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Posted: 7 years ago
Beautiful edit...Lashy...and I agree...His is Face is Calm and collected...and glowing in confidence ...

Before the flogging, the fear he went through on hearing the sound of barbed whip...that shocked me...AMK in fear and falling back into that nightmare of his childhood made me numb for a moment...but I immediately felt that he has already found his light in the form of Heera...so her name, thoughts will bring him back...

When I saw this edit last night, I thought it was for the future use...but when you'd said Itz from That time...and those Orange fires of Hell...deflated my hope ...But the simile with NJAPA...yes, I agree...



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Posted: 7 years ago
🤣...Good idea...Kal
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Originally posted by: selvi1275

Beautiful edit...Lashy...and I agree...His is Face is Calm and collected...and glowing in confidence ...
Thank you... 🤗 glad you liked it...

Before the flogging, the fear he went through on hearing the sound of barbed whip...that shocked me...AMK in fear and falling back into that nightmare of his childhood made me numb for a moment...
But I immediately felt that he has already found his light in the form of Heera...so her name, thoughts will bring him back...
Yes... he feared dying not for himself but for HER...

When I saw this edit last night, I thought it was for the future use...but when you'd said Itz from That time...and those Orange fires of Hell...deflated my hope ...But the simile with NJAPA...yes, I agree...
>>>👍🏼


Thanks Selvi 🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago

Beautiful gifts.. WOW, Vathsy!
Body shop strawberry... awww... you'll come out smelling yummy!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: karkuzhali



Stay Safe.. Be Safe..



Close your eyes and let your pain sweep away
Forget about the horrors of today
Just close your eyes and hold yourself tight
And you'll be okay
Tomorrow is the time for plans
You need to get off horrors land
But that's for tomorrow
Stay safe for today...
Wow... this is Heera's soul whispering to him THEN?

Please keep me safe within your arms
Protect me from the worldly harms
Always assure me that you're there
Should moments become much to bear
👍🏼
Surround my heart, just like a shield
So that my strength shall be revealed
👍🏼
Then tell me softly, so I'll know
That, from me, you'll never let go.

Please keep me safe, come dark of night
Be my protector in the fight
He's saying this to her, isn't he? 😊
Should nightmares come, scare them away
Keeping my evil fears at bay
Stay here beside me, til the dawn
You are the one that I count on
To walk the line, keeping the peace
So that my trepidation ceases.

Please keep me safe 'til journey's end
Be my companion and my friend
Share your uncanny love with me
Since I am sure you would agree
Our lives should not be spent alone
Some hearts should not live on their own
We were destined to join as one
Safely in love 'til life is done.
Wow... the last 4 lines are beautiful... simply beautiful!👏

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Posted: 7 years ago

This is stunning... what is this bejewelled place on Earth, Selvi? 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Testmytest

HW ---> 22 pages 😲

Have a lot to read this time! Looks like Lana dear has bounced back!! 👏

Ok will come back after the HW!!


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Originally posted by: melovesja


Stay stronge my Love
Still to face more,
Well said!👍🏼
My words will works and
Our prayer will be fufilled
We will be with each other
In heaven of two rings of arms
Awww ❤️
Just stay safe my love
Sta saf my...lo...ve.
You added that touch of his actual last words! 😭


It's beautiful, Mitu... like Chellam said... after such a long time!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: lghosh



Is it really you my Love in my arms I see?
Did you come running in my embrace, to me?
Awww...
Or is this a vision of all my painful stupor?
Or a beautiful reality of my beloved trouper?
😭

We are held by the same string of Love from birth,
Held by our soul's strong bond from Heaven to Earth!
Do you think they will keep me shackled in these chains?
And bind me endlessly in manacles, keeping me in pains?
String... bond... shackle... manacle... similar things, but convey different meanings entirely👏 was this intentionally penned or just happened to be so?

When will I feel those beautiful silky tresses of yours,
That is what binds me for life and it soothingly cures;
The wounds have numbed me from the painful lashes,
But your scent, your form, your touch, heals the gashes!
😭

You are my soulmate and I had given you my solemn word,
But will I be able to keep it now with my senses all blurred?
Still, I will do what I have to till the very last drop of my blood,
Beware the devils, it will be a duel of fiercely contested red flood!
😭

With your wishes, faith and love as my armor of a warrior,
You in my arms to wish me luck - nothing will be a barrier!
I loved these two lines👏
We will sail through this rough journey together in arms,
Worry not, anxious fear will lit the evil dark heart's alarms!


Till then my Love, stay with me, let me close my eyes in your lap,
In other circumstances, this'd sound so romantic... here it sounds very heart-tugging!😭
I want to drown in your dreams of love - a gift I will slowly unwrap!
☺️
Till then 'Just Stay Safe, My Heera', it is my whole and sole concern,
My men's safety and to protect you are the only prayers to Khuda, I yearn!
😭


Lashy, I had this poem jump at me in Hindi and Urdu and I finally penned it after work but when I posted it, IF lost the post! 😡

Oh dear...
So I just made it do with this mundane one for lack of time! 🤔

Nothing you write is mundane! 👍🏼 I am saying this even before I read the poem...
ETA: Alright... read it... you ought to re-check the meaning of mundane 😉 for it surely doesn't gel with what I have here..

Beautiful edit!! 👏 Those shapely lips and stylish goatee!! And those arms in his riding gloves holding her!

That's his warrior attire...

And she running in to his arms with no care with her tresses flying behind her!
I loved this part a lot!

Mashallah! 👏
Edited by lashy - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Till then my Love, stay with me, let me close my eyes in your lap,
I want to drown in your dreams of love - a gift I will slowly unwrap!
Till then 'Just Stay Safe, My Heera', it is my whole and sole concern,
My men's safety and to protect you are the only prayers to Khuda, I yearn!

Heera's response in whispers

'Wake up, my Love, don't close your eyes in my lap - not yet...
I know you are tired, in pain; but this journey has only just started.
Drown we will, in dreams of love, but now by cruel Hell-fires we are beset,
Till the flames are doused, the battle won, we'd have to be strong, and hard-hearted!'
Edited by lashy - 7 years ago

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