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Posted: 17 years ago
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW. 👏 👏 👏 👏 so amazin!lvd it! especially da ellivator part 😳 !!lol 😆 do con asap!!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago

umm - yeah i know. you dont believe it 😆

ok so i pmed everyone who replied to the previous chap. if i missed you, my bad.

CH 12 – Troubles, the Car Kind

Although the gasping and gossiping continues outside the elevator, Maithili and Adi seem unfazed by it initially. They still stay frozen in place for a few more moments and then simultaneously they both turn to face the direction from which the gasps are coming from. As they do this, several camera flashes cause them to jump up from the floor of the elevator. Scared and angry out of her wits, Maithili turns to Adi and slaps him across the face. She then picks up her torn bag and walks out, clearing her path through the crowd by giving out her deadly glare.

The crowd watches her walk away and then they all look around at Adi who stands holding the left side of his face. Sharvan walks over to him and shakes him to pull him out of his daze.

"Did she just…."

Adi mumbles to himself as his face refuses to appear shocked and anger grabs a hold of his facial expressions.

"Oh, she is going to be so sorry!"

Adi begins to walk out of the elevator but Sharvan holds him back and presses a button that closes the elevator doors on a still-frustrated Adi's face.

"Oh man. Where did Mets go?"

"I'll go find her," Tanu walks off.

"I'll help," says an all-too-eager Manthan.

* * *

Stomping her feet out of the college grounds, Mathili reaches the parking lot and starts flumbing around in her purse. Tanu comes up to her sister.

"What are you doing, Di?"

"Looking for my car keys."

"Um…Di, do you have amnesia?"

"What are you talking ab-…"

Reality hits Mathili and she slaps her forehead.

"So do you need a ride, Maithili?"

Manthan says as he runs up to them. He had been forced to run after Tanu as she had been trying to get rid of him in the college hallways.

"Hello!" Tanu moves her hand in front of Manthan's face.

"Do you know who I am?"

Manthan reaches out and takes a hold of Tanu's hand. He then bow downs a little and positions himself like a prince about to kiss the hand of a princess.

"A beautiful pain in my - … Aaahhh!"

Before he could finish his statement, Tanu grabs his hand, the same hand that had been holding her hand a second ago, and bends it backwards.

"A pain in your what?"

"A pain? What idiot said you're a pain. Tell me his name and I'll take care of him."

The discomfort becomes too hard to take and Manthan bends down onto the floor.

"Maithili is my sister and she doesn't need your pitiful help, understood!"

"Understood, now let go of my hand! I don't wanna hit a girl!"

"Ha, I'd like to see you try to hit me. I would rip this hand of yours out!"

Tanu finally releases Manthan from her death-grip.

"Di, lets go ….. Di?"

Tanu and Manthan look for Mets with their eyes.

"Where are my car keys?"

Tanu searches her pockets and comes up empty. She looks at Manthan.

"Don't look at me!"

Just then, a car speeds past them and someone yells from inside it.

"Thanks little sis!"

"Di! Stop!"

Tanu runs after her car but to no avail. A laughing Manthan comes up behind her.

"Ah, karma."

Tanu steps back and slams her elbow into his gut.

"Ah, stupidity," she says as she gets Manthan's keys out of his pocket while he stands holding his stomach.

* * *

Maithili drives through the relatively empty road with the windows down and the wind blowing her hair around. Despite her constant struggle to keep her hair off her face, she smiles as she sits in the driver's seat.

It feels so good to be able to finally drive myself around, but I'll have to get Tanu a very expensive gift to make this up to her. And this is all that stupid Adi's fault.

Just as Maithili thinks this, a car comes from her left and stops right in from of her, blockading her. She manages to step on the brakes just in time to prevent damage to Tanu's car.

"Who is that lunatic?"

She looks over at the car and begins to feel pure repugnance enter her state of mind as the lunatic driver gets out of the car.

Smirking at her with his shades on, he walks over and takes a seat on the hood of Tanu's car. She is unable to stop herself from going to him.

"What is wrong with you, Adi?" she slams the car door shut and it's locked.

"Payback for that slap you so daringly gave me," he strokes his cheek.

"I should have given you two slaps maybe then your brain might have returned back to its correct position inside your head because let's face it, you're insane!"

"No, not insane. Fierce."

"Crazy."

"Beautiful."

"Repulsive."

"Eyes like chocolate."

"Eyes like a dead person's."

"Pure perfection."

"Pure nastiness."

"A gorgeous woman."

"A …….. huh? Wait, you're a woman?"

Maithili starts to laugh and turns to rest her back against the car, looking away from Adi. He gets off the car and walks up really close to her.

"I was talking about you," he whispers to her as she stops laughing.

Feeling hesitant, Maithili tries to move a little but her force is not enough to push a car back. Gathering up enough courage to talk back to Adi when he is being abnormally nice and when he is an abnormally close distance from her, she finally speaks.

"Well…I was talking about you."

"Well, weren't you being sweet."

He smiles at her and moves even closer.

"What are you doing?!" Maithili shrieks as she is not able to control her uneasiness.

"Do I make you nervous?"

"Hardly."

"Liar," he winks at her but steps back a little.

A car horn stops their discourse and they watch as the car pulls up near them. Tanu steps out of the driver's seat and Manthan slowing gets out of the passenger's side still clutching his stomach.

"Di, how could you steal my car?"

"You were too busy to give me a ride ok. So I decided to give myself a ride."

"No I wasn't. What was I busy with?"

"You were too busy flirting."

"What?!"

"Yeah, she is a master flirt. I cannot handle her brand of flirting," Manthan says as he walks past Tanu.

"Do you want me to show you my other techniques?" she looks intensely at Manthan.

"Oh no."

Manthan stands behind Adi, protecting himself as Adi and Maithili chuckle at his fear of Tanu.

"Ok, give me my keys Maithili so I can go and you can get yourself another ride somehow."

"Oh come on Tanu. Don't be mad."

"She doesn't have the keys," Adi cuts in.

"What do you mean?" Tanu looks worried.

"Did she eat them?" Manthan laughs and then apologizes.

"Sorry Mets. I had to say it."

"The keys are in the car …"

"See, Tanu…" Mets interrupts Adi.

"….and the car is locked."

Adi looks on with a grin as Maithili runs to the car and fails to open its door.

"What?! Aaarrrggg!! Ok I need to go get my spare keys."

"I'll come with you," Maithili offers.

"I'd rather drive with the devil incarnated, so come on Virani."

"Of course I'm coming. It's my car!"

"Do you want to spend your night at a hospital?" Tanu asks sweetly as they walk to Manthan's car.

Manthan takes a hard swallow and then with a soft voice says, "No."

"That's like a good boy."

They drive off leaving a very frustrated woman and a very happy man.

Maithili tries to pull on the car door in hopes that it is just jammed. She continues her endeavors and Adi stand behind her while leaning against the car. Maithili sees his hands on both sides of the car, both sides of her.

"Do you want a ride?"

"No, I'm fine."

"That you sure are," his eyes move themselves up and down her figure.

"Are you seriously hitting on me right now?"

She turns around to face him. Bad mistake.

Why does he have to look so…………so………good. Ok, Mets just take him up on his offer before he starts moving up close to you again. Take it!

"Ok. Ok lets go."

She walks away from him and goes to his car. Adi scratches his head.

That was not nearly as much fun as I had anticipated.

"Ok. Lets go."

He walks after her.

Edited by roygvib - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
wicked.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

amaziing!!!!!!!!!!!!1
way to go !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I just realised tht altho mets slapped adi, he is NOT going to revenge her for tht badly.. mayb a few prnaks but nuffin more..

he is already half in love with her without him realising it !! till then tc!!

n do continue sooon..

n i loved their argument n how he subconciously says, ' A goergous woman' n i bet at tht time he must ve been thinking of mets at the party in the mini !!! so he said goergous !! heheh..

N do continue soooon.. plz..
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Posted: 17 years ago
ok so this is b4 i read the update..i just wanna say:
ITS ABOUT TIME!! 😡

lol jk! luv ya!! plzzzz update sooner next time! always waiting.. 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
This is one amazing FF 👏

Please continue soon.

shwetha
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Posted: 17 years ago
wow finally! haha was waiting for sooo long!
awsome part, it was definately sizzling! adi is hitting on her, and mets totally likes it! haha
please dont keep up waiting so long for the next part!
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Posted: 17 years ago
Yes,finally!!😆😉...
That was anextra-ordinary interesting part,Roz!!Loved every bit of it.Tanu and Manthan are like too kool😉;poor Manthan and his stomach!🤣🤣🤣

Really loved AM's part;it was sizzling!😉

Please,continue soon!😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
whoot whoot you updated!! 😛 😆 very good update loved manthan and tannu's "flirting" 😆 that girl sure is a firebrand 😆 😛 i have a eerie feelign in side that adi's doing all this as payback for the slap that mets gae him..but hopefully he'll fall in love with her 😳 and may their petty stupid erbal fights continue 😳 😆
great update roz 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago

"No, not insane. Fierce."

"Crazy."

"Beautiful."

"Repulsive."

"Eyes like chocolate."

"Eyes like a dead person's."

"Pure perfection."

"Pure nastiness."

"A gorgeous woman."

"A …….. huh? Wait, you're a woman?"

"I was talking about you," he whispered to her as she stoped laughing.

^^OMG I just loved their argument specially how he confessed what he thought about her and when he got close to her and said I was talking about you. 😳

And Manthan and Tanu's "flirting" was just great.😆 😆😆

And at the end when he said

"That was not nearly as much fun as I had anticipated." 😆

Aww .. he wanted her to fight him.😳

Really eager to know whats gonna happen next. 😊
Please...... update sooner this time.😡

Anjali😊

Edited by *angel94* - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
i thought no one replied because i didnt see this thread on the first page 😆 will try to continue after my midterm is over.

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