Kripa’s first attempt 2 destroy Angad....

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Dadi cums into Kripa's room and is shocked to see tht Kripa is changed and getting ready to go out.

Dadi- Kripa..where r u going? Tum abhi abhi hospital seh nikli ho.

Kripa (absent mindedly packing her handbag)-Dadi aap chinta muth ki jiye..ill b fine...im going for sum important wrk.

Dadi- but WHAT important wrk kripa? luk..listen to me n stay home for a couple of days..tumhe aaraam ki zaroorat hain.

Kripa-(sighs) luk dadi im okay. ill be bak in a minute. (kisses dadi on the cheek) Bye.

Dadi tries to stop her but Kripa goes. Dadi sighs.

Dadi-Kripa..mein jaanthi hoon..tum angad ko ab tak nahi bhool paye ho.

Kripa calls an auto but it drives past her. she waits at the bus stop. Angad drives passed..but sees Kripa and reverses. He gets out the car and goes to kripa. Kripa looks at him wid fire in her eyes. Angad gulps.

Angad-Kripa..Tum yaha?

Kripa looks at him then looks away.

Kripa-Tumse matlap?

Angad looks down..giving his puppy-dog eyes look.

Angad-Nahi..woh..tum abhi abhi hospital seh baahar ayi ho..to maine socha...main tumhe kahin drop kardoo?

Kripa looks at him and raises her eyebrows.

Kripa-No ill manage.

Angad insists. Kripa goes quiet for a moment..thinking about sumthink and then agrees. Angad is surprised tht she agreed so quickly but opens the door for her happily. Kripa gets in. Angad gets in the car and starts driving.

It is really quiet in the car..Angad tries to make useless convo.."how r u kripa..how're u feeling?" but kripa shrugs him off (bechara) and gives one word..cold answers.

Kripa-Angad stop the car.

Angad stops and looks out the window...confused...

Angad-Tum kaha jaana chahti ho?

Kripa looks at him and smiles coldly. Then she looks out the window to a big building. its a studio. She turns back at Angad and says very slowly and carefully.

"BEATS-MUSIC-STUDIO".

Angad is shocked.

To be continued...

Edited by dp123 - 20 years ago

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Posted: 20 years ago
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👏 good job, please continue.

My poor jaan angad😭 please usko jada tadpana mat.

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Posted: 20 years ago
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dp, please angad tum aur tadpao, wo mujhe shor kar deepey ke paas chala gaya hai, ab uski saza toh milni chahaye.

good job and keep writing.
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Posted: 20 years ago
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😆 ok ill continue..ill make angad suffer more!
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Posted: 20 years ago
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i like it alot!!!!! make him suffer but not tooo much. plz contiue soon!!!!!!
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Posted: 20 years ago
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That was cool, first jhataka for Angad😃
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Posted: 20 years ago
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lolll thanks guys. ill continue soon...
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Posted: 20 years ago
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i feel ur subject is wronge it should b angads 1st chance to destroy himself😆

plz cont

esha

Edited by esha oberoi - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Originally posted by: dp123

lolll thanks guys. ill continue soon...

how soon ??????????

waiting for it

lots of love

esha

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Posted: 20 years ago
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gr8 job!👏

although the way kripa's feeling rite now, any scene with a-k and a car wud probably be kripa running him over with a car.lol

anyways,plz continue😊

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