KaYu OS : Yeh Duriyaa! Fanaa ho sabhi duriyaa!

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi,

As today is 200th episode of KT i really wished if CVs and makers of the show give audience some better moments. But I guess I am expecting from all bunch of idiots who dont know to give nice moment to cherish on special occasion. They should learn from other serials like YVR where on 200th episode they kept USP of the show and showed Kartik coming to his daughter and promises her that doesn't matter there is no relationship between them but she will remain always
special to him.

Anyways I really wished to see 200th episode of KT something like this. So i have wrote it down.
Plz read and comment.

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It was annoying for him. He didnt wish to see hurt anytime and thats why he wished her
to stay away from Gauri. But why cant she see that Gauri cant be good to her anytime.
He knew she is gentle and so good to trust anyone blindly. But its not good always.
"Kali dont you feel like calling me once?" He felt in his heart.

Kali picked up her phone at home. She was also missing him badly. "I will call him now"
She thought and put her phone back. "No he will think I am just doing formality".

Gauri came to kitchen when Kali was almost done with packing tiffin. "Kali i will take
tiffin to office" Gauri said. "No Gauri, Yug is not in good mood since yesterday. If I visit
he will feel better". Kali was about to leave but Daadi came there. "You are not going anywhere.
Give that tiffin to Gauri she will take it to office." Daadi ordered. Kali tried to interrupt
but Daadi said "This things can be done by servant and as per Yug Gauri is new servant in house, right?"Kali had no option this time but let it go.

Few minutes after Kali came and ask for permission to go to temple. She wished to offer to god for Gauri's well being. Daadi didnt miss this chance too. She asked Bijli to accompany Kali. Kali took Bijli along with her to temple. Bijli and Kali reached temple where Kali asked her "Bijli humare thaal main phool mala nahi hain. Tum leke aao, tab tak hum apne ramji ke darshan kar lete hain"

It was disaster for Yug to see Gauri at office with tiffin. He didnt wish to entertain her and asked her to leave. Gauri left leaving tiffin on Yug table. Yug didnt feel like eating it even. Rohit came there and asked Yug to have lunch. "Mujhe bhuk nahi hain" Yug said angrily. Rohit was so happy that he can enjoy homemade food today. He asked Yug if he can have his tiffin today. Yug agreed with sad face. Though Rohit excitedly open up tiffin he realized its not meant for him.

Rohit - "Yug this tiffin is not meant for me"
Yug - "What happened?"

Rohit placed tiffin back on Yug desk and asked him to have it. Yug was surprised what happened to him suddenly. Yug opened up first box and found one note there. He was surprised. He opened it and smile spread on his face "Sorry!" First note said. He opened up one more box and found it also had one more note. "Gussa kam hua ya abhi bhi naraz hain?" he read and started melting down. With full confidence he opened up last and third tiffin box and not to his surprise one more note was there too. "Agar abhi bhi naraz hain, to ussi hotel main aayiye jaha hum pehli baar mile the. Aapki narazgii dur karni hain. - Kali". He was so happy with such surprise from her.

"Not bad Mrs. Yug Chaudhary!" Yug said smilingly and quickly grabbed keys of his car and rushed to hotel.

All the way he was waiting impatiently to meet Kali and sort out differences between them. He reached venue and his eyes were completely searching for her. "Excuse Me! Mr. Yug Chaudhary!" manager came near and asked him. Yug confirmed and manager asked him to head for special room on 1st floor. Yug was much eager now. What she had plan? What she has in store for him. Every time he took effort to surprise her. But this time efforts from her and he was loving it.

Yug opened up room's door slowly. His eyes could not believe. It was perfect for any dream date. Whole room was decorated with red curtains and white LEDs blowing arround were adding to beauty. Center place of room was decorated with candles with table for two. White table mat and cushion covering contrasted with red curtain looked so perfect. His eyes fell upon note put
on table and he got more smile on his face "For the person, I love most!" But he was not looking for all this. His eyes were searching something else "Where is she?"... He walked into room still looking for her.

His eyes were fixed when he caught reflection of her in mirror in front of him. He was looking beautiful in same blue and black dress which he gifted her. She was looking stunning with open hair, long but simple pearl earings and little makeup which complimented her look. He had already told her she carries it gracefully. He remembered her words "Patni ka shringar pati ke liye hi hota hain". He loved her more this time to do all this just to make him happy even when she was not comfortable.

Yug turned around and walked upto her slowly. They both looked into each other's eyes with so much affection and love for each other; forgetting all instances where they even had clash this morning. "Kaisa laga surprise?" Kali broke the silence first. She wanted to know if his anger has cooled down. Yug put glance on arrangment and said "I am impressed. Mujhe nahi pata tha ki tum bhi aisa surprise de sakti ho" Kali smiled, "Ab sangat ka thoda asar to ho jaata hain.. aapke saath rahke main bhi sikh gayi". She said even naughitily. He was now more bowled over. "Bas ek problem hain!" Kali continued. Yug looked at her confusingly. "Humne abhi tak bill nahi bhara iss sab ka" Kali said mischeviously. Yug smiled whole heartedly looking her playfullness. He pulled her close to himself and wrapped his hand around her neck. "Aise surprises ke liye toh main apni saari property nilaam kar du. Bill bharna to bahut chhoti baat hain!" He said adding playfullness from his
end. Kali was coming back to her shyfull mode looking at his playfullness. "Chaliye lunch kar lete hain. Aapko bhuk lagi hogi" She said trying to escape from his lock. But Yug was unstoppable this time. He nodded negatively without breaking mischevious smile on his face. "Nahi!! mujhe kuch aur chahiye", he said tracing his finger on her cheeks and pressing it at corner of her lips gently. Kali could not hold it anymore and turned her face. His love always so much for her and she knew its bliss for her. She kept shying when Yug moved even more close to her. He placed his finger on her chin and made her look at him. Kali saw his desire sparkling in his eyes. He was moving close to her. She closed her eyes giving affirmation to him that she is all his. That moment, that proximity between them was just filled with eternal love they had between them. There was no space
for misunderstanding. And even if there was any it melt away with moment when his lips finally reached its destination!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome!KaYu...❤️
Freaking hawt☺️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks Shibu for liking it...
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Amazing OS
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