Na Chhodna Mera Haath- A Ronakshi SS

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Prologue:


“Kabhi kabhi aisa lagta hain ke main tumhe deserve nahin karta”


“Tum mujhe chhod kar nahin jaogi na?”


Sona could feel her heart thudding against her chest as his words kept on replaying in her mind on a loop. She gripped the steering wheel tightly until her knuckles became white. Where are you Rohit!


It was past midnight and Rohit had left the hospital hours ago. Yet Sona found herself alone in her bed on a night she wanted nothing more than to snuggle next to Rohit and have a content night of sleep.


Instead of waking up either Ravi or Shankar at this ungodly hour, she decided to go find her stubborn husband herself. He has been acting strangely for the past few days. At first, she thought it was because he was worried for Pooja but she wasn’t so sure anymore. He seems fine around most of the family but acts very strange when they are alone.


This morning she woke up to find him gripping her night gown in his fist. He was asleep but there was a frown on his face and stress lines on his forehead. Sona had to actually wake him up so that she could move and get dressed for work. Last night, she playfully pushed him away when he tried to hug her and Sona could have sworn he looked hurt. When she asked, he quickly denied it and went off to take shower. Was Rohit expecting more intimacy from her? Was she acting too coy for him? No! Neither Rohit nor she shied away from expressing their feelings & she wasn’t coy at all! There was no one Sona felt more comfortable with. But was she offending Rohit in some way without realizing it?


Sona sighed as her thoughts became more jumbled. Turning into the last lane before the garden (she was pretty sure she would find him there), Sona decided to ask Rohit what was bothering him.


As soon as she parked her car in front of the garden, she spotted Rohit from a distance talking to and then hugging his phone. At first she thought he was on a call but then he zoomed in with his fingers. Whose photo is Dr. Surgeon looking at? Why is he talking to the photo? Clearly that person is more important than his wife. Sona felt a foreign and potent feeling consume her and before she could convince herself otherwise, she charged towards Rohit.


“Really Dr. Surgeon, aadhi raat ko apni biwi ko chodh kar kisse baatein ho rahi hain?”


She huffed, grabbed the phone from his hands and looked at the screen. Sonakshi gasped as she looked at the image on his screen. “Rohit yeh kya hain?”


To Be Continued...


AN: After completely disappearing from the forum and using twitter for a while, I realized how much I miss writing about Ronakshi! So while I won’t be participating in the forum, I will be posting all my work from when I lasted I visiting the forum to now. This SS is new and something that I thought of keeping in the mind the current track. I’m super exciting for some hurt/comfort scenes between Ronakshi! I hope the writers gives us some beautiful moments of Sona comforting Rohit. Hope you guys enjoy this story! Please do give your feedback, criticism and suggestions!


Lots of love,


Esha ❤️

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Res 1 (Part 1)

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Res 2 (Part 2)

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Res 3 (Part 3)

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Res 4 (Epilogue)

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Nice prologue

Love it

Continue soon

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Glad to have you backkkkkkk🤗 pleaseeee continue sooon. Mwwah

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Thank the Lord, A story from you❤..Happyyy

Prologue looks good, will wait for updates🙂

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Nice start... missed your writing. Excited to know more

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Welcome back.

Interesting prologue.

If my guess is right, I think Rohit was talking to Sona's pic in his phone I could me wrong too 🤔

Waiting for the update 🤗

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