Fan Fic: Hate To Love: Kinjal: P 1- Pg 5

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Sadie

@Sadie101

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#31

Shifali... its a g8 start... 👏
well i am really look forward to the funny part of the storyline..hehe
and yes Kanav cannot be described in a word and his smile is a killer 😳

Edited by Sadie101 - 17 years ago

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Jwalamukhi

@-Jwalamukhi-

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+ 9

Posted: 17 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: Sadie101

Shifali... its a g8 start... 👏
well i am really look forward to the funny part of the storyline..hehe
and yes Kanav cannot be described in a word and his smile is a killer 😳

Haha! Another one of his fans! Uff!😆

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Jwalamukhi

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Posted: 17 years ago

#33

Part 1 comming in about 10 mins

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Jwalamukhi

@-Jwalamukhi-

Stunner

+ 9

Posted: 17 years ago

#34

A girl made his way to collage, along with her best friend. It was Neena...

N: Kinjal, I am going to meet him!
K: Who?

When Kinjal asked Neena, that "Who" question, Neena just shrugged her off and blushed.

K: Oh ho! So now, my dear friend is blushing huh?

Kinjal continued to tease Neena even after knowing who she was talking about. Kinjal hadnt seen him, but had heard Neena talking about him 24/7

N: Just stop it naa! Dont make me blush any further!!

Kinjal and Neena walked towards the caferteria and sat down on a bench on the side where Neena could look out to the enterance. Kinjal saw Neena kept on looking at the enterance and salaamed her hand onto her forehead.

K: Uff! Look, Neens, he will come

Neena just ignored him and kept on looking towards the enterance. Kinjal got bored and decided to order something.

K: U wait here, I will go and get something.

Kinjal got up and left, while Neena just waited. Kinjal walks to the counter.

K: 2 cokes please.

Kinjal waits, and turns to look at Neena. Neena smiles at her, and lip murmers something to Kinjal.

N: 1 second - Washroom

And Neena leaves, Kinjal just watches her and turns around to get the cokes from the counter. As she turns around to leave, a guy comes, well built, wearing blue jeans, pink t-shirt and bumps into Kinjal.

*Sploosh*

All the coke spills onto both Kinjal and the guys clothes. The guy is unable to see Kinjals face due to her hair. And just than, Kinjal carries her head up and faces the guy, Its Kanav.

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Leena

@AfghanLeena

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#35

wow very nice keep writhing yaar im the frist one to read 😃

Love Leena 😉

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Jwalamukhi

@-Jwalamukhi-

Stunner

+ 9

Posted: 17 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: Rano 22
wow very nice keep writhing yaar im the frist one to read 😃

Love Leena 😉

Aw...thanx and yes you are the 1st one to read it!😃

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Krishi

@knumnum

Rocker

Posted: 17 years ago

#37

As usual great synopsis and also great start... Since u r getting more comments here, Now write lengthyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy parts😡.. I want real lengthyyyyyyy ones and not ur one liners😆😆😆

Man, Iam sooooooooo waiting for the part in ur FF where Neeena runs offf😆😆😆.. Come to the point straightly naaa.. Y waste soo much time😆

Okkk now write sooooooooooooooooon and remember lengthyyyyyyyyyyyyy ones😆

Krishi

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Jwalamukhi

@-Jwalamukhi-

Stunner

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Posted: 17 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: knumnum

As usual great synopsis and also great start... Thanx Since u r getting more comments here, Now write lengthyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy parts😡..Baba...this is OK for one day isnt it?...will do more starting Part 2! I want real lengthyyyyyyy ones and not ur one liners😆😆😆OKoke!

Man, Iam sooooooooo waiting for the part in ur FF where Neeena runs offf😆😆😆.. Come to the point straightly naaa.. Y waste soo much time😆ha...nahin yaar, if u keep on doing this, than I will waste more time on Neena rather than on KK..😆

Okkk now write sooooooooooooooooon and remember lengthyyyyyyyyyyyyy ones😆Will do

Krishi

Edited by *Shifali* - 17 years ago

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soni595

@soni595

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#39

Shifu well done yaar! Mai ek part ek mahine mein nahi lik paati, and you have written so much in a day, WONDERFUL! I could totally imagine the scene in my head, in fact to add to it, I can visualize Kanav's anger at Kinjal spilling coke on him.😆 Thanks for the part and write the next part soon!

Keep smiling..

Love

Soni