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hai friends,i am here with first part...
may be a small one...think it as an introduction...
PART 1
humayun,hamida are travelling along with their kids bhakshi and her small brother,jalaluddin since 2 days...
all are tired,but eager to meet their deared ones...
as its getting late,they decided to put khemas and rested for the day along with the soldiers...
little jalal who was sleeping on humayun's chest asked hamida "ammi...when are we going to meet maasa???"
hamida laughed at her son knowing why he is so eager to meet her best friend,mainavathi...
she teased him by replying"it will take 5-7 days jalal beta..." for which he cutely pouted
he said sadly"but every time we reach early...you know ammi...maasa promised me a gudiya this time when we meet..."
hamida laughed loud looking at his sad face suddenly glowing with excitement and kissed him
jalal pouted and complained to his father"dekho abbu...ammi is teasing me...you tell naa..when will we go to maasa and baapusaa?????i cant wait to play with my gudiya..."
hamida again laughed out loudly hearing jalal...seeing jalal about to cry.. humayun scolded hamida playfully..."what is this begum???he may cry"
hamida stopped her laugh with much difficulty..."you know what...he is keeping on chanting this line since the time i told him that we are going to amer...i cant stop myself anymore" and she laughed again...
all this while bhakshi was sleeping peacefully and soon the trio too slept after convincing jalal that they will reach tomorrow evening and he may get a gudiya soon...
they reached amer palace after a long journey of 3 tireful days...all were tired like hell,but all their tiredness gone seeing no one coming to receive them at the palace gate...the guards there directed them towards inner queen quarters only to hear maina shouting..hamida immediately ran into the room while humayun handed over the sleeping kida to loyable servants there and went to his best friend,bharmal to comfort him...
after a long labour,maina was finally able to deliver a baby girl who is cute like a teddy,soft like cotton and looking like a candy...hamida took the baby into her arms and whispered into her ears..."welcome to this world JODHA...meet me,your ammi" she gently kissed the baby and took her to clean the blood...
that's it for now...hope you enjoyed...
i'm poor in writing as you know it's my first one...
all reviews and suggestions are welcome...please do comment and can anyone suggest a good name to this story ...please...
may be a small one...think it as an introduction...
PART 1
humayun,hamida are travelling along with their kids bhakshi and her small brother,jalaluddin since 2 days...
all are tired,but eager to meet their deared ones...
as its getting late,they decided to put khemas and rested for the day along with the soldiers...
little jalal who was sleeping on humayun's chest asked hamida "ammi...when are we going to meet maasa???"
hamida laughed at her son knowing why he is so eager to meet her best friend,mainavathi...
she teased him by replying"it will take 5-7 days jalal beta..." for which he cutely pouted
he said sadly"but every time we reach early...you know ammi...maasa promised me a gudiya this time when we meet..."
hamida laughed loud looking at his sad face suddenly glowing with excitement and kissed him
jalal pouted and complained to his father"dekho abbu...ammi is teasing me...you tell naa..when will we go to maasa and baapusaa?????i cant wait to play with my gudiya..."
hamida again laughed out loudly hearing jalal...seeing jalal about to cry.. humayun scolded hamida playfully..."what is this begum???he may cry"
hamida stopped her laugh with much difficulty..."you know what...he is keeping on chanting this line since the time i told him that we are going to amer...i cant stop myself anymore" and she laughed again...
all this while bhakshi was sleeping peacefully and soon the trio too slept after convincing jalal that they will reach tomorrow evening and he may get a gudiya soon...
they reached amer palace after a long journey of 3 tireful days...all were tired like hell,but all their tiredness gone seeing no one coming to receive them at the palace gate...the guards there directed them towards inner queen quarters only to hear maina shouting..hamida immediately ran into the room while humayun handed over the sleeping kida to loyable servants there and went to his best friend,bharmal to comfort him...
after a long labour,maina was finally able to deliver a baby girl who is cute like a teddy,soft like cotton and looking like a candy...hamida took the baby into her arms and whispered into her ears..."welcome to this world JODHA...meet me,your ammi" she gently kissed the baby and took her to clean the blood...
that's it for now...hope you enjoyed...
i'm poor in writing as you know it's my first one...
all reviews and suggestions are welcome...please do comment and can anyone suggest a good name to this story ...please...
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