Nandini Moorthy was going crazy. No one needed to tell her that right now. It was official. If she wasn't, why would she experience what she was going through right now? She had been scared plenty of times earlier in matters related to Manik, but it was always because she was scared ofhim but right now, she was scared for him. He had been there minutes ago but now, Harshad told her that Fab 5 weren't performing because Manik was missing and none of them had been able to contact him, and this is what scared her the most. Music was the most important part of his life, along with Fab 5 and she knew that he wouldn't leave them alone voluntarily. As she kept thinking about the situation at hand, horrible scenarios started flooding her mind.
The first two lines- confusing if read alone. It could give away too many situations to imagine. The first thought that clicked my mind was that it's set in future. Got pleasantly surprised to see it's based on precap. Something very true to their character. True, both of them had been scared earlier quite a lot of time - him for Dhruv, her from Maanik but now equations changed to them being scared for all together another topic - him from her, her for him. But the reason is quite valid, so brownie points to Nandini for that. Music and Fab5 are Maanik's life, if he leaves or misses out on any of it then that is a topic to be worried about even by Harshad let alone Nandini. I thought future ke lines mein but then I changed it. Also, I saw only one episode of KY2 so I don't really know. 😆 I was guess marofying xD
She could hear Cabir shouting for Manik and there was no reply. Her heart soared when she thought she saw him but it turned out to be someone else. Her eyes followed Cabir as he shouted, hoping she would at least catch a glimpse of Manik.
I am in love with how you portrayed her character, true and relate-able to notch. She is, in fact, just like this - caring, compassionate, easy going. Getting worried for even her enemy is nothing new for her. She would've got worried had it been Cabir or even Mukti. But the twist here is the longing. She is longing to see Maanik which she would've not felt for any of them. I don't know her character, again. It was pure instinct. Aw, even I didn't analyze it this way. 🤣
Of course, she should have been happy that her competitors were getting disqualified but she didn't want the victory because Manik wasn't there for without him, she wouldn't have come for the competition, at least, that's what she wanted to believe. Her heart was a whole other case.
And this, girl, is called returning the favour with interest. She, in a corner of her hearts recognizes that it was Maanik who boasted up her confidence due to which she was there performing. Had it not been for him then she would have chicken out and probably might not have shown up for performance. Yes. Finally something I thought of because I saw the episode. 😆
After ten minutes of searching and shouting by the members of Fab 5, she heard that voice which gave her goose-bumps all of a sudden. She turned around to see him standing there, sweating and panting, but not a single hair on his head had moved and she sighed with relief.
Here is the man this girl longed to see. Sweating, tired,panting yet satisfied for he helped her yet again without her knowing... yet again. The relief she must have felt is kind of you feel when you get back the thing you treasure the most. (Someone please send these boards away so that I can get back my Psychology and Sherlock Holmes books back😭) Yeah, pretty much. Mujhe bhi chahiye na, I don't want boards either. 😛 Mine is the first time though :P
At that moment, all she wanted was for him to meet her once. She was longing for him to shout at her, hurt at her, taunt her and fight with her. She was longing for him to touch her, and kiss her like there was no tomorrow.
And here the seed of love is sown in Nandini's life which will start germinating at it's own pace😆 Accha? xD
Okay. I am in love with this. The way you put across Nandini in this situation is absolutely amazing. And no, you haven't lost your touch in writing. You still are brilliant Niece. I don't know Nandini 🤣 Hopefully, not brilliant, at least decent. :3
And I love you for respecting my fangirl-ing and writing a drabble on MaNan. Sure xD
Massing loves you dher saara🤗 Massing? 🤣 Love you too <3
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