NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~THREAD 44-CHAPTER 49 Upd 31st May

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Kalgi22

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Posted: 7 years ago

#1481

Originally posted by: melovesja

kal..🤗 fine and vaccation was awesome. how r u dearie and how is your choreography prepration😉

Choreography preparation is in full swing...

Khan Sahib and Heera.. Lana note that no tree it's Heera..

And IM and Rosejaan 😉

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Kalgi22

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Posted: 7 years ago

#1482

Originally posted by: Bindu.
Chellam Akka, good morning!🤗Yes, I'm gonna help Anindita Di.. 😆

😉 😆 🤗

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Lana Ghosh

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Posted: 7 years ago

#1483

Okay, so in absence of Jiya teacher, I got a special call from staffroom today! I went in with an unknown trepidation thinking what or who I might come across but lo and behold, in front of all, there was the person I was all anxious to see about! Mr. Khan!!

In his deep rich baritone, he called me inside and very nicely handed me a lesson to pass on to all of you. He also said everyone should submit their homework starting with me! 😉 And if he is satisfied then there will be a special treat for all of us!! He said we should work hard for Jiya teacher and pray for her quick recovery! So shuru ho jaayo, read, learn and submit your homework!! 😃

WORD OF THE DAY

KHuld

means

Paradise

gulshan-e-huld k ky baat hai ky kahn hai

par hame tere h kche me pa rahn hai

Meaning

The garden of Paradise is unparallel, what can be told or said,

but I want to stay behind in your narrow street only.

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Now my homework is here Mr. Khan.

Aap ke mushkurahat ke junnon-e-ishq mein ghayal yeh dil,

Mushaira mein baithe har nazm pe aap hi ke naam ka mehfil,

khuld ke har gul murjhaake aap ke samne toh fikaa ho jaate,

Aap ke ishq ke bandagi mein jaagte hai yeh saare rishte-naate!

In one smile of yours, my heart is all infatuated with you,

In the poetry assembly, all the verses only had your name,

Every flower of paradise wilt and wither away in front of you,

In the prayers of love in your name, all relationships come alive!

Adaab arz hai! Shukriya! 😃

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Lana Ghosh

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Posted: 7 years ago

#1484

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

Choreography preparation is in full swing...

Khan Sahib and Heera.. Lana note that no tree it's Heera..

And IM and Rosejaan 😉

Hailaaa!! Heera and AMK dance!! 😲 It is not 'A' but 'MA' rating!! 😳😆

And Rosejaan and IM...hai hai, look at the dip with her eyes fixed on his face! Bhabijaan get ready to rock and roll! 😉😆

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Lana Ghosh

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Posted: 7 years ago

#1485

Originally posted by: lashy

😲😆 But seriously... do you know how to whistle?

Authorjaan, your knight hardly did anything girlish when she was young! She was a total tomboy, never ever played with dolls or any kitchenette sets. 😆 I had 6 cousin brothers to look up to and being the youngest I was sheltered, pampered and also taught by them. In Bengal, cousins are treated like your own brothers, so I was influenced big time by them and I also followed them blindly! My all-time adulation of Big B is also because of them. 😃

So I played gilli danda (danguli), kancha (marbles), flew kites and even prepared the thread with glass powder, caught wild parrots, learned karate from them, learned to whistle, played outdoor games, learned carrom and variety of card games...so the whole nine yards! 😉😆

Yes, I know how to whistle, maybe to a tune but I can't with fingers in my mouth. I simply use the tongue to push the back of the lower set of my teeth and blow air to a tune or to call someone!! 😆My mom would have chopped me to pieces if she ever saw me doing it but nevertheless, I know! 😉😆 Ab tumko maaloom par gaya! 😆

Rekha, you are welcome to come over any time and learn to whistle which I mentioned above!! About guru dakshina, you are supposed to find an AMK for me, remember?? Find him, that will be my gurudakshina! 🤣 Iss janam mein shayad tum ko gurudakshina nahi dena padega, kyunki woh toh milega nahi! 😔 But you can learn to whistle! 😃

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Lana Ghosh

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Posted: 7 years ago

#1486

Originally posted by: lashy

Btw girls - I have a query for you all...

Since part 4 is by large a drama thriller - and thrillers depend on momentum -

A) Would you like me to continue with this sort of updating style? A chapter every 3 weeks?

Or

b) Would you rather I put up a scene every week - that way it'd still be a chapter every 3 weeks... but it'd keep us more in tune with the ongoings at the capital? 🤔

I ask this because as I was charting out part 4 yesterday, I realised that unlike romance (whose flavour lingers on for long), a thriller is 'in the moment'... at least for me, it is!
And I would not find myself very at the 'edge-of-a-seat' by a thriller that I have to wait for 20-25 days to catch up on, to find out what's going on next! No?🤔

Truth be told when I am reading a book, I don't like to wait and finish it all at one go but here in our HBAS I like waiting and chatting and discussing about probable scenarios, get anxious about the upcoming chapters, weave castles in the air on my own...so I would prefer you updating every month instead of every week! That way the apprehensions go up to the optimum and you always deliver the goods beyond our expectations. So I would want to continue like the present set up!

Moreover, it will be less stressful for you firstly, secondly, fewer posts for you to make responding everyone every time, on top of writing the update...so it is better this way!! And thirdly, with monthly updates I can prolong my AMK's existence with me, weekly updates will end the story faster!

Thank you for everything! 🤗

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Lana Ghosh

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Posted: 7 years ago

#1487

Originally posted by: Sandhya.A
49 was an emotional turning point of sorts for everyone. It must have been more difficult to pan it out as it had to etch out the reactions of so many on an unexpected turn in life. It was very well penned with the characters remaining in sync with their portrayal so far. 👏

The Parnagarhis reacted wrt Heera how she reacted when she learnt the truth out of the blue, shock, disbelief , anger morphing into hatred, but this time there was an added mob mentality.

Mohan Banna's entry to placate the crowd though expected excelled in its emotional content. His appeal was touching sincere yet strong enough to make the people stop and think.

And the Khan Sahib Shehzade scene was the best. Both men hav e immense respect for the other's intelligence. Yet Shehzade exhibits caution and a slight sadism probably seething within at the loss of such a valuable aide due to a woman, and AMK exhibits sincerity to establish the usual normalcy between them. Shehzade by now looks convinced of AMK's betrayal. Probably due to evidence fabricated by Farooq Sahib in cahoots with Khalil. And Khalil would dare to openly send his men to Parnagarh to demand Heera at the Capital and expose Ustaad's identity only when he is convinced that the Shehzade is convinced that AMK is no longer indispensible as his loyalty is questionable.

Looking forward to the final part when the leads use their wits to expose the plotters and come clean.

Sandy Begum subhallah for your to the point brief review touching the main points! 👏 It seems after decades I read from you!! Now TIP post kar de meri ma!! 😆

What news of putrasa's college admission? All the best to him! 👍🏼

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Lana Ghosh

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Posted: 7 years ago

#1488

Originally posted by: Unbeknown

You all decide what's better way to get the chapter done...I'll enjoy the chocolate cake till then 😆

Aparna, hope both mommy and baby are satisfied after consuming the cake! 😆 I am so glad everything is fine and all the tests are good!! 👍🏼 The staff who is pregnant like you was telling me she has purchased this book "What to Expect when you are Expecting" and she said it is a bible for pregnant women! It gives every month's development, every doc visit, tests performed, diet, exercises...everything is written about pregnancy! If you don't have it already then you might get the book to read about what is expected at this time. 😃

When is mom coming? Next month or end of this month?

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Lana Ghosh

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Posted: 7 years ago

#1489

Originally posted by: Testmytest
I was listening to "tere sang yaara" song from Rustom movie earlier and
thought the lyrics/meaning of the song is so perfect for our leads!

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with you, O beloved,
the spring is colorful,
you are the crazy night,
and I am the yellow star.

it's a divine mercy,
that I have met you.
I have learned to live by
falling in love with you

with you, O beloved,
the spring is colorful,
I'll be yours,
if you just give me a sign.

wherever, in whichever street I go,
I meet your fragrance,
you are the dream I dream every night.

our meeting is a custom.
there is a divine light in me from your existence,
I'm a deserted sky,
and you are the moon.

With you, O beloved,
the spring is colorful,
without you now,
I wouldn't want to live.

I have left all other paths,
I have come to you.
there is your name in my eyes,
recognize it.

for me everything is after you,
long story short, that's the one thing.
I'll never go, leaving you alone,
know this.

with you, O beloved,
the spring is colorful,
I am the flowing passenger,
and you are a silent shore.