FF- True bonds of love, Chapter-8 (Pg- 15) - Page 11

Originally posted by: awida

Wow May..you did a wonderful job.

That dream is it from the past? Did Mithvi face difficulties in their life then?!

And that cute scene of their sleeping in each other's arms..that is my idea of romance..you made me dream!

And that entry of JL just superb.

Update soon please.

Originally posted by: sabaSpeaks

Phew...

That was simply mind-blowing , super awesome description of the dream , this is just for dream muaahhh and 🤗(prithvi wala tight hug 😉)

I dont have words to describe how wonderfully you have written, I was totally engrossed while reading , well done May 👏👏

Originally posted by: SahanaG

May it was wow,wow & just wow 👏 The dream sequence was intense & gripping, loved feisty Meera & the present day comic Miu who found Prithvi cute 😉 😆 This was the best chapter till date May 😉 CVs should learn a thing or two from your & tehsina's FF about how to keep the suspense going 😉

Originally posted by: crazy-nut

beutiful May👏👏

Originally posted by: TehsinaJFJ

Wow!!!I was lost May!😛I felt so bad for Mithvi in da past...Wish I cud kill those awful men myself over nd over agn!!!!!😡😡😡
Reincarnation!😃Thank u for such a beautiful FF🤗...Eager to know more...Do continue soon?😛U r an awesome writer!😛I was spell bound!😛

Originally posted by: Junoonian

oh wow May! Now I understand the whole connection - kya baat hai!

But the Prithvi of old got killed! Dang!!!😭 I want them to live happily every after in every life time 😊

But nicely written and I loved the way she finally just gave up trying to take his hands off her waist and just went to sleep 😉

Originally posted by: Marathi_Mulgi

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