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Posted: 6 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: Sabdabhala

LASHY SAHIBA...WHEN THE UPDATE IS HERE...CAN ANYONE BE FAR BEHIND???? 😉

THANKS FOR OUR NEW ABODE, AND ALSO FOR THE MAGINIFICIENT UPDATE 👏


YOU NOT ONLY KEPT YOUR PROMISE OF DELIVERING THE UPDATE ONTIME, YOU ALSO KEPT YOUR PROMOSE OF RELIEVING US FROM THE CONSTANT HORRIFYING MEMORY OF THE BARBED WHIPLASHES...WHICH TORE UP SAHIB'S BODY...AND OUR HEARTS


NOW WE CAN BE AT PEACE KNOWING THAT ALL OF SAHIB'S AND HEERA'S WELL WISHERS ARE TOGETHER, TRYING THEIR VERY BEST, IN EVERY WAY THEY CAN, TO ENSURE THAT THEIR MISERY ENDS SOON 👏


AS USUAL, THE UPDATE WAS SUPERB - WONDERFULLY WORDED AND SUPERBLY NARRATED ⭐️ THE ROLLERCOASTER OF EMOTIONS THAT YOU MAKE US RIDE ⭐️


KUDOS TO THE PARNAGARHIS WHO HAVE RALLIED QUITE QUICKLY AFTER THE RUDE SHOCK THEY RECEIVED, AND ARE HERE IN FULL FORCE TO SUPPORT THEIR SAHIB AND BAISA 👏


SPECIAL MENTION TO SAHIB'S BEST MATE MIRZA BHAIJAAN FOR KEEPING A COOL HEAD DESPITE THE OBVIOUS EMOTIONAL TURMOIL AND THE SHEER DESPARATION AND HELPLESSNESS THAT WOULD HAVE ENGULFED HIM


A BIG SQUISHY HUG TO OUR VERY DEAR AZZU...YES HIS CATCH WAS PHENOMENAL NO DOUBT...BUT HIS THOUGHTS AND ACTIONS THROUGHOUT THIS EPISODE ARE IMMENSELY PRAISE WORTHY - LIKE THE EXCELLENT COACHING HE HAS GIVEN TO DHANI AND BINDIYA


A PAT ON THE BACK TO GAURI...AND BINIDYA AND DHAANI DESERVE TO BE HEAPED WITH PRAISES FOR THEIR INITIATIVE AND CAREFUL HANDLING OF THE SITUATION


ALL OF THEM TOGETHER HAVE WORKED OUT SAHIB'S CLUES AND ARE WELL ON THE PATH TOWARDS ACHIEVEING SOME IMPORTANT BREAKTHROUGHS ⭐️


WE ARE ALL INDEBTED TO EVERYONE FOR THESE RAYS OF LIGHT WHICH DISPEL THE DARKNESS...




Lavanya di 🤗
Like the way you penned down above paragraphs! 👍🏼
Well said ! 👏
Ofcourse now everyone is at peace knowing well everyone trying their best to help Khan sahib and heera ! 😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: karkuzhali


Grandma updated the story to Baby and Babloo kutty.. Baby was so impressed with it, she wanted to post musings on the first segment..

Chapter 53.

Imperial Prison Fort

Heera's Chamber.

'Heera...'

'Why? Why was the Hakim's visit unsuccessful? What do they say the Palace Hakim treated him with?'


'I am not certain, Heera... they say a few of his wounds were sutured... and bandaged... but...'

'Gauri' She tore open her swollen eyelids to catch a fleeting silhouette of her chief-maid 'did you ask the jailors too... ask if only they'd let me see him for a moment...'


'I did...'

'What if we tried to get in touch with the Shehenshah? He was close to my father... he might empathise with our situation'


'Heera...'

'Gauri... are you certain you've done all you can... we'd pay them whatever I have - if they allow me to see how he's doing'




'Why... why...' her voice quivered more than a withered feather 'WHYYY... even as he was being dragged across in chains, he didn't utter a word against his master... my Sahib considered him a brother... then, how could the Shehzaade do this to...'
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'Heera!' Gauri tried to cloak her sorrow with sternness 'You have to stay strong!'


'Remember this Heera... each moment that you blame yourself hereon, you take blame away from the real sinners - the ones who actually brought ill upon all... with every mishap that you hold yourself responsible for, you lighten the crimes of those criminals who've destroyed our lives - the hypocrites, the bigots, the murderers and the tyrants!'
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'W... wait'

Heera thought she'd just spotted a faint glow amidst the random blurs in the ceiling. But she couldn't be sure - not after having been blinded by grief and guilt night and day. 'Gauri... w... what did you say?


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'You said something... please repeat it... for me... once more'

Yes, she could see it clearly - the light - a celestial glow caressing her face with its divine touch, consoling her downtrodden soul and calming her sobs into a snivel.

'Say it again...'

Relief transformed her grimace into a smile. That turned wide. And wider still - till Gauri was beaming. The baisa WAS listening now. Finally!



'Give me courage ma... to face this... to endure this... for HIS sake... and for the sake of so many dependant on him... my heart beats in him and his in mine... if only one of us were to make it out of this alive, the other would walk through life as a soulless body... yet, if only one of us were to make it out of this alive... it must be HIM. For, he has the skills and the means to care for those dependant on us, better than I do... so, send me a path... show me a way to support him... such that I can help him get better... at least to give him a fair chance, if nothing else... what use is my education... what use is my devotion to the art of healing, if I cannot help treat the one I love when he needs me most?'


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Baby.



Apt choices of GIF, Baby... Beautiful! 👏 👏 but Heera 'kka..😭 😭
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Posted: 6 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: Bindu.

I was so eager to read the update that I forgot to login,di..the 'members only' forced me to 😆But before starting, I couldn't help taking a deep breath and praying for something positive..and the update was not only positive but entertaining too in some parts😆

The way every one was coming forward to help their sahib and sahiba was so beautiful and uplifting..the real treasure anyone could amass is this,loyalty and love of their people. Shehzaade might become an emperor one day,but he can never truly enjoy this kind of love and devotion from his people..he lost the only person who was selfless and devoted to him.

You've shown everyone's emotions in a brilliant manner,di..I could feel their pain,helplessness,anxiety and finally a sense of hope!⭐️⭐️

Heera's pain and the guilt were heart-wrenching..it was something we were dreading to read.Gauri looked like an angel to me.Can't imagine Heera's state without Gauri's support,mainly the emotional support.

BTW,Heera's place looks so old and dirty. Is this what noble treatment is?😡

'Give me courage ma... to face this... to endure this... for HIS sake... and for the sake of so many dependant on him... my heart beats in him and his in mine... if only one of us were to make it out of this alive, the other would walk through life as a soulless body... yet, if only one of us were to make it out of this alive... it must be HIM. For, he has the skills and the means to care for those dependant on us, better than I do... so, send me a path... show me a way to support him... such that I can help him get better... at least to give him a fair chance, if nothing else... what use is my education... what use is my devotion to the art of healing, if I cannot help treat the one I love when he needs me most?'

>>😭👏⭐️


It belonged to a Mughal nobleman who coincidentally knew both Mansabdars of Parnagarh - Hukum Jagat Prasad Singh, and Ustaad Akbar Mahmoud Khan.

>>This is interesting.Will this person have a greater role to play besides giving the men of Ustaad a place to stay?

Discoloured with blood and grime, and torn beyond recognition, it took them a good while to realise that it was no rag - but a piece of clothing. A man's clothing. A grey tunic.

'Exactly like the one...' he pushed down the bile that'd come up to his throat 'Khan Sahib had been wearing last'

>>OMG,this was 😭 how alarming it would've been for the men!

'Mirza bhaijaan' Azeez held his chin up to the man, as an act of defiance 'Do you really think I hesitate to lay my life for this mission? With Chota gone, I have no one else to live for anyway...'

>>What? He seems to have forgotten Kuki😆

'I know...' Sayyid clicked his fingers with confidence - the sound of his clicks twice as loud as the voices around 'It's a symbol for 'spinning'... similar to how our Sahib often spins a blade... is he hinting that we must smuggle blades... weapons in?'

'NO! He wouldn't have planned anything so risky - not when our Sahiba is their prisoner too!'

'Maybe it signifies a 'circle'... does he want all of us to encircle the prison fort?'

'Darn no! Our Sahib believes in playing it quiet'

'That gesture also symbolises 'repeat'... what if he's asking us to repeat a few tricks from one of our past missions?'

'No!' Murmured Ibrahim under his breath, waiting for the clamour to come to a stop.

And it did.

>>Build-up ekkuva,business thakkuva😆He's giving all wrong answers with so much of confidence🤣I thought he'll crack the clue but all his guesses were exactly opposite to how Khan Sahib thinks..😆


For, everyone was eager to hear the guesswork of their wise mate.


'I do not think that gesture was meant to be a circle, a spin or a cycle... I think Akbar was furling up something...' His fingers inadvertently made small rolls as he spoke 'like a scroll!'


>>Mirza bhaijaan,you are truly a star for the way you dealt with these angry young men and also solved the clues.

No more cement floors in this janam😆 😆

Seriously, the decoding of all the clues and planning was brilliant.

'Have you seen the way her hands work? It's sheer magic... simple leaves evolve into nectar... potions dance to her tunes... as if the Goddess herself has misted her divine powers onto them'

'Our banna does not exaggerate... I've served at the Haveli several years, and seen it myself... dead plants have literally come back to life with her touch... '

>>Sooo beautiful!


Ibrahim broke out into an awkward half-frown, while Daya and Bajrang coughed aloud - clearly embarrassed by the suggestive tones of her rebuttal.

>>🤣

'I do have a doubt... what were you referring to, when you said you had a cure for the 'mischief' in his eyes?'

>>😆😆

Her head bowed down, right beside her baisa's feet - displaying the humblest form of remorse from each throbbing corner of her conscience - even though she knew that her own pearly tears would not be visible to the Lady's fuzzy gazes. If she could, she would swap places with her mistress in a pulse. Take on her entire suffering. Count endless hours on a grimy mattress in the grim room of a grimmer building.

But on what basis could she say such lofty statements - when not so long ago, she'd been on the other side pointing fingers at Harka Bai too?

'Baisa... I... I... am sorry... for everything'

'It's alright'

Heera whispered, a moment later - her soft smile dispelling those hard heavy sentiments like bubbles in air. 'Now go... take care!'

>>Aww..this is touching,di..


But the next moment, a lone figure bolted from their midst like a beam - his limbs and senses faster than the thousands surrounding him. The thrill pounding in his ears was so loud that it deafened most of the cacophony around - but that only helped the young chap meander his way through the crowd like light through fabric - fearing no one, stopping at nothing. He angled over hurdles, bent under barriers and passed through any gap he could find - all this while his unflinching glares stayed fixated on the prize that came plunging lower and lower with each passing beat.

>>Whistle-podu,what a catch,what a chase!🤪 Hope Kuki begum makes an appearance soon..😆

The unruly boys would not have given up so easily. But when they saw an apparent fried of the young chap joining in - a burly thuggish man twice their size - their feet inadvertently began faltering backwards.

>>😲😲 My imagination of Sayyid seems to be different from the actual,di..😆 Anyway,what if he is not as wise as MB(Mirza bhaijaan..not Mahesh babu😆) he's at least got the muscular physique that scares people.

Not everyone's as lucky as Heera to get someone who's got both brains and brawn😆

Jokes apart, you have cleverly displayed everyone's skill in this update di. Gauri and IM's sensible and practical side,Azeez's agility and Sayyid's strength.


But,Dhani was a surprise to me,didn't think she was capable of something like this.Bindiya has truly been Heera's eyes many times and her poetry too came in handy,today.Who thought this was possible.

Have to see how the plan of reaching out to Shehanshah and sending the medicine to AMK works out.Tejraj has already met AMK and none of the men know it,as of now.Hope Parnagarhis get to meet him soon.He knows the contents of the scroll exactly unlike Ratan kakasa who has read only few lines.

We knew the special knot would be of help someday and it did.

Thanks for the wonderful update,di..the narration was vivid,as always!👏



Interesting and entertaining review, Bond! 👏 😆
I enjoyed reading it.😳

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Posted: 6 years ago
#94
Good morning Banjaras and Baisas 🤗
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Posted: 6 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: karkuzhali


Grandma updated the story to Baby and Babloo kutty.. Baby was so impressed with it, she wanted to post musings on the first segment..

'Why... why...' her voice quivered more than a withered feather 'WHYYY... even as he was being dragged across in chains, he didn't utter a word against his master... my Sahib considered him a brother... then, how could the Shehzaade do this to...'
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>>> awww😭

'Heera!' Gauri tried to cloak her sorrow with sternness 'You have to stay strong!' Related image

Gauri so cute she looks here!

'W... wait'

Heera thought she'd just spotted a faint glow amidst the random blurs in the ceiling. But she couldn't be sure - not after having been blinded by grief and guilt night and day. 'Gauri... w... what did you say?


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>>>👍🏼

Relief transformed her grimace into a smile. That turned wide. And wider still - till Gauri was beaming. The baisa WAS listening now. Finally!
>>>😃


'Give me courage ma... to face this... to endure this... for HIS sake... and for the sake of so many dependant on him... my heart beats in him and his in mine... if only one of us were to make it out of this alive, the other would walk through life as a soulless body... yet, if only one of us were to make it out of this alive... it must be HIM. For, he has the skills and the means to care for those dependant on us, better than I do... so, send me a path... show me a way to support him... such that I can help him get better... at least to give him a fair chance, if nothing else... what use is my education... what use is my devotion to the art of healing, if I cannot help treat the one I love when he needs me most?'


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Oh dear...
Lovely Disney musings Baby!👏


Edited by lashy - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: Testmytest


Lashy it was 4:45 AM when I woke up, you know why? well you know why, yes C53!!! I usually wake up at 6:15 but today I got up early, when I slept I was thinking about you, C53, AMK, Heera...so I couldn't sleep properly

Awww
Oh dear... hope you were able to catch up on your sleep last night then!🤗
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Posted: 6 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: binduprasad41

Chapter 53
Ray of hope...hope that everything will be fine soon... Khan sahib's men and parnagrahis try their best to help to Khan sahib and heera...no matter what.
Yes da!👍🏼
Thrilling and exciting update...apart from starting.
This is the time for Khan sahib s men and parnagrahis to pay back what their sahib and sahiba did for them .
Yes they've all come together!😳
Mere and simple maids putting their life for their sahib and sahiba...that's Khan sahib and heera achievement which their enemies never going to achieve .
Beautiful line!👏
Each and every one trying their best...Bindiya, Dhani, gauri, Ratan kaka...everyone trying their level best to make them helpful.
I am so proud of everyone...how they united and working their best...without loosing their patience.
Awww main persons to be credited for it are Ibrahim Mirza and Mohan banna though..
Wow...they crack Khan sahib's codes ...Bindiya and dhani reached to heera and bring help for Khan sahib.
Heera used Khan sahib's unique knot ...
Lashy di I just love the way you connect each and everything.
Thank you so so much dearie!🤗

'Khuda...' His trembling fingers tried joining together parts of the Sahib's collar that had been torn, but in vain. 'He ensured we men got out, free... and ended up facing the wrath of our Huzoor, alone... a wrath that was possibly triggered by my brash display in court! Forgive me, Ustaad Sahib!'

This is so Cry Cry Cry
It brings tear in my eyes ...
Yes... it was a very touching incident from the past😭
But below paragraph bring smile in my face. Smile
This only you can do it in very single chapter. Embarrassed

Awww🤗 thanks a ton!

Azeez turned to Sayyid thereafter, a grin plastered on his cheek.

'The 'unique' knot - we've got it!'

'Yes, we have!'


Lashy di Hug
What a update...take a bow for it.
Each chapter expressed so much...it shows us how much effort you put in it...lots of thinking...connecting each and every single things. ...giving importance to each character's...wow just wow.Clap
Thank you once again... from the bottom of my heart!🤗
I feel honour to read your work di.
Do you have any idea you are a true magician...visibility doesn't show that much emotions which shows your write up.
Love you so much! Hug

Love you tons and tons Hug



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Posted: 6 years ago
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Rendering the frame of her own body as a backrest for the sagging silhouette of her baisa, Gauri propped her up.


Dredging up the stamina to drag herself on the floor, Heera edged towards the small altar of the Goddess in the corner, inch after inch. She could continue agonising endlessly, lashing herself with guilt till her wounds bled dry. Or, she could pray for his recovery, and think of more means to get him the sort of help that might end his agony.

'Give me courage ma...'

Letting go of her spinning head, she folded her palms at the vague frame of the beautiful bronze statue - that act alone having squeezed dry what little strength she had.

'Give me courage ma... to face this... to endure this... for HIS sake... and for the sake of so many dependant on him... my heart beats in him and his in mine... if only one of us were to make it out of this alive, the other would walk through life as a soulless body... yet, if only one of us were to make it out of this alive... it must be HIM. For, he has the skills and the means to care for those dependant on us, better than I do... so, send me a path... show me a way to support him... such that I can help him get better... at least to give him a fair chance, if nothing else... what use is my education... what use is my devotion to the art of healing, if I cannot help treat the one I love when he needs me most?'



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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: lashy

Rendering the frame of her own body as a backrest for the sagging silhouette of her baisa, Gauri propped her up.


Dredging up the stamina to drag herself on the floor, Heera edged towards the small altar of the Goddess in the corner, inch after inch. She could continue agonising endlessly, lashing herself with guilt till her wounds bled dry. Or, she could pray for his recovery, and think of more means to get him the sort of help that might end his agony.

'Give me courage ma...'

Letting go of her spinning head, she folded her palms at the vague frame of the beautiful bronze statue - that act alone having squeezed dry what little strength she had.

'Give me courage ma... to face this... to endure this... for HIS sake... and for the sake of so many dependant on him... my heart beats in him and his in mine... if only one of us were to make it out of this alive, the other would walk through life as a soulless body... yet, if only one of us were to make it out of this alive... it must be HIM. For, he has the skills and the means to care for those dependant on us, better than I do... so, send me a path... show me a way to support him... such that I can help him get better... at least to give him a fair chance, if nothing else... what use is my education... what use is my devotion to the art of healing, if I cannot help treat the one I love when he needs me most?'



Oh my Heera..😭 😭 😭
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Posted: 6 years ago
Welcome Akdhaparijat 🤗
Chellam... I saw that painting by Shuchi Kishan and was struck by its depiction to the likeness of Heera... the loss of glow on a beautiful young girl, the frail look, the loss of interest in adornment, even the pillar for support 😭

Edited by lashy - 6 years ago

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