Fan-Fic after break-up(part2)

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Hey guys, I wrote part 2 for u guys but just to make it easier for you guys I put Part I up too, so you can remember where I left off.

PART-1

Angad has just ditched Kripa, Naina has fixed Angad and mishty's wedding. Kripa HATES Angad.

This scene is three days after Angad-Kripa break up

In the morning Angad is walking to his car ready to go to the studio. (Angad and Kripa don't talk to each other. They still have recordings together, and even Naina can't stop it because the audience love Angad-Kripa's jodi. Kripa can't run away either cause she is bound by the contrack)

Out of his everyday habit (Kripa and Angad were together for some months so its hard to break habits.) he waits for Kripa to come, he forgets that he broke up with her, after five minutes he gets annoyed and goes to the outhouse. He knocks on the door and yells "Kripa yaar what the hell, just because I love you doesn't mean you can keep me waiting for so long." There's no answer. Suddenly it all comes back to him and he thinks Angad what the hell are you doing, Why are you waiting for her. Waiting for that stupid girl who thought that she was good enough for me. Anyways Lets go Angad. When he says this something hurts in his heart. While he is driving he keeps on looking at the empty seat and imagines Kripa sitting in it. He feels really annoyed at himself. Finally, he reaches the studio, he doesn't see Kripa. He asks everybody at the studio, they say that she hasn't arrived yet. He gets all worried about her and thinks where could she be. She wasn't even in her room.

After like 30 min. Kripa arrives with Prithvi. Angad gets all jealous seeing them together. Prithvi drops her off and leaves. She goes in the elevator and who else but her Angad is waiting for her inside. The door closes and she sees him she remembers how he betrayed her. She gets a hurt expression on her face. He asks her : "Why the hell are you so damn late" Kripa doesn't answer. So he repeats himself, she still doesn't answer. He gets mad and grabs her by the shoulders and says, "when I'm talking to you, you answer back alright. I don't take this crap from anybody. Now tell me why you were so damn late, and what you were doing with that Prithvi." She gets equally mad as Angad, and frees herself from his arms, and yells: "Why the hell do you care, I can be here anytime I want. I can be with who ever I want. I'm not your property and you have no right to ask me anything" Suddenly the lights go off and the elevator stops like it had done the other day.( yes yes I know I'm too filmi) Kripa looks at Angad angrily and says, "Just because I fell or that earlier doesn't mean you can fool me again. Meine ek baar galti ki thi tumhe samajhne mein, who galti dubhara nahi karoongi." Angad feels hurt listening to her last words. Angad says, "I don't have time to waste on you and I wouldn't be stupid enough to waste my precipous time on trying to scare you." Kripa gets really mad at this and says, " Oh yeah you surely had time to play with my emotions." Angad feels guilty and doesn't say anything. After a while he says, "look, I swear I didn't do anything to the elevator." Kripa laughs sarcastically and says, "You expect me to believea man who takes nothing serious in life, who is a cheater, a liar, and a fake." Angad yells: "SHUT UP" enough of this Ok." Kripa gets scared and doesn't say anything. Both of them are silent and Kripa starts pushing buttons. Angad gets irritated and says "Stop that its not helping." Kripa says " atleast I'm trying unlike you." Suddenly Kripa feels weird and faints. Angad at first thinks that Kripa is trying to get him back for the joke. But after a while he gets really worried he yells "Kripa Kripa are you ok whats wrong" He shakes her. She is lying in his lap. She wakes up after a while. He says, "R u Ok" she doesn't say anything and pushes him back. Angad lets out a sigh of relief.

PART-2

Angad is really happy to see that Kripa is Ok. He feels a bit weird that why he got so worried about Kripa. Kripa who still feels a little shaky falls back and faints on Angad. Angad gets really scared. He is holding her in his arms. And just on time the elevator starts to move again. They go up then come down again, kripa still in Angad's strong arms(awww). He picks her up takes her to his red car, then he drives off to the hospital. He takes her to the doctor (don't worry u guys it's not what u think). The doctor does her check up. She regains consciousness, she's all like "where am I" The doctor says you had fainted so your boyfriend brought you here. Kripa is like my boyfriend then she looks at Angad. Angad asks the doctor what's wrong with her. Dr. says its nothing serious right now but it can turn out to be if she doesn't take care of herself. She has become very weak, and doesn't seem like she's been eating much. She's really stressed and depressed. All the thinking and not eating is effecting her health. (sorry guys don't know how doctors be talking). The doctor then asks Kripa is there something that has been bothering you lately. Kripa and Angad look at each other, he feels guilty. She says nothing. Doctor says ok and tells Angad to take care of Kripa and make sure that she eats food tonight and takes her medicine. Angad says ok. Kripa gets up, Angad goes up to support her but she pushes him back. She tries to walk but she feels shaky and kinda falls on Angad. (hey guys I don't know the symptoms of depression and weakness so I'm just making it all up) He just holds her and says SHUT UP and walks her out without caring about what she says. Kripa feels his touch. They go to his car and he orders Sit, she remains stubborn and says I don't need you, I'll take a Taxi home. He again forces her in the car. He is careful not to hurt her when he grabs her and forces her to sit in the car. (awwww) In the car the punjabi song Kanu Mein Kahaundi Bewafa is playing by BALLY JAGPAL ( I love this song)

Hey How you doinIts oracle becomes the last nightAs though love inI know it's hurt was a damnbut i am your manbecuase you can seewe was meant to beIts like words of a feather babyYou did everything it mattersI know i make you crybut i am telling you why Tak lan mein tenu kite sohneyaVe mere ruk jande perchit karda ve meraghut bhar lawan teraAuokhi hogi katni ve sathon raatve koi pichle janam disadi tere naal hai ve tere naaltere naal honi gal baat ve koi pichle janam di Rab di sohn tenu mili aa jaroor vetan hi ruk jaan per hoke majboor vekidan tenu mein bulawan ghut seene naal lawankahton rab ne banayee vakh jaatve koi pichle janam disadi tere naal hai ve tere naaltere naal honi gal baat ve koi pichle janam di Dil diyan galan kite dil ch na rehan veseene naal laa la tenu nein sade kehan veEhna aakhiyan ch vas kujh sanu vi tu daskite ho naa jawan channa barbaadve koi pichle janam disadi tere naal hai ve tere naal tere naal honi gal baat ve koi pichle janam di Sohneya ton bina rabba rooh sadi kali veGhamma de Jhana de vich jind rul chali veMenu apni bana le seene ghut ghut laa lekiwen hanjuan di rokan barsaatve koi pichle janam disadi tere naal hai ve tere naaltere naal honi gal baat ve koi pichle janam di Angad keeps looking at Kripa and he slowly says Kripa I know u hate me but please look after yourself. Kripa doesn't answer. He then turnsaway feeling mad at himself and thinks Angad what the hell r u doing u hate this girl. As they r driving they reach the beach where they had spent their first date together. It brings back happy yet painful memories. Kripa gets tears in her eyes. When Angad sees this he cant control his emotions and it brings some tears in his eyes too. Kripa gets mad and says Angad why r u doing this to me. Why. First u leave me deserted at the point of my life when I needed you the most, and now you're acting like you really care for me. Why? What do you get out of it? Please just leave me alone and let me live my life in peace. Free me from this contract in which I have to see ur face everyday. Angad's heart fills with pain when she says this. He's still ignoring his real feelings for her. He starts driving really fast and says u actually think I care bout u now. I don't give a damn. Im just doing it for my show cause ur the other lead. Kripa gets pissed off by hearing this and says stop the damn car. He doesn't stop. He says Angad Khanna does what he wants to do. They reach the house and Kripa goes into the outhouse while Angad goes to his room.They both try to sleep but can't.Kripa(thinking, trying to be strong): Angad tum chahe jitna bhi mujhe todhne ki koshish karlo I'll not break down. You were my life but now I don't give a damn about you (she can't control her emotions and starts to cry) why did you do this to me Angad. I left my whole world for you. I did everything for you. Why Angad why?Angad (thinking): Kripa now I've taken my revenge. You were stupid to think that you were good enough for me. He tries to sleep but the time he spent with Kripa keeps coming back to him. He sees her happy face and then sees tears flowing out of her eyes. He gets up to wipe them away but realizes that she's not there, he was just imagining. He thinks: Kripa leave me alone. Damn why can't I get u out of my mind. GODDDDDDDDDDDD. Why can't I see tears in her eyes. And to think I gave her those tears (tries to b tough again) But good she deserved them, she had challenged Angad with that slap. He tries to sleep again but can't stop thinking about Kripa's crying face. Then suddenly he remembers "Oh shit I forgot to give Kripa her medicines they're still in my car." He gets up, runs to the car (cho chweet, oh by the way its really late in the night) After he gets the medicine, he thinks I wonder if Kripa ate anything for dinner, so he goes to his kitchen, grabs some food and goes to the outhouse. He knocks on her door for about a minute. She gets up thinking who could it be this late(she should be used to this by now) she opens the door and is shocked to see Angad there, she says what the hell r u doing here, he doesn't bother to answer and just goes inside and makes himself comfortable. She asks him again. He replies I'd forgotten earlier but the doctor told me to make sure that you eat your food and take your medicines tonight. So I'm just here to make sure. Kripa gets mad and says I need need your false sympathy, I can take care of my own self. Just as she says this she trips over and falls on Angad (lol) he catches her, he's like really. She feels a bit embarrassed and yells LET GO OF ME. He says today u're eating and infront of me right now. You should consider yourself lucky that Angad Khanna brought u food today. She says I already consider myself lucky that I found out Angad Khanna's true face before it was too late. Angad gets mad goes to her puts his finger on his lips and says very slowly basically breathing on her face I don't wanna hear one word out of your mouth. Kripa gets scared and does what he tells her to do. Angad takes her hand, walks her by the bed makes her sit on it. He sits on the floor and puts the food in her mouth (awww). Ok I'll finish it later. I'm tired now, its late in the night and I still gotta do my work. Lots of love u guys. I hope u all enjoyed my story. It kinda got long, sorry. God bless u and good night, sweet dreams.

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Posted: 20 years ago
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cant wait till the next segment!! loved it!
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yay! that was great...hope this really happens!
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Yup it was sweet😳😳😳 though i did not understand the song bit but other than that it was reeeeeeeeeeelllllly CUTE👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Just waiting for all this to happen.

Fab job!

CAUTION:"I still don't trust Angad!"
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really gd!! hope ekta sees this and makes it part of her script😊
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it was fabulous... plz continue
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plz, be continue... i hope make it like this after the break up
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its Amazing story... plz contiune...

~sweta~

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Awasome Story............👏...........Cant wait to read the other part..............😆...........Plz write it soooooooooonnnnnnnn.

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