Future story:angad-kripa in U.S.(fan-fic)

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Hi folks here is a new fan fic from me…but have some patience as I am very "poetic" …this is what happens in the story next :

Priithvi proposes to K but she refuses…infact he himself realized that this isn't the right time to think about marriage….this is just the beginning of K's carrier n she has a long way to go. So as time passes…..P n K get on to become even better friends and concentrate only on their careers though P has hidden feelings for our Krips (as always;) )…but he decides to give her ample time so that she herself falls for him one day….(now that's like a good boy…poor him!! He doesn't know that in my fiction, he'll never get his sapnon ki raani K …he he I am cruel naa?? 😉)

Here, our poor soul i.e. our angu darling is outta work.😭 He succeeds in his mission of spoiling his own career n thereby constructing n shaping his beautiful n adorable lady-love Kripa's career step-by-step. Now when its all said n done…..he sits back n thinks over….

Angad: "why have I been doing all this?? Kya mujhe kripa waapas mil jayegi?? Kabhi nahi….wo muje kabhi maaf nahi karegi. Aur ab to maine wo kar diya hai jo mujhe karna tha….kripa ka dil toda tha….aaj uska hisaab pura karne ke liye khud ko barbaad kar baitha hun…. Tum yahi chahti thi naa Kripa? Tumhe tumhaari nayi zindagi mubaarak ho. Mera maksad pura hua…Ab main kabhi tumhaare saamne nahi aaunga…. Main tumhaara ateet (past) hun…. Tumhaare liye ek toota hua buraa sapnaa… ab kabhi tumhe mujhse ye shikaayat nahi hogi ki main tumhaari zindagi me kabhi aaya hi kyun tha…. Prithvi ke saath tumhe nayi zindagi mubaarak ho….."

He suddenly remembers the moment when he saw Prithvi hugging Kripa in their park n P proposed to her in excitement…. Angad cant control his feelings n gets tears in his eyes

angad: "maine tumhe usii din kho diya tha Kripa jis din tumhara dil toda tha… ab tum apni zindagi me jo bhi karo, jiske saath bhi raho…. Muje koi matlab nahi hona chahiye…. Lekin dekho ye kambakht dil nahi manta…. Ye aaj bhi tumhe kisi aur ke saath dekh kar…" he gets emotional n feels a lil jealous too… " par …..nahi !! Ab aur nahi"

Now our angu takes a major step….(which will be revealed later! )

Meanwhile, Kripa moves on in her life with her glowing career n glowing….err….face too (hee hee really our krips has a glowing n beautiful skin !!😊 ). Angad disappears completely from her life n slowly she forgets about him. Actually….she just pretends!!

Its not that she forgets him completely. For the first few weeks after angad disappears, she doesn't bother about it. But slowly, it happens that she begins to wonder as to where he has disappeared…whether he is alive or no. but still she pretends that she doesn't even remember him n so never tries to find out. She feels very nice about the very fact that she spoiled his career n so he had to leave this industry…. But she cant understand that what happened to him next? Whether he started some business of his own or what on earth he is doing? All these questions wander in her mind at times but she still pretends that she doesn't care anyway….

Slowly…..one year passes by….!!

Now here my real fiction starts……

Kripa is still a big star!! She is happy n settled. She lives in her own bungalow in Mumbai while her parents are in nainital who keep visiting her from time to time. Prithvi runs his own company PK enterprises which is….obviously…..his n kripa's company. Over the time, Prithvi has turned into this mature and suljha hua gentleman who still holds K in some corner of his heart….but still has patience!! He doesn't want to rush into things. He is waiting for Kripa to take a step towards him.

But apni kripa ki haalat to we know naa….she pretends that she is very happy n contended… but there is a void in her life….and believe me….she enjoys this void!! There is a silent corner in her life where there is darkness n a sort of pain…that only she can feel…though it is painful to visit this corner, but the very feeling that its so private makes it worth!! The fact is that Kripa feels this is something that only belongs to her n noone else….her career is for her family n prithvi as they want to see her happy….her singing n her music is for her fans….her presence is for her friends…..so what is it that belongs to her?? Uska apna kya hai?? this is the thing!! Its sometimes painful to be alone, but she somehow enjoys this pain n keeps it to herself as it is soo private….n we all know what is this pain all about…..though K will never admit it….we know that this pain has a name and that is…..ANGAD!👏

The scene is: Kripa is traveling alone in a flight. She is coming back from Canada after a business deal. In the flight, she meets a very pretty n sweet girl Vaanya who is sitting in her neighbourhood. Vaanya is sitting next to a sardaar jii who is sleeping n leaning over her shoulders !! Kripa sees this n Vaanya looks back at her…they both smile. Kripa is sitting next to a foreigner old man who sees this and offers his own seat to vaanya n goes to hers. Now Kripa n Vaanya sit together n laugh about sardar jii sleepin on her shoulders. then they introduce themselves to each other. Vaanya resides in Mumbai itself but she has studied all her life in Canada. She says that she had gone to U.S. to meet her cousin brother. Then she went to Canada to meet her college friends. n now she is going back to Mumbai. Kripa also tells about herself n they chat along…..Kripa is a lil mature now n so she finds absolute pleasure in talking to this young chirpy kiddish cutie girl and K remembers her own college days…meanwhile kripa asks her:

Kripa: "achha to tum apne brother se milne gayi thi?? Kya karte hain wo? "

Vanya: "he is my cousin brother. He owns a leading marketing company of U.S. which endorses many leading products in the U.S. (…n blah blah…). He is a 60percent ke partner in that company"

K: "ohh to tum apne cousin se milne itni duur gayi thi"

V: "haan. Wo mere sabse favourite bro hain. Jab wo India me the, kabhi unse nahi mil payi kyunki main kabhi India aati hi nahi thi Canada se. par ab U.S. me unse milna hota rehta tha aur wo mere sabse fave ban gaye. Ab aisa lagta hai jaise unhe bachpan se jaanti hun. "

K: "achha wo pehle India me the?? wow lekin achaanak abroad settle hona mushkil hoga naa?? Apne gharwaalon se duur sabse duur??"

V: "ohh leave it. U wont want to know about him. he is adorable but I don't know why he did it to himself. I just cant understand."

K: "wat he did to himself? "

V: "when he was in India, he had a wonderfull life. But then….he fell for a girl. Everything was fine but fate had a different plan. Some misunderstandings took place n he broke-off with her after hurting her badly. Later he came to know that he had misunderstood her ….(she goes on)"

Hmmmm so now you know that Vaanya's cousin is noone but….u know!😊

V: " n then he decided to go away from her n he went abroad to start a new life"

K: "ohh how sad! Your bro made a big sacrifice. But I cant understand why he didn't tell her after doing it all….well…people have their own reasons! "

V: "yes. Pyaar karne waale bewkoof hote hain"

N they laugh it off…..

V: "see I clicked some snaps when I was staying with bhaiyya. Wana see?? "

N she starts showing those snaps to her. All are her own snaps.

V: "dekho ye main e-square par…ye bhaiyya ne click kiya tha…aur ye…arre ye lo bhaiyya aur main sath sath.."

Kripa gets a shock! Angad??

K: "angad? "

V: "arre u know my bro? "

K: "angad khanna rite? Arre unko kaun nahi jaanta…he was very popular."

She feels a lil awkward. Vaanya shows more snaps of her n angad together in U.S. while K just looks on in amazement….she is blank…the only questions pouncing on her mind being…..

guys ill continue only if u all like it. so plz tel me do u want me to continue?? 😊

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Posted: 20 years ago
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i dont like it, i love it. man continue soon pls pls pls 😛
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Posted: 20 years ago
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ya ill continue soon...thanks both of u
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waiting for ur fan fic hney 😉
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PART 2

Kripa feels both a lil awkward n amazed at the same time. She has to hide it from Vaanya that she knew Angad once upon a time….n she feels like digging out the minutest details of angad from her too…..ohh! but anyways, K somehow manages to change the topic n let go of all her feelings for the time being.

Scene:
Mumbai Airport. Kripa kisses a goodbye to Vaanya as she feels an unknown affection towards her. After all our Vaanya is such an angel !!

Scene:
Kripa comes back home. She is restless!! She cant understand whats going on n she feels numb!! All she can feel is a sort of pain in her heart somewhere which is very strange but familiar….familiar?? well….she realizes….it's the same feeling…..yes it is!! she recognises this pain very well !! Kripa goes on a roller-coaster ride to her past….

Oh yes! It's the same pain that she had felt when Angad had insulted her in the disco after coming back from nainital…….she remembers vry well…. Her world had come tumbling down upon her as she realized that her day-dream had been broken….it was an illusion that she had had for a couple of days…. Ohh! How she had felt !! she remembers very precisely that corner of her room where she had cried her heart out that night….n she remembers very precisely how helpless she had felt !! All she wished that night was that angad would come n pick her up in his arms and say that he was sorry for having played a terribly stupid prank on her n that he would never do that again n that he had missed her terribly while she was away n so many more things that she wanted to hear from him….she couldn't stop illusioning that night…Angad's eyes, which used to dive straight into hers and gaze endlessly as if begging for mercy…each time he stared at her, it felt like as if he said…"will you have some mercy on me now and give me a peace of your love? I have been waiting all day long….please don't test my patience… have mercy on me and come straight into my arms…….please bring my pity to an end"….Angad's hands, which would always find a way into her hair-locks n still be restless….everytime he made her sit in his lap to discuss what he did whole day, those fingers kept locking and unlocking themselves in and out of her hands…even though she tried hard to listen to each word of his, she couldn't help it as a different conversation went on between their hands which diverted her attention n brought a smile on her face…n that naughty smile of angad then followed….like always, he made an innocent face and asked "what happened? why r u smiling?" as if he knew nothing….n then he would start yapping again, but this time his eyes would glow with a naughty shimmer as if saying…"I know that u know…but what to do? Cant help it !! It was a long long day n I missed u every second. Now lemme make-up for everything and please..don't interrupt!! " .…..Angad's arms, where she used to melt and go red n warm in cheeks….the place where she could spend the rest of her life…each time he hugged her, she felt like a pampered kid…..each time he picked her up, she felt as if she was that innocent princess from a fairy-tale who always wondered what was love and one day, she had a fall in the market…n she closed her eyes out of pain n fear….n when she opened them….she found herself in 2 strong arms….she looked up…she saw a pair of eyes gazing at her dreamily….she asked him who he was n he said…"I am your slave…" she rolled her eyes in disbelief as he dropped her on the backseat of her cart….while the ghodaawala pulled the strings around the horses' necks, she stared at him n that young, handsome, tall slave stared back dreamily at her as if admiring her beauty…..his eyes wanted to say a lot but his mouth could only say …"believe me princess…I am really your slave n I will always be "
Oh! How helpless she had felt that night! All she wanted that night was a miracle that would bring Angad and all those days back ! but….it was too late!!

Yah! This is the same feeling….the feeling of rejection….the feeling of being cheated….the feeling of being hurt badly…..but…why?? why should I feel this way? It was all history n I had kept no room for those memories….so why am I feeling the same way again today? Why now when I should be the happiest person in the world? These queries kept Kripa's mind ticking all night.
By next morning….she had an answer!!

Kripa's tears told her what she could never find out on her own….
The answer was….
That night, she had felt as if her soul had been separated from its body….as if she only had a soul which used to stay in a someone's body who was now gone…..far far away…..but today….she felt the other way round…..she felt that today she only had a body….and her soul was missing…..which lied miles and miles away from her….inside that person's body who had a name…..the unfortunate name that K hated the most n ridiculed the most….Angad !!

Angad?? What did he do to himself? and to me? He spoiled his carrier because of me?? K thinks over n over as Vaanya's words echo in her mind….
"my bro had a wonderful life here in India. To top it off, something happened to him that swept him off his feet…hefell for a girl…. but fate had a different plan………..
broke-off after hurting her badly….she never listened to him again…..so he decided to do something that could never even cross her mind….he started ruining his own life just to bring smiles on her face, he started devastating himself…so that she could have peaceful nights….he did it all….for her….without even saying it once…..no he never said it…he just did what he had to….n then he left….taking all the memories along…..he did it all for her but never for himself…..no he never did it so that he could win her back….he never wanted anything in turn from her…..but he kept it to himself how much he wanted her back….how badly he missed her….how madly he loved her…..n how insane and jealous he got when she seemed to be slipping away in someone else's arms….n so to hide it all, he decided to move away from her….forever n ever….!! That's all !! weird naa?? Well that's my bhaii !! "

K: "he did it for me? How could it be possible? He hated me so much!"
She thinks over…..she tries to recall everything that happened……angad's wedding…her accidental abortion…..her decision to take a stand against him…..him challenging her guts….then the brighter side of her life that started showing at the right place and at the right time….her concerts…….n finally…..agad's downfall…..everything !! she recalls everything!! It just happened so fast…..she never got time to sit back n think over….she fails to understand what happened n why…..but then….she recalls something…..!!!

Her thoughts come to a halt….!!

The one thing she never got rid of even in her dreams…..!!

She remembered his eyes….his eyes that said it all…..his eyes which always seemed rebellious….rebellious coz they always seemed to be saying things he would never allow them to say….his eyes……which always opposed their own master's actions…..yes !! Kripa remembers it all…..in a flash….!!
She remembers the priceless shine in his eyes when she refused to compete with him…..angad had said "kripa tum angad khanna ke saamne zero ho" but his eyes…??
His eyes said something else……they seemed to be saying…."angad khanna ko agar koi haraa sakta hai to wo tum ho"……
She remembers the applause n the respect that she got from his wandering eyes while he kept on murmuring…"tumhara performance bilkul bakwaas tha"
She remembers it all….it cant b fake! Yes she cant be wrong again….! Again? Was she wrong ever?? She had thought so….but no!

K bursts into tears!! She feels helpless n broken. She cries her heart out in front of a mirror while she tries to figure it out what on earth had happened to her that she couldn't understand what was goin on around her.

She wakes up in her bed next morning! Daadi serves her bed-tea.
D: "raat bahut thak gayi thi kya? Zameen par hi so gayi? Aane ke baad muje fone bhi nahi kiya? Main khud hi chali ayee….kaisi rahi deal? "
K; "theek thi dadi. Hame wo contract mil raha hai."
She hides it all from daadi.

Dadi leaves. K goes to work. Prithvi is happy to find that they have got the contract. K works all day long….her mind being somewhere else!!
As night falls, K gets restless!!
2 days pass by…..K gets more n more restless. Finally, she makes a decision…

K: "mujhe apne sawaalon ka jawaab chahiye usse. Usey batana hoga…..sab kuchh… main ye sab kyun sahun? Ye sab usne kiya hai….main uske kiye ki sazaa kyun bhugtoon? Usey mere saare sawalon ka jawaab dena hoga….tumne aisa kyun kiya angad? Kyun? Main ab bhi tum par vishwaas nahi karti ki tum aisa kar sakte ho….tum? nahi tumne ye sab mere liye nahi kiya. Kuchh aur baat hai. par jo bhi hai, tumhe apne muh se mujhe bataana hoga. Tum is tarah sab kuchh apne tak hi nahi rakh sakte. Tumhe bataana hi hoga angad."

K decidesto meet him. But ofcourse….she doesn't know where is he besides that he is somewhere in u.s…..she tries to recall whether Vaanya had told her anything about it…but no…she never mentioned the city. Now K will have to hunt him down on her own…
She cant ask the khannas….ofcourse not!! No Way!! They don't exist for her! She cant tell Prithvi neither can she ask mishty….what to do? Her brain does all the worrying while her heart skips a beat every time she misses him…!! YES! She starts missing him!

She surfs the internet….but all in vein…..no signs of him anywhere….she starts getting restless…..
K: "angad…tum kahan ho angad….kahan ho…please baat karo mujse..please "
She cries as she remembers his vulnerable face….n those eyes….she remembers the last time when he had whispered those 3 magical words in her ears…"I love u kripa"…then she remembers his face in vaanya's snaps….Just then….she recalls something….! Yes that's it. she remembers very well the tower that stood high behind Angad n Vaanya…..must have been a famous one……angad wore a red shirt…..yes she remembers everything about that snap. Here she goes…she searches for all the famous monuments in all the cities of U.S. …after a real long session of browsing loads of websites, she sees it ! yes she sees it !!
K: "this is it angad. I found you. See I found u. New York"

Scene:
K is at home packing her bags. Prithvi calls up on her cell.

P: "hi krips. Kya ho raha hai. office nahi aayi aaj?"
K: "prithvi maine tumse kaha tha naa…main jaa rahi hun"
P: "what? Are u serious? Ohh stop it Kripa. Tum kahin nahi jaa rahi"
K: "no prithvi. Main jaa rahi hun. Mere tickets bhi aa gaye hain. Aaj shaam ki flight hai. tum aaoge muje see-off karne?"

P(laughing): "what? Really tum jaa rahi ho? Tell me that u r joking kripa. I don't believe you? Us chhoti si deal ke liye tum itni serious ho? Arre ok baba…if u want that deal so badly, ill go. Ok ? ill talk to them. Main unse bolunga India aakar humse sari details discuss Karen. Tumhe wahan jaane ki koi zarurat nahi. Aur waise bhi, tum abhi to gayi thi naa Canada. Itni jaldi doosra trip? No way. U stay. Ill handle everything"

K: "no prithvi. Wo baat nahi hai. muje jaana hi hai. after all, hamara kuchh farz banta hai unki taraf. Unhone hamaare liye itne shows organize kiye hain. Ab agar wo chahte hain hum unka show Karen, we shouldn't be rude. Muje personally jaakar milna chahiye unse. Don't u think so?"

Now u know what Kripa has told Prithvi….she has told him that she has to go for a deal. Actually, she really has some business out there, but it can be managed without going to Canada. But she has to find an excuse for fleeing away ! u know why!

P: "ok agar tum itna insist karti ho to….go. but take care. N I am coming to drop u to the airport. Wait for me. What time is your flight?"

Scene:
Kripa is in the flight to Canada. She has secretly booked tickets for a flight from Canada to new york already.
K: "main nahi jaanti ki main ye sab theek kar rahi hun ya nahi. Bus main itna jaanti hun ki main tumhaare paas aa rahi hun angad….main aa rahi hun…chaahe tum kahin bhi ho…tumhe mujse milna parega….chahhe tum chaaho ya naa chaaho"

K takes another flight from Canada to New York.

Scene :
Kripa gets down in NY.

Kripa puts her foot down on the land of NY. (guys forgive me if I am wrong…actually I am not sure if it snows in NY….please change the name to a city where it snows ! )As soon as she slips her hand inside the pocket of her dark-green overcoat to remove her hand-gloves out, her sight gets lil blurred. An ice-cold breeze passes across her face…..and she wipes off the tears with her gloves…..but they keep flowing…no its not the chilly breeze…its something else ! Kripa stares at the snow-clad mountains around her…..n says to herself:
K: "tum yahin ho naa angad? Main jaanti hun. Dekho…I m here too"

She suddenly wakes up as the man behind her screams…. "mam would u please??"
"ohh….sorry" kripa says n gives him way to go. As she takes a step ahead, she turns her head behind once again….to have a look at those milky white snow-clad mountains again… "ohh they are so silent" she says to herself….then…she turns again n starts walking….( the music in the background starts playing……the title track from Kal Ho naa Ho….the sound of the heartbeats…..dhak dhak….dhak dhak…..the scene changes….from the beautiful snowy mountains to the stylish lifestyle of NY, then the nighltlife, then the famous towers n the highly stylized market places…..dhak dhak….the beat continues…..n then……!!
The scene halts….at a busy street in NY…..thousands of people rushing around….most of them in grey, black,.brown big-collared long overcoats and hand-gloves……most of them rushing for work…..(dhak dhak……n now the piano starts playin "har ghadi badal rahi hai roop zindagi…..chaanv hai kahin……" )…….n somebody comes out of the crowd…..black pants, full-length black overcoat…..rubbing his hands together….somebody comes out of the crowd….n that's….ohh, that innocent adorable face…..!….that's Angad ! that's him !
(guys, imagine the scene from Kabhi Khushi Kabhi Ghum where Shahrukh makes his entry. He gets down from a helicopter…now imagine angad in the same get-up. The piano keeps playing….. "har pal yahan….jee bhar jiyo…jo hai samaa…kal ho naa ho…"). A happens to push someone by mistake n he says sorry while the man turns n gives a smile……
Kripa is shown taking a taxi….while angad walks further…..n the tune stops. Today's episode over guys 😊 please tell if u liked it 😃




part 2
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👏 fantastic fabulous amazin superb........i dont think i havbe enough words 😉
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👏 👏 👏 as usual awesum hney

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