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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: lghosh


Haila!!! Kuki Begum, seedha seedha bluffing!!! 😔 Didn't expect this!! Moi tremendously hurt! And you said, the part of Azeez telling me, if only that is bluffing, then this means the main content of the message of his clearing the hideout cabin for your rendezvous is NOT!! 🤣 That itself is enough for me!! 😆 Tum dono ki jodi amar rahe!! 😆 Next I will ask Lavanya to write a gatha on your amar premkahani!! 😆

Hey bhagwan...
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Posted: 8 years ago


Thank you my dear Banjaras..
And Good Night




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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: karkuzhali



Thank you my dear Banjaras..
And Good Night




Good night, darling Periyamma! Rest Well! 🤗


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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Sabdabhala



SO AS WE WAIT FOR LASHY DEAR TO COMPLETE AND POST HER UPDATE, I AM DONE WITH PART 7 OF THE VERSES


HERE THEY ARE...


AJNABI PART 7


EK DIN JAB MAN HARKHA KA BHAR AAYA KAR JIJI KO YAAD
USS DIN BHI VE KHAN SAHIB HI THHE JISNE DIYA THHA USKA HAATH

(One day when Harkha was sad, sitting and remembering her Jiji, it was Khan Sahib himself who was with her, consoling her)


DONO NE BAANTI DHER SI BAATEIN, BAITHE EK DUJEKE SANG
HARKHA KE BEHTE AANSOO DEKH KAR HRIDAY HUA KHAN SAHIB KA TUNG

(Both of them sat together and shared many things about their lives with each other. Harkha's tears moved Khan Sahib and tugged at his heart)


RUMAAL BADHAAYA KHAN SAHIB NE PYAAR SE JAB HARKHA KI ORE
THEEK SE DEKH NA PAAYI HARKHA, BAAHEIN THHAMI USNE PURZOR

(Khan Sahib affectionately offered Harkha his handkerchief. Tears clouded Harkha's vision, and she could not see clearly. She grabbed his arm instead)


VAASTAVIKTA JAB SAAMNE AAYI TO HARKHA LAJJIT HUI BADI
DOOR KAKSH SE BINDIYA DEKH RAHI THHI YE SAB, VISMIT KHADI

(When Harkha realised her folly, she was deeply embarrassed. A shocked and stunned Bindiya was watching this entire scene from the room afar)


HARKHA SOCHTI KHAN SAHIB BHALE HAIN, DHOKHA NA DENGE CHAHE KUCHH HO JAAYE
AISE MEIN USKE VICHALIT MAN NE DURGA KA RAAZ UNHE DIYA BATAAYE

(Harkha trusted Khan Sahib completely, and thought of him as a person who would never deceive her, come what may. Hence inadvertently she blurted out DURGA'S secret in his presence)


HARKHA KA YUUN ITNE SAMEEP AANA KHAN SAHIB KE SAIYAM KO TOD GAYA
SHAREER KO BHAAYI USKI NIKATTHA, MAN KO BHAAYI USKI HAYA

(Harkha's close proximity with him, rattled Khan Sahib. His body was immensely enjoying her being close, while his heart was enjoying her embarrassment)


MANDIR KI SEEDHI PAR AKELI HARKHA BAITHI DIKHI JAB KHAN SAHIB KO
YAATRA KO BEECH MEIN TAAL KE PAHUCHE TAB WO USKI SURAKSHA KO

(When Khan Sahib spotted Harkha sitting alone on the temple steps, he stopped his steed and went forth in her direction in order to protect her)


UNHONE SAMJHAYA HARKHA KO KI AKELE BAITHNA SURAKSHIT NAHI
TAB HARKHA BOLI KE KUCHH SAINIK SAATH HAIN, HAIN PAAS YAHIN

(He explained to Harkha than sitting alone without a guard is not safe. To that Harkha pointed him to assure him that her guards are right here, close by)


SAINIK DEKH KAR HARKHA KE KHAN SAHIB KO HUA SANTOSH
PAR HARKHA KE PAAS JAB BICHHOO DIKHA TO, UNKE TO BAS UD GAYE HOSH

(When he saw Harkha's guards sitting close by Khan Sahib was satisfied. But the next moment he saw a scorpion near Harkha, and he just completely startled)


JHAT KAABOO KAR SWAYAM KO WO PHIR JUT GAYE HARKHA KO BACHAANE MEIN
BINA CHAUNKAAYE HARKHA KO VE LAG GAYE BICHHOO BHAGAANE MEIN

(He controlled his momentary shock and started focussing on saving Harkha. Without revealing the name of the foe, he started the efforts to neutralise it)


BICHHOO KE VISH SE UNHONE BACHAAYA HARKHA KO, NA RUKE TANIK
UNKE HAATH MEIN DANK LAGA, JISKE PASCHAAT VE HUE PEEDIT

(Khan Sahib, without stopping a bit, saved Harkha from the scorpion's venom. Unfortunately the scorpion left a sting on his hand, which caused him immense pain)


NAZARANDAAZ KI APNI PEEDA, HARKHA KO DI BHAVNATMAK SALAAH
'SURAKSHIT RAHIHE SAHIBA' BOL KAR CHAL DIYE APNI RAAH

(Not heeding toward his own pain, he gave a word of sound, heartfelt advice. 'Just Stay Safe' Sahiba, he said, and then went onward on his way)




PART 9 - CANAL 😉



Lavanya aap toh hunar ki khaan hai!! Really our HBAS house has so many talented Sahibas!! This is beautiful, not only the composition and the fluency of the language but also the reminiscing of the past part of the story which brings back beautiful memories! I love the meadow conversation where she unknowingly spills the secret message to him and how for the first time we see a side of KS that he keeps locked up away from the world and himself! I found him philosophising about the pain and loss in life which he has undergone and related to Heera's loss.
And the temple scene showed me another side of him for the first time! He can also flirt if he wants to, he too can play the game as well!! Temple scene was very romantic for me with all his concern, his protective attitude and yet not showing it openly and then his playing the game of words with full-on flirtatious flavor was a treat to read. And you brought it all back with your marvellous verses! I could see it right in front of my eyes again. Kudos, Lavanya, Bravo!! 👏👏👏 Loved the lines in blue, so meaningful and enlightening!
And as Kuki said, Dhani saw them, not Bindiya! 😃 Poor Dhani, I called her Dhaniya and you made her Bindiya! 😆 She will now be completely enraged!! 😆
Edited by lghosh - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Okay girls bye for now!! Already am so late! Au revoir, see you later.
Chill, drill and drool!!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Good night ,darlings- Periyamma,Lashy Sahiba, Chellam DA, Bindup, Bindu, Shruthi, Mitu, Manu, Adwi , Sandy Begum, Harshu, Payal , Akanksha, Jyothi, Shagun, Sherry, Vrinda, Ashu, Shivangi, Diya, Divyvam, Anusha, Divya, Anindita, Lavanya, Lana, Pallavi, Selvi, Avika, Savi , Rositta and 6Bs! 🤗

See you tomorrow, sweet Sahibas! 🤗

Lana 🤗


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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: karkuzhali


Baby Sarasa and Babloo kutty want to venture into Lashy's area..
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( Baby and Bablookutty are curious to know why grandma is now and then looking for something in her Laptop.)

Babloo: 'kka.. what is grandma doing?
Baby: What?
Babloo: She is doing something with the laptop..
Baby: She will read Lashy akka's story..
Babloo: Does Lasky'kka still write story?
Baby: Why... yes..
Babloo: Does she write daily?
Baby: Must be.. because grandma is reading and typing everyday..
Babloo: Lashy'kka writes everyday.. Then why grandma doesn't tell us the story daily ..
( grandma comes..)
Baby: What are you reading grandma?
Babloo: Is it Lashy'kka story?
G'ma: No kutties.. Lashy akka is busy .. She hasn't posted her story yet..
Babloo: Why busy grandma?
G'ma: She has guests in her house.. She is going to India next week..She has to do shopping .. and all that..
Baby: When she goes to India, who will write the story grandma?
Babloo: Baby'kka.. You write the story.. I will help you..
G'ma: Don't worry about it .. she has recorded the story in a dictaphone and kept it safe..
Babloo: What is that 'ctaphone?
G'ma: It is like voice reorder.. She will narrate the story in that .. and it will be recorded in that..
Baby: Oh..
Babloo: What is the story called grandma?
G'ma: Lashy akka has titled it "Hiding Behind the Stranger.."
Baby: Such a long name..
Babloo: If the name is so long, how long will the story be?
G'ma: ( laughs) Yes.. it is a long story..
Baby: G'ma, I want to write a story like Lashy akka in the computer ..
Babloo: Yes grandma, we will write a nice story..
G'ma: Okay.. you can try..But first write it on a paper.. and then you can type it..

( Thus, Baby starts to write a story very earnestly, with the sincere assistance by Bablookutty)

Babloo: 'kka .. what is the name of the story you are going to write?
Baby: mmm? I am thinking..
Babloo: 'kka, can I tell you a name?
Baby: You silly boy,...how can you tell the name of the story when you don't know what I am going to write?
Babloo: 'kka you are going to write a story and I am going to help you.. So the name of the story is "Baby writes; Babloo helps.."😆😆

Karkuzhali.



🤣
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: karkuzhali


Like Baby and Babloo waiting to hear for grandma's story, the Banjaras are waiting for Lashy's story..enjoying themselves..

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Periamma... ROFL


Originally posted by: Sandhya.A


OMG! Drooling session starts...
goes on...
goes on...
goes on...

never ends...

so, Lashy continues anyway! 😆

Where did our daring Khan Sahib go
After bidding his begum goodbye
Seemingly looking composed although
Full of emotions low and high!



Did he leave on a secretive mission untold
Or to face an enemy savage
Or to spy on foes cunning and cold
Or in his master's works did he engage



Why did he return in such a sullen mood
Stiffened and seemingly in pain
Why did his man so surely conclude
That only Sahiba could relieve him of his strain

☺️ such a short and sweet poem on just 10 lines of the teaser
I am so glad that you wrote this...
this way, everyone could cherish your older poems again ❤️🤗


Would he welcome her graceful presence
Or would he dismiss her with a curt reply
Waiting for thirtynine to clear the suspense
Oh authoress, do soon comply!




thirty eight you mean 😉

🤗
Edited by lashy - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: lghosh


I love the meadow conversation where she unknowingly spills the secret message to him and how for the first time we see a side of KS that he keeps locked up away from the world and himself! I found him philosophising about the pain and loss in life which he has undergone and related to Heera's loss.
And the temple scene showed me another side of him for the first time! He can also flirt if he wants to, he too can play the game as well!! Temple scene was very romantic for me with all his concern, his protective attitude and yet not showing it openly and then his playing the game of words with full-on flirtatious flavor was a treat to read.

>>>>

And as Kuki said, Dhani saw them, not Bindiya! 😃 Poor Dhani, I called her Dhaniya and you made her Bindiya! 😆 She will now be completely enraged!! 😆

>>>>> 😆

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Posted: 8 years ago
Thank you Rose, Bond, Lana and Shruthi for your sweet words🤗
Am so glad Bindup's mom is back home... I tried sending her a message but couldn't get through 🤗

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