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Posted: 18 years ago
#51
Great update Roz 👏 👏 👏

You should write an AR fan fic 😳

Next part pleaseeeeee 😃 😃 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#52
yaaayyyyy!! u updated! 😆
Fantastic update!! 👏 👏 👏 Just love the way you are portraying Adi-Mets in ur fic.n the bathroom scene was just 😳 👏 👏
As for the current storyline: 🤢 Ignorance is bliss.
do continue soon 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#53
hey Roz... Atlast you updated dear... Once again awesome part. I just love this Adi nd Mets. They are too cute.. made for eachother..

Pls continue soon.

Shan
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Posted: 18 years ago
#54

WOWWWWWWWWWW can't believe how cute this chapter is😳 U really are a talented writer👏 but pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeee update sooner😳 I've already fallen in lov with your fanfic and u better not make me wait long for the updates😡😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
#55
hey, that was another gr8 chapter.
cant wait 4 da next update n dont keep me waitin 4 it or else...... 😡 😆
👏 👏 continue soon! 👏

Adi n mets scences rock! 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#56
Omg Metz n Adi rocked in that scene. U rock 4 writing this. Nways plz update soon 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanx for the comments guys. last update from home. next update - i will be on campus but fear not - i will def try my hardest to update more - plus i really need to bookmark this thread cause i get tired when i look for it - yeah im that lazy 😆
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CH 6 – Maybe I Shouldn't Have Done That

Still inside Adi's room, Maithili opens the door and peeps outside to see if the coast is clear. There's no one in the hallway, so she quickly steps out the door and tip toes her way down the stairs. Thinking she has heard some noise, she hides behind a pillar that's at the end of the staircase. Maithili carefully tries to move her head in the direction of the dining room because that's where the noise had come from. Suddenly she feels the eerie sensation of being watched and then someone's breath on her neck.
"Chor!!!!"
"Aaaahhhhh!"
Maithili shrieks loudly with her eyes closed. Standing behind her, Adi covers his ears and squints his eyes at the sound, but his lips pose themselves in a grin.
Maithili finally turns around and all sense of fear runs away from her face as anger clearly begins to display itself through her facial expressions.
Ok Adi. Now would be a good time to run.
"What are you doing?! "
"No, what are you doing walking around like a thief darling?" He says sweetly and tries to put his hands on her shoulders but she whacks them away.
"You think I want your mom to catch me at her house in the morning wearing her son's clothes?!" Her voice escalates with every word as she throws her face in front of Adi in an aggressive manner.
"She's not here sweetie pie, so no need to go all psycho on my, ok?" Adi pulls Maithili's right cheek and gets an elbow to his gut.
Maithili walks to the dining room table and sits down just as Sharvan comes out of the kitchen with a sandwich. Seeing her in the "Boys Rule" shirt, he lets out a chuckle. Maithili shoots a glare his way. He stops chuckling and pretends to cough. Then he sits opposite Maithili at the table.
"Good morning Maithili. Slept well with Adi," begins to lift his sandwich off the plate but the tablecloth pulls the plate and the sandwich in the opposite direction where it lands on the floor next to Maithili who holds the white tablecloth in her hands.
At that exact second, Adi enters the room.
Seeing the mess, he asks, "What did you say to her Sharvan?"
"Me? Bhai," he walks up to Adi and whispers to him, "She's crazy."
"Tell me something I don't know."
"What's with the gup-chup huh?" Maithili stands up and looks their way.
"Ok, I'm leaving," Sharvan claims with a bit of fright and before exiting, says softly to Adi, "What were you thinking?"
"Mini-Adi na kya bola?" she comes up to him.
"Mini-Adi?"
"Fine. Idiot na."
"That's better," proclaims Adi.
"He was just saying how great you looked this morning," Adi lies with a hope-she-believes-me smile on his face.
"Ah-huh. Well, what would you like for breakfast?" she says sweetly.
"Um…," he is baffled by her sudden change in attitude.
"Anything."
"Well, I'll make it for you," she heads for the kitchen.
"Oh, okay."
Oh, okay? What the – Adi, you should have declined. You are going to be so sorry. Best get ready to eat poison.

Ten minutes later, Maithili appears out of the kitchen and sets a delicious looking sandwich on the table in front of Adi. Sharvan, who has just come back downstairs after changing, passes by the dining room and sees Adi with Maithili's sandwich. He mouths a slient "no" to Adi. Adi looks over Maithili's shoulder to see his cousin choking himself to indicate that soon he will be doing the same thing. Ignoring his cousin's advice, Adi takes a bite of the sandwich after a deep breath. He begins to chew the portion he had bit off and is surprised to find it tasty. Sharvan throws his hand on his forehead and shakes his head as Adi eats the sandwich.
"How is it?"
"Yummy," Adi mumbles with his full mouth.
"Oh that's great. You know I used a special ingredient."
"Really. What?" he takes another bite.
"My spit," she says as if it was the most natural thing in the world.
Adi spews out the bite he took onto his plate.
"That's disgusting," Sharvan comes into the room but keeps his distance from Maithili as he walks up to Adi.
"Serves him right," Maithili folds her arms and tries to keep a straight face.
"Bhai, you okay?"
Adi continues to throw out the bites of sandwich that still linger in his mouth.
"Do you want me to call you a doctor?"
That did it for Maithili; she starts laughing uncontrollably.
"Duffer. I wouldn't waste any part of my being on you, not even my spit."
Adi gets up from his seat and goes to her.
"What?"
"Haan, I made you a delicious sandwich and you threw it away. How does it feel huh? Poor Adi, lost something he loves, ha!" she shoots daggers at him through her eyes.
"So are we even now Mets?" Adi asks in anger.
"You wish," she walks closer to him.
"You try to humiliate me by making me wear this stupid shirt and try to make me believe that something inappropriate happened last night and scare the heck out of me when I come downstairs and then confuse me when you come near me and then …."
"Wait, wait, wait. I confuse you when I come near you," Adi smirks back at her as he steps closer to her.
Stupid, stupid, stupid. What are you doing? Maithili quit looking dumbfounded like a moron and say something quick. Speak! Come on, open that mouth and talk before Adi comes any closer.
"I…..," she tries to stall.
"I…..," she tries again.
"Woh…..," she trails on.
"Yes," Adi smile widens.
"Hey, who's Tanu?"
Sharvan stands at the doorway of the dining room holding a purse in one hand and a vibrating cell phone in the other.
Glad to be saved from the interrogation but fearing what's coming next, Maithili quickly jumps towards Sharvan and grabs her purse and cell phone out of his hands.
"Oh god, she's going to kill me. I have to go guys. I'll give these clothes back to you soon, Adi. Bye guys," she says fast and is out of the door in less than a minute.
With a disappointed look and a frown on his face, Adi goes to Sharvan and slaps the back of his head.
"Ouch! What did I do?" the unfortunate bystander grabs his head in pain.

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Edited by roygvib - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#58
😆 😆 😆 tht was one funny chapter.Well done! 👏 👏 Ur update came as a relief to me as i've been studying "Fundamentals of Infrastructure financing" since morning 🤢 n was at the point of pulling all my hair out. 😆 😆
Edited by sidsk - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#59
Roz,, Thanks sweety for the update. I love this ff.

Again another wonderful part. I liked the way you held the mood of the story. I admire writers who can say a story in a funny way. excellent 👏

Adi and Maithili are so cute. They are so in love with each other but does not realise 😳 😳

I like this Shravan too.. Why did you interrupt them???

Keep up the good work and please continue.

Shan
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Posted: 18 years ago
#60
wow dat was realli gd and funi 👏 👏 😆
continue soon 😃

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