Originally posted by: Dhanush071
The creative heads are seriously suffering from severe amnesia. Jyoti became popular for its realistic approach to its storyline which now seem to have taken a path of sheer nonsense.
Jyoti settled with couple of good jobs and the company of Kabir ji, the story would have flowed well if they had shifted to Pankaj and Neelam's catastrophic marital life /showing Shudha getting stronger in the house and taunting Choti ma on a daily basis (reminding her that Nelaam is everything she accused Jyoti of/ choti ma didn't do this because she believed Jyoti was wrong she did this because she didn't like people in Vashisht house giving Jyoti any more importance than she herself gets and that's the reason she hated her and got rid of her eventually ruining three lives and two of them happens to be from the vashist family such as pankaj and Joyti's unborn baby.)/ Brij taking choti ma to a melt down point with his black mailing / panchi coming back in Deepu's life with new job and lesson to teach Poonam etc.
Yeah, this would have been a terrific track. What could have happened would have been Uday discovering money missing from the bank a/c, and Sudha discovering that Brij was blackmailing Bhairavi. She'd overhear such a conversation and figure out the one thing that made Bhairavi fearful, and confront her and threaten to expose her if she doesn't do exactly what Sudha wants in that house, wrt Uday & everyone else, all this while taking Uday into confidence. Like she could have demanded the right to adapt Jyoti's baby, but still keep it in full contact w/ Jyoti. Or better still, expose this to MN&G. MN&G kick Bhairavi out and have Sudha supercede Neelam as the chief bahu: Pankaj loses his rights to succession.
Also, re: Panchi, what I'd have done would have been to have Poonam's bro one day return and make an entry into the serial, and married to Panchi. This can introduce a new awkwardness, to which Deepu adjusts, while it also ends Poonam's gravy train, since her parents will now want to pamper Panchi and their son. Also, have Deepu find a job w/ that associate of his FIL, and end that track. Or even have him work for Panchi's dad, who'd be relieved that Deepu & Panchi are separated by the Trivedi bro & sis.
Originally posted by: Dhanush071
I don't know why they are hastening to make Brij an angel over night? If I remember three episodes ego he was saying choti ma that money is his family. And in those three episodes he had TB which reached to an advanced level that he felt so helpless that he felt he needs a family, and then he went through social disgrace changing his evil soul to a soul of an angel. I am not saying that people don't change but a person like him needs go through a lot to have a drastic change in his personality like this. Sadly the show isn't giving him the time to suffer. Are they trying to wrap up the show? I saw Kabir praying to lord Krishna to bring happiness in his life''.this dostana is surely creeping up to an uncomfortable level.
Yeah, who is Kabir in love w/ - Jyoti or Brij? It was one thing for Brij to first dump Jyoti & marry Sushma, and then destroy Jyoti's marriage to Pankaj, but now what - they want to have Brij steal Kabir from Jyoti? Is this their equivalent of baseball's 3 strikes? 😉😉
Originally posted by: mahmansma
And if Brij got a rare and quick spreading form of TB, keep him away from the rest. It is contagious. Don't they know that!!
Oh, but please go and smoooooocccccchhhh CM and stepmom. Would not mind both of them coming down with this same rare TB which can spread in 3 episodes! :)
Yeah, that would be fantastic!!! Maybe Brij walks to Sushma, Padma steps in b/w to slap him & Brij coughs @ her. Viola! 😆😆
Edited by Vrisha - 15 years ago