MaNan OS::I'll be waiting::

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Manan OS-I'll be waiting

"He is not worthy..He is just trapping you in his Plans...He doesn't love you."Harshad told her.
she was trying hard to control her anger but..she couldn't anymore.
"Harshad...stop it."she shouted.
He held her shoulders tightly.
"shh...Awaz neche.."he told."You must break up with him..or else.I swear I'll kill him."
"Damki..de rahe ho."she asked.her eyes were red in anger and tears started trickling down her cheek.
"Haan..kuch aisa hi."he told and left.
She was left in a state were she din't know what to do.

Meet me behind collage.She messaged him.

"Kyu...?mhuje miss kar rahi thi?"He asked her pulling her closer.
"There is something that i need to tell you."She said.
"you look worried..Kya hua?"He asked her.
"I'm breaking up with you.."She told as tears trickled down her cheek.
she was about to leave when he held her hand.
"You are joking right?Tell me you are joking.."he told.
She nodded her head.It stated to rain heavily.
You're beautiful
You criminal,Girl you took everything from me,Can't let you go .Like a general I'm going into battle cause...You stole the breath from my lungs,Cut my veins, bleeding loveOh I still remember that scene..
She turned back as she walked.She saw him in a state of shock.He Ran to her and held her tight.
"You can't do this to me...I love you."He told.SHe freed herself from hisgrip.
Cuz I can see the tears running down your cheek..I can feel your body so close to me ...I can hear the rain dropping at your feet ...Cuz your love was gone...(Koi nahi.. Mita de sabhi..)
He feel down on his knees.It started raining all the more heavily.
"Nandini.."He cried.
"I'm sorry Manik."She told soft as she kept walking.
24x7, I will be waiting...Out in the rain till somebody saves me...Don't care if it takes forever to make you believe...Kabhi jo baadal barse...Main dekhoon tujhe aankhein bharke...Tu lage mujhe pehli baarish ki duaa.

Manik tried calling Nandu many times but she din;t pick her phone nor did she message him back.
"Nandu..Pick the phone."He kept calling her.
AT last she picked up his call."tumhe..ek baari mein samaj nahi aata?"she asked him.
"Nandu I love you..I don't know why you want to break up with me...Because I know you love me too."He said.
"Get it at once Manik.I don't Love you."
It's like a gun shot went straight through me...Stopped my heart from beating...No - won't let you get away
She cut the call and started crying.He was left heartbroken.

Next day at collage.
"Harshadji..apne Nandini ko dekha kya?Dikai nahi de rahi hai."Navya asked.
"No Navya..Wait I'll call her."He said.

"Nandu!Where are you?Collage kyu nahi ayi?"He asked.
"Harshad!you know why?don't you.I can't face Manik and mein kal Mangalore ja rahi hoon..Hamesha Hamesha ke liye."She said and cut the phone.
"But..."
"Kya hua harshadji?"Navya asked."Navya woh...Nandini Mangalore ja rahi hai..woh bhi hamesh hamesha ke liye."
Manik who was hearing all this was hell shocked.He rushed to Nandini's house.
Chachi opened the door he asked wehere Nandini was and rushed into her room.
"Par Manik beta..Hua kya?"Chachi asked but he din't answer and went to Nandini's room.
Nandu was paking her bag.He held her hand.
"Manik..what are you doing her..I don;t want to talk to you."She said trying to free herself.
"Tum Mangalore ja rhai ho?How could you Nandu?You know how much i love you na..i know you too do..tell em whats wrong I'll make everything al-right."he said crying.
"leave me Manik..I don't love you."She said.By now even she had started crying.
"Ok!you want to go you can go."He said and let her.
She was about to go down when...
"But you come back to me Nandu..I'll be waiting."he said.
Nandu turned back and looked him.He gave her a weak smile..That was enough for her.She went and hugged him tight and started to cry..he hugged her back.
"I'm sorry manik..woh harshad.."
Manik broke the hug."pstt.."he kept his finger on her lips.He slowly brought her lips close to hers and slowly started kissing her and she too responded with the same passion.
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ToralRas thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey all!
i'm here with a new Manan os:I'll be waiting:
Hope all of you like it.
do give your views and comments.
-Schacht. :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow yaaar!!!
thats one emotional story...
luved it..luv manan😳
do write more stories...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice OS dear...
U can continue too...
ToralRas thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: _keertu_

wow yaaar!!!

thats one emotional story...
luved it..luv manan😳
do write more stories...

Thank you 😳
Surely will write more 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: maanluvsgeet

Nice OS dear...

U can continue too...

thank you 😳
will surely try if time permits 😊
dewcute thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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i loved it girl...🤗

awesome work👏

write more...

Jiya😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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aww it touched my soul... manan love is so celestial😳 simply a sacred piece of writing and do write more!!!😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: dewcute

i loved it girl...🤗


awesome work👏

write more...

Jiya😛

Thanks Jiya 🤗
ToralRas thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ramishafariha

aww it touched my soul... manan love is so celestial😳 simply a sacred piece of writing and do write more!!!😊

thanks 😃
Surely will write more,Soon! 😊

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