Manik-Nandini OS - 'HAWT'

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Mkb thank you for your idea😳 hope you like it..
MaNan OnEsHoT -
HaWt

Just imagine MaNan a day before Musicanna. Cabir knows it all..and rest of them could disappear for a day 😆

They have been having the secret meeting for the past few days now.

There's a spark that appears in them when they see each other. It's quite obvious if you pay attention at them.

Yet no one is aware of their new developing feelings.

Like any other day Manik and Nandini meet near the staircase. They didn't have anything to talk about as Nandini was too embarrassed to even meet his eyes.

Manik noticed her stealing glances. 'hmmm...' he mourned

She looked up slowly, 'Ummm...' she replied in a similar tone.

'What? Are we playing games here' he sternly asked

'Nahi toh, what games?' she questioned back.

'Ms. Nandini Murthy, I don't wake up this early for college I'm here for a reason remember' he questioned

'Haan, I know. So, tell me what exactly are we discussing today?' she asked

'What the hell is wrong with you?'

'Nothing, voh I'm nervous' she said

'Why so?' Manik questioned again. 'As if you don't know Monster Manik' she replied slowly thinking he wont hear her. But he did.

Manik couldn't take his intense eyes off her, so he started walking towards her. While Nandini's reflex made her body walk backwards. Soon she hit the staircase pole on her back.

'Why are you nervous Nandu' Manik questioned in his deep husky voice.

She looked him meeting his eyes 'I was thinking about yestarday'

'Acha...' he said with a naughty smirk on his lips.

Flashback

Party at Alya's house where both NH3(NavShad were spending time together somewhere inside, Shahid was sick) and FAB5 (Alya & Mukti were changing their clothes, Cabir was present and Dhruv was making drink for Alya inside)

Nandini was sitting alone near poolside with her legs inside the pool. She was being cheerful and entertaining herself until NavShad were back.

Manik from a distance watched her carefully. Cabir looked at Manik and followed his gaze to Nandini, where she was stealing glances from him occasionally. They both were smiling.

'Dude, go and talk to her. I'll give you a signal if anyone comes okay' Cabir assured

Manik walked away from the pool side after Cabir insisted couple of times that he'll watch Manik's back.

Nandini got upset as she couldn't find Manik where he was seated. She frowned and started into water after searching for him everywhere.

Soon she felt someones touch on her shoulder she jerked forward and was about to scream. Manik quickly reflexed his hand over to her mouth. Both fell into the water cause of her jerk.

Manik fell further out into the swimming pool, while Nandini had no idea that she wasn't deep, however she struggled to get a grip in there.

Manik enjoyed her drowning drama for couple of minutes from where he was, then soon he heard 'Manikkk' he walked towards her.

He made her stand in water where she felt the floor touching her feet. She banged her head into his chest for a hug, while Manik smiled and hugged her back tightly.

Cabir was watching their drama from the other end and said 'Nautanki kahi ke'

Manik and Nandini embraced each other tightly, their grip getting stronger and stronger. She sobbed slowly, and he broke the hug.

Her tears were flowing down her cheeks in sadness, Manik frowned 'Basss kar na yaar, please stop it' she said cupping her face up with his index finger.

Nandu closed her eyes yet the tears weren't stopping. Manik cupped her face further up and soon kissed her eyes passionately. She held her grip on his t-shirt, his smile curved into a cute smirk.


Manik kissed her cheek bone next, and her grip tightened and his cute smirk turned into a smile and soon into grin as he moved from the cheek bone to her cheeks.

Cabir ran inside watching the fire in them.


He kissed her chin slowly and passionately. 'Manikk..' she slowly whisphered.

'Hmmm...' he replied while he kissed her neck as they hugged passionately.

He kissed the other side of her chin, slowly moving towards her lips. Nandu's eyes were closed all this while. Manik stared at her calm, innocent face, a trustful face his face was fully blushed and his grin so strong that it would be impossible to say he's not in love. Soon he moved his around her waist pulling her closer to him.

Closer, almost sticking to eachother. Nandini opened her eyes, and smiled at him indirectly approving him. She tilted her head up while he smiled looking at her. He pressed his lips onto hers.

The kiss deepened as seconds passed by, she comfortably placed her arms around his neck. She responded back to him passionately.

The Flashback ends

'Ohh voh' he said..

And claimed her lips once again. She tried to retreat, but Manik being Monster Manik continued and soon his girl gave in.

Once again Cabir saw their fire 'Hawt' he said

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The End..
Please hit like and write down your views as Comments below😆.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome os! Manik is teasing Nandu! That was so cute!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank u so much guys. This means a lot to me 😳 and am so glad y'all like it 😳😳

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Shru, my sister do you have any idea how much good you do write? Its lovely, the concept & the description is sooo well penned. Even I was like blushing with Nandini. The naughty monster Manik is definitely a treat to read. Loved it a lot & love u too my dear sister. Soon I'll be on with my request on MaNan.
With love, Sardi 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Oye hoye Loved it. More than that i loved the fact you made everyone else gayab other than Cabir .. Cabir was representing us😉😆 ..ha ha... and that Dhruv making drink for Alya bit...🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
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😭Exactly same yahi situation hoti agar yaha koi uss dhruv ko leke koi prblm nahi hoti😆

OS is really nice Shru..btw do u know me.. I m lizadavidmm aka piya from arjun forum..how r u?😊

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Originally posted by: Piya_Malik

😭Exactly same yahi situation hoti agar yaha koi uss dhruv ko leke koi prblm nahi hoti😆

OS is really nice Shru..btw do u know me.. I m lizadavidmm aka piya from arjun forum..how r u?😊

Thanks dear.. and ofcourse I know you well at least I do remember ya😆 am good how are you?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: VKlovesFK

Oye hoye Loved it. More than that i loved the fact you made everyone else gayab other than Cabir .. Cabir was representing us😉😆 ..ha ha... and that Dhruv making drink for Alya bit...🤣

Hayeee thank you so much.. I'm sure you enjoyed it a lot 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: firefly..

Shru, my sister do you have any idea how much good you do write? Its lovely, the concept & the description is sooo well penned. Even I was like blushing with Nandini. The naughty monster Manik is definitely a treat to read. Loved it a lot & love u too my dear sister. Soon I'll be on with my request on MaNan.

With love, Sardi 🤗

Hayeee sreedi, you're embarrassing me 😆 I write it alright only. Well the background concept goes to -MKB- who wanted to read a swimming pool romance. Even I was blushing while penning it down😳 Love you too and thank you for loving it.
I'm waiting for the request 😉
-yours Shru
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Cute !👏

Hope to read more from you sooon!😃

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