Mission Woo Nandini back!!!!

Though I will write a small scene but looks like a short OS now... Hopefully you guys will like it... I am open to criticisms... Please do give an honest opinion... this is not proof read. pls ignore typo's

It has been weeks since Nandini rejected dhruv proposal.. Manik tried talking to her but she was not giving in... Nandini made sure that Manik did not get a chance to talk or come near her when they were in college.

Manik: (to himself) Fine Nandini, if you don't give me the chance here I will find another way... (he decides to land up at her home).

Chachi: Are Manik beta, tum yaha... Andar aao na... Nandiniii, dekho manik aya hai tumse milne ke liya.. neeche aaao...

Nandini: (fuming inside) Hi Manik (grinding her teeth) what are you doing here??

Manik: Are.. you forgot, U said na you will help me out with my notes.. bhool gayi kya... tum mere ghar aane wali thi ...

Nandini: Notes??? What notes???

Manik: Humne decide kiya tha na ki.. we will compare notes and find a solution for Dhruv's problems...

Nandini (controlling her anger) : Ohh .. that.. Yaaa... I forgot... but we can discuss in college tomorrow... tum jao abhi..

Manik: (amused)... No.. no.. I have bought the notes here.. (to chachi).. Chachi. If you don't shall we study from here...

Chachi: Of course beta... Nandu, tum dono upar jao.. meine na aaj fried mushroom casserole banaya hai.. tum khake jana Manik..

Manik: Of course chachi...I will definitely eat.. come na nandini.. upar chale...

Upstairs..

Nandini: What the hell Manik... Why did you come here????.. (Trying to keep her voice down)

Manik: I had no other option... Jab bhi hum college mein hote hain tum mujhe baat karne ka change nahi dethi... So I had to come here...

Nandini: I don't want to talk to you and listen to you.. So just go away Manik... I will never forget what you did to me...

Manik (getting impatient grabs her pulls her close to him): Listen, I am trying to say sorry to you a zillion times but you are not hearing me...(calms himself down) Us din mein ne jo kuch bhi kaha sab sach tha... I want you to shine for me ... I want be in ur prayers and yes... I want you to trust me hamesha hamesha ke liye... Mera erada tumara dil thod ne ka nahi tha.. but dhruv.. when it comes to him.. I forget everything... I have been like this all my life... socha tha ki mera decision sahi hai... par nahi... I was soo wrong... tumare bina I feel lost... jab bhi mein tume apne bahome leta hum mere dil ko sukoon mil tha hai... I feel calm .. I feel complete... You complete me Nandini... I know I broke ur trust.. I broke ur belief.. but mujhe ek chance tho do.. apne aap ko prove karne ke liye.. chance to prove that I am truly very very sorry for hurting you... I want your advice when there is a problem in front of me... I want...

Nandini: (crying) Manik.. pleaseee... why should I give a second chance... ??? do even have any idea how you made me feel when you said all those things... Hum ne jo time spend kiya tha ek saat...you made a joke out of it... You made me feel so low.. so used ... I felt disgusted with myself... You were my first kiss Manik and instead of having happy memories you made it into a nightmare... you broke my faith in my fireflies.. faith which my mother gave me... Faith which I held on for these years... You made me into a puppet... You made a mockery of my feelings for you... My feelings are not for you to control manik... You can just push me away and think I will run into Dhruv for comfort and love... I always liked Dhruv but as a friend... only as a friend... I don't believe in second chances Manik... we had a wonderful chance but now it's gone... Forever...

Maanik: Nooo... I don't think so...

Nandini: Why should I give you a second chance after what you did to me...Why should I believe you??? Why should I trust you again??

Manik: Because...

Nandini: Tell na Manik... give me one good reason...

Manik: Because... I... I... I LOVE YOU NANDINI MURTHY...I LOVE YOU SOOO SOOO MUCH .. I have fallen deeply in love with you... I cannot live with you... I want to spend the rest of my life with you... I know I have to earn your love and your trust back... I know I will.. cos I am Manik.. I will die trying but I will one day earn your love and trust back again... You will be mine ... You will smile and shine for me again..

Nandini (looks at him shocked and unable to react)...

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Its seriously very awesome!
And great!
Wanted to read something like this!

aww...I want to see Manik being stubborn to get Nandini back and he should be apologized to her...
loved it dear

It's a really nice scene. Wish yeh ho serial mein bhi.

😊 superbbb!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😊

Thanks guys for commenting and liking it ... 😊

Huge fan and promoter of the public wooing of Nandhini Moorthy... please update soon. Maybe the CVs need some ideas...😉