RoNakshi TS : If only I knew why (Complete) - Page 4

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Awesome update

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Cont soon

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if only this happens in serial

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Amazing chapter!

I loved it! ❤💯

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Posted: 6 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: wasuthecrazy

My favourite part was the letter. Rohit sippy in the serial should make a proper apology for all what he does to her.

Please keep writing. Loved it.

You are fab. Always know that.🤗

yeah it was bothering me that he just hasn't apologized to her ever.

Thnku ❤️

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: plmzaq

Awesome update

Love it

Cont soon

Thnku. Will update soon

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Originally posted by: sosweetsumi

if only this happens in serial

This is my way to try n make up for everything we want to see in the show but don't get to :)

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Originally posted by: TunesOfHeart

Amazing chapter!

I loved it! ❤💯

Thank you ❤️

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Part 4- Finale


Hey Fam

Kya haal chaal aapke?

*I was watching 'Socha na tha' for the 100th time right before penning this down. So this one could or could not be heavily inspired by some scenes in it. Please bear with me. Thankyou

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He got back to his car.

Ro : Chalo Ravi, ghar lelo

He felt lighter after writing that letter and was hoping of getting a call from her.

Radio :

Mera tumhara kya rishta hai

Kuch bhi nai

Kyun K Tum Meri Koi Nahi

Main Janta Hoon Magar

Ho Jab Meri Koi Nahi

Kyun Lagti Ho Mujh Ko Parai Nahi

Ho Ho Ho Ho

(He felt this song was his story. Was she really just a friend for him, just a lovely female he hangs out with, just an agony aunt, just someone he likes to have around.

Kyunki pyar to Raima hai. Jeewan sathi to Raima hai, pehle pyar wo thi to akhri bhi wahi honi chahiye

If Raima is my everything then where does Sonakshi fit in. If the feeling I have for Raima is love then what is this that I feel for Sona Sonakshi )

Rohit was sitting in his room trying to clear out his head

Veena enters

Veena: Kya hua beta aaj hospital nai gya

Rohit :Khud patient wali feeling aa rhi hai. doosro ka ilaaj kya karu

Veena : huh? Kya bol rha hai. Acha wo kaisi hai, aaj milne nai gya?

Rohit : Gya tha Ma. Par wo thi nai. Shoot par gyi hui thi

Veena : Shoot? Kaunsi shoot. Main Raima ki baat kar rhi hoon tu kya bol rha hai.

Rohit : oh Raima. Haan bas jaunga thodi der me milne. kisi k call ka wait kar rha hoon

Veena : Tu Raima k sath hone ki bajae ghar baithke kiske call ka wait kar rha hai. koi Important case hai kya

Rohit : Haan ma.. bohot important sabse important. main letter likhke aagya hoon. sab boldia hai maine usme. Ab bas umeed karta hoon wo mujhr maaf karde aur mujhse baat karle

Veena : Tu Sonakshi ki baat kar rha haina. Tu itti bechaini se usi k phone ka wait kar rha haina.. Beta ek baat puchu. Tu aaj bhi Raima se pyar karta haina.

Rohit : Haan Ma , Usse main itte salo se pyar karta aya hoon to aaj bhi karta hounga na.

Veena : Rohit puch rha hai ya bata rha hai

Rohit : Kuch samajh nai aa rha ma. Bohot confused hoon. Jo chahta tha hamesha se wohi ho rha hai aaj par fir bhi adhura sa lag rha hai. Khushi hi nai mehsus ho rhi

Veena : To tujhe kis cheez se khushi mehsus hogi.

Rohit : Pata nai ma.

Veena : To pata kar. Teen Zindagiyan judi hai isse. Pata kar beta

Rohit : (Gets up and hugs her) haan ma. sahi keh rhe ho aap. pata to karna hi hoga

In the car

Rohit : Rav, Chalo

Ravi : Kaha sir

Rohit : Ek min ( he calls Pulkit to find out where Sonakshi is)-Didi to set se ghar aagyi hain. Aap landline pe phone karlijiye. Ghar pe abhi aur koi hoga nai to didi hi uthaengi-

Rohit : Sonakshi k ghar lelo Ravi ( He couldn't do it on phone, had to meet her to sort this out)

Ting Tong

Sonakshi : Thodi der akele rehna chahti thi par lagta hai sab wapas aagye hain. (Wiping away her eyes. Hiding the letter, she had in her hand, behind her, opens the door) Rohit! Tum. Tum yaha kyu aae ho. Jao yaha se please

He doesn't say anything, just keeps walking towards her , she keeps taking steps backwards

Rohit : Main kuch pata karne aya hoon.

Sonakshi : kya pata karne aae ho ki ma ne mujhe tumhare sath dekh lia to wo mujhe kya kahengi ya kya sunaengi.

Rohit : Gussa ho mujhse?

Sonakshi : Bohot.

Rohit : (trying to grab her hands) Sonakshi ye kya hai mere tumhare beech.Maine aisa pehle kabhi feel nai kia. Mujhe laga tha jo Raima k sath hai wo pyar hai. Agar wo pyar hai to ye kya hai Sonakshi.

She keeps moving back Rohit please tum jao yaha se. He steps forward to come close to her. He bends close to her face and pecks her lips lightly. He steps back to see her reaction. Her eyes are closed ,chest heaving, slight smile on her face.

She opens her eyes to see him.

She stares at him with love before throwing herself in his arms. He hugs her tight lifting her feet off the ground.

They just couldn't let go. They'd never felt this much at peace before. Days of agony melting away.

Finally they let go off each other. He looks at her.. She's looking down. He lifts her chin up. Kisses her on her cheek.

Rohit : (Whispers in her ear) Main jo pata karne aya tha maine karlia. Ab chalta hoon.

She hugs him again

Main wapas aunga Sona. Par is baar meri sari mess sort karne k baad.. Sirf tumhara Rohit banke.

Saying that he left. But this time to come back and be hers forever...

The End

*It was so much fun writing this TS. I hope you all had a good time reading it. Thankyou for all the love. See you'll around*

Edited by girl94 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#39

Awesome ending

Love it

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Posted: 6 years ago
#40

Lovely ending🤗 great stuff. Keep writing. Take care.

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