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Super se upar naace tha Saba 😃 Can't wait for next chapter 😉
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Fabulous updates Saba!!!👏 Loved reading!!!😳 Missed Prithvi though.. 😔 but nonetheless, its amazing!!! well done girl!!! 👍🏼

Thanks sue for such kind words 🤗
I know every one missed Prithvi , cant blame any of us 😉😆
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saba waiting - tick tock tick tock - slowly counting the time...please -- a new chapter...
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Saba WE WANT THE NEXT CHAPTER please 😭
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Chapter 5

Meera who was totally engrossed in her thoughts was shaken by sound of footsteps.
somebody was coming near her with every second and she had absolutely no idea who this person is.
New wave of fear and anticipation shooted through her spine and she started sweating profusely.

Possible options of actions started taking place in her mind, running was definitely big no , she had to come up with best possible solution lying there.

After oscillating between keeping eyes open and direct confrontation with who ever was coming or pretend to be asleep and first get a glimpse of the person and then decide her plan of action ,she concluded that second one was more sensible , it is always better to prepare yourself and then plan your actions accordingly.

so she closed her eyes ,
...the action she was going to regret very soon.

Prithvi came inside the room and saw Meera on the bed, he went towards the old iron almirah and started trying to get something from behind it.

His back was facing Meera now.

Whatever he was trying to get was really stuck and he wasn't able to get it outside.

Meera who was pretending to sleep saw Prithvi from behind and couldn't believe herself when she saw someone wearing kurta and dhoti.

Meera(shocked, Man, is he wearing dhoti???)
Meera(concentrating more , yes it is dhoti)
Meera(who wears dhoti these days??)

Meera(did someone hit me so hard that i time traveled and reached 1900s)

Meera(eyes opened a little bit, By the way What's he trying to do)
Meera(seems to get something behind from that awful antique piece of almirah)

Meera(Dude, it is stuck behind that huge thing , you wont able to get it out)
Meera(You will have to move that humongous almirah, god only knows how old it is and how heavy it is , out of the way first)

Meera(Eyes opening bit more ,Looking by the size of almirah, it seems you will have to leave whatever you are trying to get out,there for eternity)

Prithvi not giving up and still trying even more harder.

Meera could now see the obvious,enormous and very impressive bulge of his biceps when he started to push the almirah even harder.

Meera(hmmm, spends lot time exercising)

Meera(Give it up dude, may be you are strong, but wont succeed)

From Meera's gauging of the Almirah, she was now sure that Prtihvi wont be able to move that almirah on his own and it would require total 4 people to even slightly tilt that huge piece of furniture.

and since Prithvi wasn't giving up and according to her was totally wasting his efforts, time and getting tired in the process was now making her more and more agitated.

Meera(what would it take him to realize that he is not strong enough)

Meera(I get it ,same problem, why is it hard for men to suck it up and move on, why is the omnipresent competition streak always activated, what's wrong in accepting defeat,Dude let go, what's the point of wasting time and energy on something which is never going to happen, gosh.. how hard it is ,only if his male ego allowed him to listen )

Meera(keep trying,, until it is drilled in your bonehead that IT IS NOT POSSIBLE )

After lot of trying , Prithvi still couldn't get any thing out, so he pushed the old almirah with his full force and moved it out of the way

Meera(mouth and eyes opened full now OMFG, did he just pushed that seemingly stuck to wall almirah with his bare hands)

Meera(did he do that for real)

Meera(how is he doing that)
Meera(he is STRRRONG)
Meera(he must be exercising a lot AND eating a lot)

Meera(Does he eat something out of this world)

Meera(What does he eats any ways)

Meera(i hope he doesn't eat me up)


Prithvi still with his back to Meera
Prithvi:if I had to eat you up, I would have done that already.

Meera now totally flabbergasted by everything happening in front her with eyes and mouth wide opened to their full capacity wished that right now would be the perfect moment for the earth to open up and swallow her alive.

Now he turned towards Meera whose thought process was now frozen.



How is it guys??
Let me know your thoughts..
and yes, it is totally inspired from Mithvi first meet where Meera got a glimpse of Prithvi's strength .



Edited by sabaSpeaks - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Me too Saba!Hope u r busy working ur magic agn on da next chapter?!😛M waitn eagerly to be spell bound by ur story 1ce again!!!😃😉Bring it on girl!!!😃
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Originally posted by: sabaSpeaks

Chapter 5


Meera who was totally engrossed in her thoughts was shaken by sound of footsteps.
somebody was coming near her with every second and she had absolutely no idea who this person is.
New wave of fear and anticipation shooted through her spine and she started sweating profusely.

Possible options of actions started taking place in her mind, running was definitely big no , she had to come up with best possible solution lying there.

After oscillating between keeping eyes open and direct confrontation with who ever was coming or pretend to be asleep and first get a glimpse of the person and then decide her plan of action ,she concluded that second one was more sensible , it is always better to prepare yourself and then plan your actions accordingly.

so she closed her eyes ,
...the action she was going to regret very soon.

Prithvi came inside the room and saw Meera on the bed, he went towards the old iron almirah and started trying to get something from behind it.

His back was facing Meera now.

Whatever he was trying to get was really stuck and he wasn't able to get it outside.

Meera who was pretending to sleep saw Prithvi from behind and couldn't believe herself when she saw someone wearing kurta and dhoti.

Meera(shocked, Man, is he wearing dhoti???)
Meera(concentrating more , yes it is dhoti)
Meera(who wears dhoti these days??)

Meera(did someone hit me so hard that i time traveled and reached 1900s)

Meera(eyes opened a little bit, By the way What's he trying to do)
Meera(seems to get something behind from that awful antique piece of almirah)

Meera(Dude, it is stuck behind that huge thing , you wont able to get it out)
Meera(You will have to move that humongous almirah, god only knows how old it is and how heavy it is , out of the way first)

Meera(Eyes opening bit more ,Looking by the size of almirah, it seems you will have to leave whatever you are trying to get out,there for eternity)

Prithvi not giving up and still trying even more harder.

Meera could now see the obvious,enormous and very impressive bulge of his biceps when he started to push the almirah even harder.

Meera(hmmm, spends lot time exercising)

Meera(Give it up dude, may be you are strong, but wont succeed)

From Meera's gauging of the Almirah, she was now sure that Prtihvi wont be able to move that almirah on his own and it would require total 4 people to even slightly tilt that huge piece of furniture.

and since Prithvi wasn't giving up and according to her was totally wasting his efforts, time and getting tired in the process was now making her more and more agitated.

Meera(what would it take him to realize that he is not strong enough)

Meera(I get it ,same problem, why is it hard for men to suck it up and move on, why is the omnipresent competition streak always activated, what's wrong in accepting defeat,Dude let go, what's the point of wasting time and energy on something which is never going to happen, gosh.. how hard it is ,only if his male ego allowed him to listen )

Meera(keep trying,, until it is drilled in your bonehead that IT IS NOT POSSIBLE )

After lot of trying , Prithvi still couldn't get any thing out, so he pushed the old almirah with his full force and moved it out of the way

Meera(mouth and eyes opened full now OMFG, did he just pushed that seemingly stuck to wall almirah with his bare hands)

Meera(did he do that for real)

Meera(how is he doing that)
Meera(he is STRRRONG)
Meera(he must be exercising a lot AND eating a lot)

Meera(Does he eat something out of this world)

Meera(What does he eats any ways)

Meera(i hope he doesn't eat me up)


Prithvi still with his back to Meera
Prithvi:if I had to eat you up, I would have done that already.

Meera now totally flabbergasted by everything happening in front her with eyes and mouth wide opened to their full capacity wished that right now would be the perfect moment for the earth to open up and swallow her alive.

Now he turned towards Meera whose thought process was now frozen.


How is it guys??
Let me know your thoughts..
and yes, it is totally inspired from Mithvi first meet where Meera got a glimpse of Prithvi's strength .




whoops did she say the last bit out loud?😛
Good one Saba - so like Meera to get sidetracked and not worry about escaping but trying to see if Prithvi can take that thing stuck behind the almirah out or not 😉
And isn't Prithvi's character just made for perfect dialogues 😊
Good job Saba.
Between Tehsina, Saba and May my days are moving faster than expected. Thanks ladies 😊😊
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Saba I dnt have words to describe HOW MUCH I loved this chapter!!!😃It was more than awesome!More than Fantastic!More than Fantabulous!Nd definitely it was Mithvilicious!!!😆😉Oh i love ur sense of homour so much!I was literally ROFLing while reading this!!!🤣🤣🤣And this part really caught my attention:

"Meera(he is STRRRONG)
Meera(he must be exercising a lot AND eating a lot)

Meera(Does he eat something out of this world)

Meera(What does he eats any ways)

Meera(i hope he doesn't eat me up)"

I sure would love watching or in this case reading Meera being gobbled up by Prithvi!!!😈😉😆bring on the next chapter girl!!!😃Nd this chapter was really worth waiting for!Thank you Saba!u r da best!👏👍🏼🤗
Edited by TehsinaJFJ - 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Junoonian


whoops did she say the last bit out loud?😛
Good one Saba - so like Meera to get sidetracked and not worry about escaping but trying to see if Prithvi can take that thing stuck behind the almirah out or not 😉
And isn't Prithvi's character just made for perfect dialogues 😊
Good job Saba.
Between Tehsina, Saba and May my days are moving faster than expected. Thanks ladies 😊😊

Don't tell me you thought she said it loud😲
Prithvi is my hero and he has to say the best lines 😳
Thanks for liking it 🤗

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