the next part ready but you need to spam this page for it. I always post on fresh page 🤣

Thank you for tareef though. I be hogging tareef humesha 😎
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: PrincessAshVik

This is amazing!!!
Looking forward to part 2. Please update soon:):)


Thanks dear 😳

Yeah, just few minutes away. 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: Flame.Of.Rose


I know I am woman 😎 🤣
AM I DREAMING??? YOU ARE NOT RESERVING???? 😲
THIS DAY SHOULD GO DOWN IN HISTORY WITH GOLDEN WORDS!!!!!😲😲😲
I have the next part ready but you need to spam this page for it. I always post on fresh page 🤣

Thank you for tareef though. I be hogging tareef humesha 😎


I WILL. YOU KNOW I WILL SPAM. YOU JUST SAY THE MAGICAL WORDS AND I START :VVV
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
Adi, I have read it only 5 times -- Aye, its fun torturing monsters, especially if they are so adorable and pouty!
I am waiting to find out why 'baba deserves him' makes you ROFL.
So give me the second part now!
Aye you be the awesomeness like Bira yo..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28

With A Price

"Why do we keep forgetting that along with life and time, even love is one teacher who can teach everything? Be it making a ruler slay himself away at the feet of his beloved or making an overwhelmed person learn self-restrainment."


"Manik, what the hell is wrong with you?!"

She slurred. Great! Earlier it was my best friend-turned-sworn enemy and now my I-am-the-ultimate-player friend behind this. Who needs villains in their life when they have friends as such? I still refuse to believe that I could do things as such to deserve those absolutely downright devil incarnations as my friend. I may be Monster but still I never did deed as horrified to go through their tormented hell.

Oh right, she slurred. Apparently the lady in my life failed to realize that if she didn't come with me leaving this dance floor right away then I might as well turn into a murderer embarking my profession by first killing this one guy who is looking or should I say, eyeing, Nandini in ways that he should absolutely not, if he wants to live. Condition applied.

"Nandini we have to leave now, so be a good girl and stop troubling me."

"What is your problem Manik, can't you just let me have some fun. I am enjoying dancing here. See even Mukti is happy after such long time."

And, I rolled my eyes. Of course Mukti WILL be happy since she is totally wasted now but she knows how to hold herself away from danger unlike a certain 5 feet 3 inches in my arms, who dashes right into all the troubles in the world for she thinks it's her duty to establish peace in this whole wide world. As for the fun part, well, some people, who definitely are carrying their death wish with them, are having more fun.

"Listen Nandini, and listen to me carefully. You are coming with me. Right away. You've got no choice and if you don't listen to me then don't blame me if I carry you around like a rag doll."

She pouted. Glared. Stomped her foot. But nevertheless, she complied with me. She did make an adorable picture of a five year though. I should have recorded that to tease her when situation demands.

Well, I have more important things to do that to adore her and wanting to kiss her right away. Where do we leave for sure as hell, I am not dropping her off to her place? Chachi may be all welcoming and warming to me but no way in hell she will let go of Nandini if she gets that she is drunk. Last time we were lucky, but lady luck isn't exactly the best person to rely on, now is she?

My place? Not a bad idea considering Cabir has plotted it all so he won't be disturbing me till morning, Mukti is too wasted to drop off at my place and Dhruv and Alya, well we all know better. Also, Nyonika is out for her work, as always. That should be free reign for me to take her, right?

But how do I reign myself and resist her? This squirming lady, did I mention in my arms, isn't exactly making my self-restrain last for long. All the peoples in my life aren't troubling me anymore but what do I do with her?

God! I really do have to go through hell everytime.

Edited by Flame.Of.Rose - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
Author's Note:

Okay, since everyone can see, this piece of torture is no where near completed, well blame my BFF this time. She pointed it out that I should just leave it here and post the rest in yet another part. So yeah, I am offcially changing the heading from Two Shots to Three Shots. Next chapter, promise, will be the last. I can NOT have Doc, waiting for long, right?

For all the people, who are ready with their jootas and tomatoes and eggs or whatever, people I'll only accept super-awesome sports shoes of size6, wedges of same size, boiled eggs and of course my favourite snack, fresh tomatoes.😎

Till tomorrow, night, Byeee.

Keep on cursing me and hating me and planning my murder till then.
I be one person to feed on sadistic pleasure 🤣


- Flamey (Aditi) 😎
Edited by Flame.Of.Rose - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
RESRESRES
unres


I HATE YOU, YOU KNOW?! I TOLD YOU NOT LEAVE ME HANGING AND YOU DO EXACTLY THAT 😡 IF THE NEXT UPDATE AIN'T FULL OF MUSHY GUSHY AND SEXY TIME MANAN, YOU DIE.

Frustrated to the point of unres-ing in one of your works, yes. I want this, I need this. So update, update, update.

Coming to the actual chapter, marvelously written. I get fascinated with your writing every time. The way you use the words, play with them, truly makes it all the more gripping. I feel like kissing you and also punching you.

I lauu Manik, and when I say I lauu you more that's a REAL COMPLIMENT. So update woman! I unres-ed so quick. Update even quicker #forevergreedy
Edited by TheShipWeirdo - 10 years ago

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