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aishwarya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#101

edited on p-5, 6,7 🤣🤣

now for d current updated chappyyy😛

again amazingg chappyyy😳

loveedd ittt😊

since i read d yuvreen parts i know wat s gonna happen n d upcoming parts

btw forgot to mention d banner s gorgeous

now update soon🤣

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Liana

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Posted: 10 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: JustMySelf
very nice naz 👏
waiting 4 nxt pt 😊

thank you jms😳

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Liana

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Posted: 10 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: ShivinkiJas
Awsm Awsm ... U know my review 😉
Update next One soon

hahah ok..🤣

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Liana

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Posted: 10 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: aishu3003
res for nw
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woww u started it n manan version too😲🥳
and u r not gonna continue in yuvreen version
continue na
btw amazingg start👏
lovedd ittt😊
and well-written👏
*runs to read d nxt parts*

thank you soo much aishu🤗 I got so less response.. so I wasn't like to update..🥱

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Liana

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Posted: 10 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: aishu3003
i said i'll comment above d update so here i'm🤣🤣
i'll post d comment for one chappy here and d nxt n my other resd comment🤣
m crazy know😆😛
u shld bear wit me u don have any choicewa😎
now coming to d updatee😊
very short😡😆
but was amazinggly written👏
nandini feeling for manik😊
interestingg😉
*runs to read d nxt part*😛

hahaah you soo crazy🤣 ok.. do comment how u want .. I need just a comment..🤣

Thank you jaan🤗

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Liana

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Posted: 10 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: aishu3003
Res
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m late again
and u r soo fastwa🤣
now coming to d 3rd chappyy😳
he confessed his feelings soo soon😕
how comewa😕
moi not getting good feeling abt this
hope he doesnt hurt nandu😈
awesomee part👏 *runs to read d recent updated part*🤣

yeahh... thats why its a *DARK* FF!!🤣 just wait and see😃😛

Thank youusss🤗

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Liana

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Posted: 10 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: aishu3003
edited on p-5, 6,7 🤣🤣
now for d current updated chappyyy😛
again amazingg chappyyy😳
loveedd ittt😊
since i read d yuvreen parts i know wat s gonna happen n d upcoming parts
btw forgot to mention d banner s gorgeous
now update soon🤣

pheewww replied🤣

thank you aishu for your wonderful detailed comments😳🤗

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Liana

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Posted: 10 years ago

#108

--- > Chapter 5 UPDATING TONIGHT! <---

Stay tuned! =]

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Liana

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Posted: 10 years ago

#109

--- Check next post ! =]

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Liana

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Posted: 10 years ago

#110

Z a r o o r a t

** .T.e.e.n.a.g.e.r. .L.o.v.e. **

Chapter 5 : What s the truth?

Nandini's POV

Aliya was standing infront of the car. Dhruv goes out of the car and goes to Aliya. He wanted to hug her but she again started shouting at him. They are starting fighting again.

Aliya : How can you go out with foreign girls?
Dhruv : We all are going to the beach only no more else.
Aliya : Then you can take me with u.
Dhruv : Aliya please try to understand. Manik wanted to go with Nandini and asked me to come too and..
Aliya : Shut up. I swear , I'll break up with u if u are behaving like that again.

I was soo angry seeing her talking so bad to Dhruv. I got out of the car and went to them.

Nandini : Aliya. Come with us but stop stressing!
Aliya: Ok. But I have to go and take my things from home.
Nandini : Ok. Go with Dhruv. We will wait.
Aliya. No. Never with him!
Dhruv : with whom else??
Aliya : Manik has to come with me.
Nandini : but .. ?
Manik : Ok.

I got shocked and confused when I heard a yes from Manik even without thinking.. I got scared. Didn't want Manikj to go with Aliya. Why has Manik agreed to go with her?

Nandini : Ok. But please hurry up.
Manik : Ok.

Manik and Aliya were already gone. Navya was sitting in the car and was listening to music. I sat on the street and Dhruv sat near to me.

Dhruv : kiya hua, Tum theek toh h ?
Nandini : haan. (with soft voice)
Dhruv : You look tensed.
Nandini : No, only because of Aliya...
Dhruv : because of she is behaving bad to me and goes with Manik and you don't understand why?
Nandini : Exactly.
Dhruv : I want to tell you something. Please don't think wrong.
Dhruv : Haan.. Batao kiya hua?
Dhruv : Me and manik are best friends. and I know him very well. I want to tell you that Manik is not so like you are thinking.
Nandini : What do you want to tell me? That I don't have to trust Manik?
Dhruv : Ok ok.. let us wait for them to come. When we are at the beach then you will get to see it how he is. He will go with Aliya and let you alone there. You and me will be again alone like now.
Nandini : (she can't bear it, and shouts) I don't trust you! My Manik is not so like you know/say!
Dhruv : I know him!
Nandini : (shouts) Leave me alone Dhruv!!

I went from there and sat me in the car to Navya. I was very angry at Dhruv, how dare he talk like that about Manik? Thinking about his talks makes me more scared now. What if Dhruv said the true? What if he leaves me alone and goes with Aliya like now?
And then I looked at Dhruv. He was still sitting there. I knew that not only this was the true.. there is something else to be cleared. But what?

After I came back from my thoughs I saw how Dhruv was crying very badly.
I saw it and ran to him.

Nandini : Kiya hua?
Dhruv : (softly voice) Nothing.
Nandini : What happened tell me!
Dhruv : Aliya is always behaving like this to me. I just can't take it anymore!!
Nandini : Everything will be fine! Trust me.

I hugged him. we both are waiting for them to come. My head is now on Dhruv's shoulders.
We are waiting and waiting...

Next part coming soon ! =] The story gets more and more interesting... Dark parts coming soon.. sooo Wait and seee!!:D

Like & Comment!! :DDD

Edited by -Naz.Karam- - 10 years ago

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