Dard-e-dil

Hi guys, I had written a poem when i was going through an emotional rollercoaster ride n a heart break. SOmehow i think the poem suits Kripa's situation. The poem's very personal but I would like to share it with my sweetoos.

Dard-e dil

Mere dil mein ek armaan tha, tumse milne ka

Mere dil mein ek khwab tha, tumhe paane ka.

Jab tum door the, to aisa laga ke tum mere dhadkano mein ho,

Jab tum paas the, to aisa laga jaise tum koi aur hi ho.

Jo mere ankhon ne dekha, mere dil ne use pehchaan liya

Dikhta hai bhola bhala sharif par churata hai ladkiyon ka jiya.

Dil toota, rona aya par dil se yaadein gaya nahin,

Magar pagli, kya tujhe ehsaas hai ki woh kabhi tumhara tha hi nahin.

Dil ki baatein dil hi jaane, main kyun jaanu,

Rab ki baatein, Rab hi jaane, main kyun maanu.

Meri kismat mere haathon mein hai, kisi aur ke haathon mein nahin,

Meri life sirf meri life hai, kisi aur ki amaanat nahin.

Mujhe ab kisipe aetbaar nahin, kisise pyar nahin.

Mujhe ab bas aitraaz hai, par mohabbat nahin.

Ab main apni zindagi jeeyungi.

Tumhe bhooladungi.

Tumhe bhooladungi nahin, main bhoola chuki hoon

Mere dil se tumhare yaadein miita chuki hoon.

Dard-e-dil ka ehsaas hai mujhe,

Toote huwe dil ka ehsaas hai mujhe.

Is dard ko zuban par laoongi nahin,

Tumhe apna kabhi banaaungi nahin

I know its kind of long. Sorry. Tell me if u guys like it. I was going through a lot while writing this. But now i feel happy sharing this with u guys.

👏WOW Kaj........app toh bohat talented hain..really dear lvued it,i luv poetry n i liked it so muich tht im gonna write it on my diary...

great work.... I have a small sher of my own to add....
(Dont know whose it is though) I think that it wud suit Krips tooo....


Bahoot tamanna thi, pyar mein aashiyan banane ki,
Bana chuke to lag gayi Nazar zammane ki.
Usi ka karz hai jo aaj hain aankhon mein aansoo,
Sazaa mili hai humey tumsey dil laganey ki…



wat say u ????

Nice sher. I wonder who wrote it

Originally posted by: sana_9

👏WOW Kaj........app toh bohat talented hain..really dear lvued it,i luv poetry n i liked it so muich tht im gonna write it on my diary...

aww thanx Sana. ur so sweet.

aww thanx Sweetu.😳 Every single word in the poem is true. this is exactly how i felt. N I think Kripa is going through a rollercoaster ride too

Originally posted by: sweetnsariyal

wow!!!!...its awesome👏.....straight 4m the heart...very touching...just luved it...n sana is right u r extremely talented kaju..😊

really kaj.........its very touching

Originally posted by: Kaj!

aww thanx Sweetu.😳 Every single word in the poem is true. this is exactly how i felt. N I think Kripa is going through a rollercoaster ride too

u r alwys welcome hun😊....ya i knw evry word was true....it showed...its suits kripa too...

Shukriya sweetoos. U r all very sweet.