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Hera Flames

@Flame.Of.Rose

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Desigirl_21
Amazing OS👏
I loved reading it from Manik's viewpoint and it was great to read their conversation in her house

Thanks. He is one interesting character and since I didn't saw previous episodes yet and will see in diwali holidays. Then only I will start writing his monologues. He is one character I would love to dissect.😆

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Hera Flames

@Flame.Of.Rose

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: gujjupari
That was brilliant gurl!
The way you have penned down the situation and the conversation between the two, it was amazing! And it was realistic! No exaggerated moments is what won it for me! It was true to the characters in the show and how they would react in such a situation!

The CVs have high standards to match, after this OS!

Brilliant piece of work😃

-Pari

Thanks Pari.🤗

Ah! Glad that I was successful in my attempt of making it realistic yet related to show.

Lol, thats too high of a appreciation from your side. I'll try my level best so as to not let your expectation down from now on😳

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Bushra Iqbal

@Sanely_Insane

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

I was so excited to see another of your os. An OS on the precap. Wow. I was thinking of writing something on the precap, but I gave up the idea. Glad you wrote it. It was beautifully penned Aditi. And true to their characters, and the story.

The last bit where Nandini poured her heart out, the emotions came out so well.

Keep writing more! :-)