Your wish to happen in JYOTI in Future !!

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Well !! Creatives have been intimated about this forum to get the feedback !! And about the idiotic current proceedings viewers are not liking to.....

We wish, they would be checking this regularly....

What do you wish to happen in Jyoti !! Step-by-step !! Post your wishes and views....
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Kabir survive and take revenge from his father RP for honour killing and ruin his political character as the mayor of Jodpour and shows his corruption to all of the people of Jodpour.Second goes to Jyoti and blame her for not trust him for why he was not in good terms with his family and finally get marry with Jyoti ,knowing the truth about Roshani and bring her back to Jyoti and tell the Psycho Pankaj that you are married man and you can have your own child. And obivously for what he(PankaJ) did to Jyoti .two or three years in Jail is good for him .And at the end they live happily ever after.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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End the show ASAP!!! 😆 If they wish to make a decent exit, this is the time, or else rotten tomatoes await the Jyoti team!

We are seriously fed up of the ridiculous twists that make Jyoti, the Miserable One all the time! They have nothing to show anymore without slaughtering all prominent characters in Jyoti.
They must wrap it up! Watching even a few glimpses of Jyoti is a torture, so most of us avoid it.
And we are tired of Jyotis's stale expressions of sorrow and tragedy and at least I am willing to give Jyoti a fond farewell at this stage, only if the CVs pay heed! 😆

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Don't Want

  1. Definitely don't want to lose Kabir.
  2. No more Jyoti crying.
  3. Jyoti not going back to Pankaj for sure.
  4. No 4th Male character in Jyoti's life. ( please no more)

Want

1. We want to see gradually Sisodia empire breaking

down.

2. Please have Jyoti's trust on Kabir.

3. More Stronger image of Jyoti ( after all her life experience)

4. Open Roshni issue. Why they never inquire about Jyoti

Visiting Pankaj and then accident? What happen to baby.

5. Last Kabir marrying Jyoti.

6. Kabir told Jyoti in hospital that

" tumhari God Phir se Bharegi Yeh Vada he Mera"

So Have Roshni back.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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In sequence....

1. Kabir escaping and go to Udaipur and then to Jaipur to search for Jyoti.
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. Meanwhile, Roshni to get some severe illness and need Jyoti's organ kinda donation, because Pankaj's doesn't match. Pankaj forced to confess the truth.
3. Kabir finds Jyoti and decides never to return home, but Jyoti has other plans (for a change please, CV's show Jyoti as a strong woman who wants revenge now, after KK's death and all)
4. Pankaj to find Jyoti ONLY after she gets married to Kabir.
5. Jyoti to concede in helping Pankaj only if he helps with his money and all to get revenge from the Sisodias.
6. Jyoti takes revenge, and Roshni gets cured.
7. CM and Neelam plan to kill Roshni because Pankaj is losing all his money for Jyoti just because of Roshni
8. Jyoti saves her and Kabir and Jyoti escape with Roshni.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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I want Kabir to get to Jyoti before she moves to Jaipur. Also, I don't want Roshni back w/ Jyoti & Kabir - things are complicated enough to start w/. In sequence, here is what I'd like to see:
  • Kabir breaks free from Jodhpur and returns to Udaipur
  • Since Jyoti had refused to talk to him, Kabir decides to find out from Amit what happened
  • Amit tells him about how Jyoti was insulted and all that, and Kabir tells him how he was poisoned and imprisoned, after being lied to
  • Kabir sends Amit to Jyoti to explain the whole thing
  • Poonam sees her opportunity and urges Jyoti to drop her demand that Kabir re-unite w/ her family. Deepu, Dadi, Padma & Sushma all agree. Jyoti finally agrees.
  • Jyoti & Kabir have a marriage in their temple, attended by family, friends and Bhagya-da's class. Uday, Sudha, MN&G & Pratik too attend in a cameo appearance, before announcing that they are separating from Bhairavi & Pankaj, and leaving Udaipur for good, since Uday has found a new job.
  • Sumer hatches a plot to kidnap & murder Jyoti, but the hit man he hires kills Bhairavi instead, trying to shoot her in the dark and mistaking her, since Bhairavi is @ a spot Jyoti is supposed to be.
  • Hit man arrested and confesses, thereby exposing Sumer & RP and forcing his removal from office, and jail for RP, Sumer & Chachi
  • Dadi dies. After mourning, Jyoti & Kabir move into his Udaipur home, while Deepu moves the rest of the family to Jaipur. Brij & Sushma return to his ancestral home, or move to Jaipur w/ them. Brij becomes a ghar jamai, much to Poonam's disgust, and causing new tensions w/ her. So now it's Poonam's chachi vs Brij, and he reverts to his old ways, but against chachi 🤣
  • Psycho Pankaj in order to avenge CM manages to get RP, Sumer & chachi murdered in jail (hey, these CVs have already let their imagination run wild, so why not here?)
  • In the meantime, Jyoti becomes pregnant again w/ Kabir's first of 14 kids 😆
  • Raghu in retaliation offs Pankaj. Neelam escapes, & tries to contact Jyoti about Roshni, but can't. Ultimately, she co-incidentally connects w/ Sarika, hands Roshni to her and elopes w/ another guy (not Gautam!)
  • In Jaipur, Kesav-ji meets Padma and marries her. Later, they discover that her bahu Minal is actually Sudha's nanad. What Padma used to do to Jyoti & Sushma, she now gets to do to Minal & Poonam 😆 (step bahu vs bahu. Show Minal & Poonam both pregnant, and Padma prioritizing Poonam over Minal, and since Kesav-ji didn't have a good relationship w/ Minal, he just ignores her grievances 🤣)
  • Raghu now tries to get back Kabir, since the family has been much reduced, and agrees to honorably accept Jyoti. Kabir dictates the terms - not only does Asha bhabi get to head the family, but women can no longer be doormats there. Raghu agrees
  • Kabir & Jyoti unite w/ the family in Jodhpur
  • Kabir & Jyoti's first baby/babies born
  • The end
Edited by Vrisha - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Vrisha

I want Kabir to get to Jyoti before she moves to Jaipur. Also, I don't want Roshni back w/ Jyoti & Kabir - things are complicated enough to start w/. In sequence, here is what I'd like to see:

  • Kabir breaks free from Jodhpur and returns to Udaipur
  • Since Jyoti had refused to talk to him, Kabir decides to find out from Amit what happened
  • Amit tells him about how Jyoti was insulted and all that, and Kabir tells him how he was poisoned and imprisoned, after being lied to
  • Kabir sends Amit to Jyoti to explain the whole thing
  • Poonam sees her opportunity and urges Jyoti to drop her demand that Kabir re-unite w/ her family. Deepu, Dadi, Padma & Sushma all agree. Jyoti finally agrees.
  • Jyoti & Kabir have a marriage in their temple, attended by family, friends and Bhagya-da's class. Uday, Sudha, MN&G & Pratik too attend in a cameo appearance, before announcing that they are separating from Bhairavi & Pankaj, and leaving Udaipur for good, since Uday has found a new job.
  • Sumer hatches a plot to kidnap & murder Jyoti, but the hit man he hires kills Bhairavi instead, trying to shoot her in the dark and mistaking her, since Bhairavi is @ a spot Jyoti is supposed to be.
  • Hit man arrested and confesses, thereby exposing Sumer & RP and forcing his removal from office, and jail for RP, Sumer & Chachi
  • Jyoti & Kabir move into his Udaipur home, while Deepu moves the rest of the family to Jaipur
  • Psycho Pankaj in order to avenge CM manages to get RP, Sumer & chachi murdered in jail (hey, these CVs have already let their imagination run wild, so why not here?)
  • In the meantime, Jyoti becomes pregnant again w/ Kabir's first of 14 kids 😆
  • Raghu in retaliation offs Pankaj. Neelam escapes, & tries to contact Jyoti about Roshni, but can't. Ultimately, she co-incidentally connects w/ Sarika, hands Roshni to her and elopes w/ another guy
  • In Jaipur, Kesav-ji meets Padma and marries her. Later, they discover that her bahu Minal is actually Sudha's nanad. What Padma used to do to Jyoti & Sushma, she now gets to do to Minal & Poonam 😆 (step bahu vs bahu. Show Minal & Poonam both pregnant, and Padma prioritizing Poonam over Minal, and since Kesav-ji didn't have a good relationship w/ Minal, he just ignores her grievances 🤣)
  • Raghu now tries to get back Kabir, since the family has been much reduced, and agrees to honorably accept Jyoti. Kabir dictates the terms - not only does Asha bhabi get to head the family, but women can no longer be doormats there. Raghu agrees
  • Kabir & Jyoti unite w/ the family in Jodhpur
  • Kabir & Jyoti's first baby/babies born
  • The end



Everyone....

Bow Down to Vrisha...............................................

Whhhhhhaaattt a story...........

Super !! I am fan of urs now Vrisha !! AAhaaa....couldnt stop laughing in between on your wild imagination !! But one thing I always wish in JYOTI to happen is that, just like your story has...... The Lead of the serial i.e. jyoti must be shown as a winner and not as a loser like shown......

In the serial...she is losing everything without winning anything........ So, creative must now show her as a strong woman, gaining and winning things alongwith sacrificing some with some twist and turns...but conclusion of every twist should be such that she is on a winning side....along with kabir......

Serial needs to go positive cause every successful serial has Positive storyline coming out of it... While here everything negative is happening....or shown with the main leads of the serial...

Whatever story u have plotted Vrisha.... It has everything... Twists and Turns....Comedy...hehe...(I still cant stop laughing about Padma and Keshavji.....)hahahahahhahahaha......... Positives with the main leads... repoening of all the plots thhose have been sidelined like Suday, MN&G, Roshni, Sarika, Ritu and all.......

Basic thing..... JYOTI needs to be POSITIVE SERIAL as people dont like negativity beyond limit.... and creatives have already crossed limits of negativity...........

Bow Down to you Vrisha......hahahahhahahahahahahhahahahahahaha.....Too good....Too good....
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Kabir should get married to Jyoti before moving. Jyoti should find out about her baby. Pankaj and the doctor should go to jail. When i think of more I will post.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Oye Vrisha, tumne to serial hi khatam kar diya 😆

But yes, the CM death plan was TOOOOOOOO good
🤣
CV's are you seeing this? 👏

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