Originally posted by: dudleysam
a new giri fr kaju
rajudevgiri...the way she looked at him when he detached the dupatta...and there were no flashbacks of dev...either...she is falling for him so is fightng her traction for raju very hard... 😳 😳
first karanameeshaexposegiri. 😡 😕 ...then devrajuexposegiri 😳 😳 ....back to kajugiri. 😊 ..suicidegiri. 😛 ..nahin toh...kasamgiri...nahin toh...gandhigiri. 😃 ..nahin...toh....shaadigiri 😳 or...if
all fails...seductiongiri 😳 😳 ...this time she will set the hotel room up.....herself...
when he gets there she will lock the room...wearing a gorgeous red sari...lokk how shie is wearing red these days.... 😳
accha toh raju tum mujhse...pyar karte ho...mujhse shaadi karna chahte ho...ye nahin ho sakta... 😆 in her typical kajugiri tone...matter offact tone...like on 13th march...
lekin...raju...she smiles....am a woman...and i am attracted to you as you are to me...why get married...eh 😃 😃 kissi ko pata nahin chalega...tum aur mein...pahua ko bhi nahin...she advance towards him...raju is shocked ..stammers...
k.kk...kajj..jalji...dekh...khiye...aa..aapko..ghala..t..fai mi..hai...mein jaa/...ta...hum...acche dost...hein.. 😃 😃 .kaju is very close 😳 like at the party...she looks up...presses herself closer...he takes a shuddering breaher and closes his eyes... 😳 😳 she whispers...haann....raju...acche doston mein sharm kaisa...dekho mein hoon...tum ho...ye raat hai...ye hotel ka room...hai...to ao...raju...aaj hum ...pyar ke hadd....ko paar...kar le.. 😳 😳
raju turns away breathing hard...nahin...kk...kajal..ji...ye ghala..t hai...humein jaana...she puts her arms around him...and he closes..his eyes....whisperin...kk..kajjal...in a choked...voice...as the temperatures are rising...she turns around...facing him...and lifts her face to him......he says...kajjal...stop......she pulls him close...like he did in tha party....yehi chahte teh na...raju...so come lets have some fun...and raju slaps her.. 😳 😳 he is breathing hard...
kajus eyes is filled wih tears....kitna jhoot...kitna freb...aur kitna...DEv...mat chuppao...aur...ye tapadd...saboot hain tum dev ho... 😭 😭 then she turns and runs from the room...he starts to run after her...rest is guess...suicidegiri...hehehe 😆 😆
Superb, excellent sammy.
But here is a bit of my version in your post! I hope you don't mind and hope you like it!!!!
She is all the time pulling him close thinking Why Dev, why are you doing this. Why are you imposing your own self as an imposter!!! and all the time Dev is fighting and losing control. He wants to hug her tight and never let go of her, but...........
She kisses him and that's the last straw, he loses that last bit of control he has so strongly exercised to have and with a snap his arms lift on their own accord to go around her when there is a sound far away which brings him down back to reality with a bang. Its Kaajjal muttering "please hug me, I am yours to have. Ravish me as there would be no tomorrow!!!" R/D pushes her saying "Aap apne aape se baahar hain madamji. Remember I am your friend, not your lover." But Kaajjal is adamant and hugs him saying, "Lets take our friendship a step further. Give it a new name. I love you very much". That does it for Dev. He resorts to his last weapon - anger, pushes her angrily away. "Is this your idea of love, I call it lust. I thought nobody on this earth can take Dev's place." But she disregards his taunt and takes him in her arms again but with tears of love for her dev. she knows for sure this is her Dev. R/D finally loses it as he can't control himself in such close proximity with her. Her soft arms, her warm loving and shimmering eyes, her breath, her very essence and he pushes her angrily and slaps her............................ "Kaajjal, just behave yourself, God dammit!!!" Just like Dev would have. And he continues in a series of words all in english and Kaajjal stands there with tears in her eyes. she replies, "So you don't like it Dev if I show my love to Raju. Why because Kaajjal belongs only to you Dev?" and in his fit of anger he grabs her and replies with a look of possiveness and jealousy shining in his brown velvetty depths "Yes, damn you Kaajjal, you are mine and mine only........." He stops midway suddenly realising and seeing the knowing smile in her eyes now brimming with tears. "Damn, he mutters softly and suddenly leaves her and turns to run his hand through his hair!!!! He gave himself away. she runs to him and hugs him from the back and starts sobbing. He can't bear to see her cry and turns and ever so gently takes her in his arms and softly kisses her hair and she looks up with fresh tears flowing down her face. He cups her face and gently kisses each and every tear paying homage to her eyes, brows, nose, cheeks and finally her tremulous mouth and they are lost in the magic of their pure and eternal love.............................
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