MaNan OS : The truth in the ****

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Anu

@RomComFan

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#71

LOVELY!👏👏

I looove your sense of humor!🤣

But i have to ask, what is with all the animal imagery?😉

Please, please continue to write more FFs for this forum, you are so good at it... pretty please?😃

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Ishq-Dua

@Ishq-Dua

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#72

What on earth did I just read!!!!! 🤣🤣🤣🤣

This OS is effin EPIC from beginning to the end

floral Zara LOL

Chachi doing nazar utaaroing (I can so imagine this)

sobbing buckets like a geriatric duck that just lost its tail

🤣 🤣

(Oh my Allah, how do you come up with such things lol)

and the song too good lol

like a horse in labor, about to give birth to its najayaz aulad conceived with an elephant.

What the... 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 (falls off chair)

and the ending was so unexpected lice lmao

Rafz you is friggen awesome girl! 😎

moi luvs you!!

gosh I still can't stop laughing 😆 😆😆😆

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-zozo-

@-zozo-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#73

This made me LOL

Highly appreciated ^_^

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Khan (from the epiglottis)

@-Mischievous-

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#74

LMFAO🤣🤣🤣 I come in expecting to read some intense shit and I am floored laughing... The "khao na" song, the nazar utaroing, the STD part, EVERYTHING...🤣🤣Matlab, you are sheer brilliance. This is exactly what I needed after a friggin' 4 hour lecture.🤗👏

Oh God, I have tears in my eyes from laughing and my facial muscles are hurting. 🤣 Saved to favorites. I shall re-read this anytime I need a boost. 😆

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Rads

@Effervescent_R

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#75

OH MY...Rafi
had to login to comment on this EPIC piece!!
u shud put a STATUARY WARNING before writing such things...
Coz honestly I m 100% sure my co-PG's might reconsider my sanity !!
I laughed like crazy throughout ...u are one of a kind girl !!
so whr shud I start from?
The Floral Zara n d gaudiest jackets definitely ...ur References were Bang on
someone do us a favour n
aaao naa
jalao naaa
inn hidious jackets ko
ASAP!!
another line that cracked me was
d entire RIP guitar reference n d Song of the Year!!!
(Or rather millennium)
Then comes the EPIC
Horse in labour delivering a najaayaz Aulad ...an Elephant????
freakin hell!!
aur ye kya the giraffe who couldnt stay away from his lil bunny even for a minute hasnt done it yet?????
Dude are u okay??
Saving best for d last
the biggest twist of d centuary ...Manik has LICE!!!

🤣 🤣
Pulitzer jaye bhaad mein this is the Best OS
I have EVER read...PERIOD!!
love
Rads
Wait ...how can I forget
the whole chacha -chachi n d cake saga!!
I can actually imagine that happening 😛 😛

Edited by ..Serendipity.. - 10 years ago

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346815

Hibernated

Posted: 10 years ago

#76

Thank you all of u lovely ppl .. your comments make me sooo happy :D

I am at college but imma definitely reply to each and every one of u when i get back ! ^_^ <3

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Rads

@Effervescent_R

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#77

Btw I can try writing an OS on Manik 's dukhti nerve ...going through a dry spell when it comes to Nandini ...but then u are d best in d genre n I m incapable of such epic one liners!! So...idea dropppeed
u shud so go ahead and write a sequel explaining Baba's conditions
that wud be fun to read

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346815

Hibernated

Posted: 10 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: ..Serendipity..
Btw I can try writing an OS on Manik 's dukhti nerve ...going through a dry spell when it comes to Nandini ...but then u are d best in d genre n I m incapable of such epic one liners!! So...idea dropppeed
u shud so go ahead and write a sequel explaining Baba's conditions
that wud be fun to read

Array no ... by all means ... do go on .. would love to read your work :D

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Ambylicious

@Ambylicious

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#79

am speechless. dont have anything to say.. i just cant stop laughing...🤣🤣

Rafz Rafz Rafz kya bolun main. u r just plain AWESOME .. main hass hass ke pagal ho gai hun n my office ppl are thinking that I have lost it.. ppl r coming at my desk and checking on me. 🤪🤪

When i started reading the OS i had no clue about what was in store for me but THIS i had never ever imagined. Behen maine pehle bhi kaha hai phir se bol raahi hun 'TU MAHAAN HAI' kahan se aata hai itna talent.. 👏 thoda humme bhi dede.

*bows down and touches your feet * charan spaarsh , pai laagu 😃😃

RAFZ Tussi GREAT HO!!! 🤗🤗 aaja pass aaja behen , gabara mat 😉

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346815

Hibernated

Posted: 10 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: nneeiill
floral zara😆 --nandu ka flashback of rishabh's birthday🤣--manik crying like in labor LOL LOL---and the climax..
oh god..only u can think of it..
totally enjoyed reading it ...!!!😛

Glad you enjoyed Nitya 🤗

And Manik in labour ... did u HAVE to say that ... oh the visuals 🤣

Originally posted by: punya25
This is the aw esomest OS that I have ever read 😆
Through out the OS I was just laughing like crazy...
🤣 🤣
Floral jacket...crazy manik...horse's najayas aulad wale labor pains...
🤣
And the climax!!
Holy shit...I can't stop laughing!!

Hats off to you ma'am 👏 👏

Eager to read more stories written by you

Thank you so much Punya =]

Makes me really happy to know u had fun reading my work !😳