JOJA ff ~HUMESHA TUMKO CHAHA~ thread 2 Chapter 23 updated!! - Page 7

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Very nice chapter. plz update soon
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Chapter er naam: rong, bhang, bosonto-utsob... ebong Nochiketa. 😆
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Interesting... Update soon..nd thanks for pm...
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Interesting teaser dear
Something happen between jalal and jodha
Waiting for update
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Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti

Chapter er naam: rong, bhang, bosonto-utsob... ebong Nochiketa. 😆<div></div>




not only nachiketa that MIRZA & SAHIBA is also their
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Interesting trz dear
Continue soon
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here is chapter 19


Chapter 19

They be like that for sme minute. And these all minute is like a year for both of them. They don't know what sensesion in that between then. For jodha its a bliss to have him sooo close. His touch hsi body heat, his warth is giving her nourishment.

Thuk thuk

A knocking sound make them come out of the trance. They both look at each other. And that moment jalal feel he didn't have done that.

With a jurk jalal freed himself. Guilt spread through his vain. what have i done' his mind screamed.

Jodha also ashamed with this but she like it being close to him. She felt a different sensation inside her. She look at him.

Thuk thuk

Again those knock make jalal to look outside. Mirza walk in, "happy holi bhaijaan" but its confused him thathis brother suddenly gone stiff. What happen?

"Happy holi mirza, but she should not do that." He told look otherside to her and it somehow pained jodha. A moment ago they lost in each other, suddenly he is being indifferent. She some how gather her courage and said.

"jalal tum naraz mat ho ye pan mera hi tha" jalal was frustrated inside and she make him more frustrated.

"he some howcontrol himself. "thik h, but age se aisa koi bachkani harkat mere sath try mat karna, i don't like all these."

He was about to go, "jalal tum neeche to aa rhe ho na?" she said while giving painfull look to him.

"nahi, mujhe tumhare sath holi khelne se bhi zyada kuch kaam hai, age se mujhe disturb mat karna."looking to his brother. "sirf function ke time aunga. Fir mujhe disturb mat karna." Mirza nodded with silently. He went to washroom.

Jodha feel something poked in her heart. Tears formed in her eyes. She looked at mirza. Mirza just nodded as no. She rubbed her cheek with tears and went out with Mirza.

In the garden

Childrens are there with their parents. One side of the garden there is a small shamiyaana as stage for the play for the children. Otherside Haida have her specila snacksand juices and Mirza with his special fruit punch.

Mirza also have invited his many friends including Shivani, he wants to introduce her to his parents and told them about themselves.

He was standing in his room on the window. no, i cant pressurise himself on her. Its not done. If she started to feel somthing by this all it will be injustice to her own self. That will be forcing. I always have iniciate myself towards her. Now its enough. If she doesnt feel anything it will not be done. I have to stay away from her. It will be good for her.'

Here in the garden jodha isn't in herself. The indirect rejection from jalal made her frangle. Mirza can see that. He feel again he have to poke but this time it will be different. But before that he have to set his own story.

He grab shivani to a corner. And circle her waist.

"kya baat hai, mujhse chupa jaa rha hai?"

"nahi aisi baat nahi hai."

"suno, aaj main tumhe apne ammi or abbu se milana chahta u. Are you ready?

"aaj hi?'

"haa aj holi hai, or ek khshi ke mauke par hi naye khushi ko laya jata hai."

"ok but m feeling very scared, agar nahi mane to?"

"to?" mirza thought for sometime, "thn bhaag jayenge." He laugh out loud.

"badmaash"

"but uske baad i have to do something for someone else also"

"jalal bhai!"

"kya baat hai meri jaan mere sath rehte rehte sab seekh gayi ho"

Shivani said nothing but shied a little.

"Be their in the crowd. I have something special, my sahiba."

With this mirza walk out towards the lawn.

Otherside,

Jalal was in the room. He want to stay away from her. Its for her betterment he know that. But cant. He love her and that is the reason he cant stay aaway from her.

After a lot of thinking he thought to go down but stay far away from her.

In the garden,

All are chatting and drinking juices, and sweets. Suddenlt they here a scratching sound of microphone.

"all the ladies gentlemen and specially kiddos, i mirza Muhammad for the first time ever welcoming you the ho;i party of Muhammad's. Hope this holi will pure all the colours in all of your lives..."

All smiled. "now its time for the performance, so my di and the children made a small special dram for this special occation. Its about the Holi of Radha and Krishna. Hope you all enjoy it."

Mirza go down from the stage and took out his phne andf hold the mike near it and play the song.

Woh hai rangila chail chabila, woh hai natkhat woh jamunatat

Phere lagaye muralee bajaye, gopiyo ke sang ras rachaye

Muralee bajaiya ras rachaiya, shyam salona hai

Among the children a boy wearing kanha's outfit with a flute and a peacock feather in his hand. And started dancing on the tune

Jo hai albela madnainowala, jisakee divanee brij kee har bala

Woh kisna hai -4, kisna hai

Some girls started dancing around Krishna wearing little little ghagra choli, while kanha playing his bansuri

Jo hai albela madnainowala, jisakee divanee brij kee har bala

Woh kisna hai - (4)

Pyar me dubee pyar me khoyee, pyar kee dhun me jagee na soyee - (2)

Duneeya se hai woh anjanee, sab kehte hai prem divanee

Kisna se milatee hai, bhul ke har bandhan

Kisna kee hee mala japatee hai woh jogan

A girl wearing pink lehenga came in stage danmcing and suddenly hug that little kanha from back while kanha look at her and smile

Nainon me sanson me mann me kisna

Har pal hai jivan me jisake kisna

Woh radha hai -3, radha hai

Jodha was looking at the styage but suddenly her eyes went towards the gate. Her eyes sparkle. Yes he has come.

Jalal was just arrived the garden, he saw the performance going on. He stand there while looking to the small stage, while he feel a gaze on him. He looked his right and see jodha was looking at him. She was too much happy to see him there. He smile a little to her but immediately look away.

Madhur madhur sa rup hai jiska, shwet shwet rang jiska

Sundar tan man sundar chitwan, sundar hai ang jiska

Pyar hai sgar se bhee gehra, kisna ke sang jiska

Woh radha hai -3, radha hai

Jodha look at the stage all were enjoying, but she have smthing weird feeling. Her mind is too much disturbed

Jo hai albela madnainowala, jisakee divanee brij kee har bala

Woh kisna hai - (4)

Nainon me sanson me mann me kisna

Har pal hai jivan me jiske kisna

Woh radha hai -3, radha hai

Woh kisna hai

The performance finished. The children was too happy to get a dance performnance. The came to jodha and hug her legs.

"thank yu didi, yu arl the bessht" the most tiny angle said. She pecked her cheek while took her to her embrance.

Jalal was looking at her. Seeing her hugging that little girl, his eyes gone clouded. Once they have a dream to have a little princess all for them. But now... he took a breath.

"now' mirza again gone to the stage. "its time for my performance. As its a special performance for a special person."he look to shivani while she was looking shocked.

"Mirza, who is this special person? Ye kiske lie gane gaa rhe ho?" jodha suddenly asked. Even except jalal everyone is in confsion spcially hamid aand humayun.

"mirza kya baat hai? Kiske bareme baat kar rhe ho?"

"ammi, yeh baat maine sirf bhaijaan ko batayi thi to unhone apse kehne ko kaha per mera dar jaa hi nhi rha tha. To socha aaj keh du"

He took his guitar. Looked at shivani, who is shy yet fearing for the consiquences.

"its for you shivani. I LOVE YOU. I LOVE YOU A LOT."

"heeeinn mirza" "kya?" what?" the worlds just came from all the people. Hamida looked shock beyond limit. She followed his gaze to the crouwd and immediately recognise shivani. She went to her. Jalal was looking all. He was fearing that mirza's plan dosnt get backfired.

you are shivani?" shivani feared to turn back. Hamida put her hand on her shoulder and turn her.

"kya tum hi shivani ho?" hamida asked

"ji, aunty." Shivani fumbled.

"where is your mom and dad?"

Shivani point towards her mom dad. While that moment mirza start his song

Tujhse aisa uljha
Dil dhaaga dhaaga khicha (x2)

Hamida was continuously watching mirza and shivani. She can easily say Mirza love this girl a lot and vice versa

Darga pe jaise ho chaadron sa bicha
Yunhi roz yeh udhda buna
Qissa ishq ka kayi baar
Humne phir se likha

Shivani looked at him


Saheba saheba
Chal wahan jahan Mirza

Sahiba sahiba
Chal wahan jahan Mirza

Humayun was a silent spectatorof all this. He went to jalal asked about all these thing, while jalal could see shivani's mom dad and his ammi is chating. He can easily feel her parents are uncomfortable bout this sudden confession.

While mirza continue sing loking at Shivani who is shying like nothng

Besuri dil ki ye dhun
Karta gale le tu sunn
Aayi na toh tu hi pehchane na
Jo hoon wo maane na
Na ajnabi tu ban abhi

Henkh hai dil mein uthi
Aalapon si hai baji

Jodha can guess the envioronment and went to shivani and hug her from back. She whiser in her ears which make shivani blush. "welcome to Muhammad family Shivani."


Saanson mein tu madham se raagon sa
Kesar ke dhaagon sa
Yun ghul gaya main ghum gaya

O dil pe dhundla sa
Saleti rang kaisa sa chadha aa..

Tujhse aisa uljha
Dil dhaaga dhaaga khicha
Darga pe jaise ho chaadron sa bicha
Yunhi roz yeh udhda buna
Qissa ishq ka kayi baar
Humne phir se likha
Sahiban sahiban
Chal wahan jahan Mirza

Sahiba sahiba
Chal wahan jahan Mirza

O Sahiba.. o sahiba..
Hijr ki chot hai laagi re
O Sahibaan..
Jigar hua hai baaghi re
Zidd behad hui, rat'ti hai zubaan

O tere bina..

O tere bina saans bhi
Kanach si, kaanch si, kaate, kaate re
O tere bina
Jind'di raakh si, raakh si lage re (x3)



All clapped withhis song. Mirza stood in the stage while ashivani was hell embarrassed. Jalal watched it. He know what she is fearing for. HE went to her parents and started talking.

Afetr some time mirza announced. "so now its the time for another performance. A person who is very close to someone specially to my brother. He loves her a lot."

Jalal looking at mirza with shock. Mirza winked at him. While joda don't know why feeling a bit embarraced yet shy. Her heart beat is increasing. Its her turn to perform,, buit for that mirza will introduced her like that is much unexpected.

"jodha di, come its your time" jodha went to mirza while mirza pass on the mike to her, and himself held another mike. "yes i will be his partner for the song. And this song is dedicated to her someone special." Mirza said loking at jalal.


Female:

Ajnabi Mujhko Itna Bata

Dil Mera Kyoon Pareshaan Hai

Dekh Ke Tujhko Aisa Lage

Jaise Barsoon Ki Pehchaan Hai

As if jodha telling her own mind, looking to jalal. While jalal is looking everywhere other than her.

Male:

Kitni Bholi Hai Tu

Kitni Naadan Hai

Dil Ki Baaton Se

Anjaan Hai

"please don't do this jodha." Jalal closed his eyes and prayed. Everytime he is the one who wentclose to her, while he know what doctor said to him, that if they try her to remembering her past it can be harmfull. She could have pain in her brain and it can break her brain vessels. "no i cant put her life in danger. If she remember my love like this i will loose her, is better to stay away from her.

Female:

Ajnabi Mujhko Itna Bata

Dil Mera Kyoon Pareshaan Hai...

A music played in guitar. Guest ar eenjoying. Mirza went down from the stage and went towards jalal. "bhaijaan, aap gana khatam kar do na please."

"kyu mian kyu" jalal said restraining him self

"woh...bhaijaan... i have to go..." mirza said looking everywhere. "bhabi will be alone please do it for her her."

"but where are you going?"

Mirza showed his little finger and smile like a fool. Jalal thump his palm on his forhead. "tumhara kya hoga mirza' but befor ecompleating mirza flewed away handing the mike on his hand.

Jalal lok at jodha . she was looking at him wth a strange emotion which jalal couldn't read.

Jalal started singing, while everyone look at him in shock.

Male:

Kya Sochta Hoon

Main Kya Chahata Hoon

Hai Mushkil Tujhko Woh Bataana

Female:

Maine Suna Hai

Ki Mushkil Bada Hai

Dabi Chahaton

Ko Chupaana

Male:

Hey, Kya Sochta Hoon

Main Kya Chahata Hoon

Hai Muskil Tujhe Woh Bataana

Female:

Hoo, Maine Suna Hai

Ki Mushkil Bada Hai

Dabi Chahaton

Ko Chupaana

"yes its too painfull jodha but i have to bear it" jalal again started.

Male:

Raaz Tere Sabhi

Khol Degi Abhi

In Laboon Pe Jo

Muskaan Hai

Jalal lokk at her with sweet smile, which she feel will kill her on the moment.

Female:

Ajnabi Mujhko Itna Bata

Dil Mera Kyoon Pareshaan Hai...

All guest are enjoying fully. On the other hand inside the hall

"mirza, kya hai yaha kyu laye?"

"sahiba, ane mirza ke pas ane se itna darr?"

"shut up mirxza, mom dad ko main nhi mili na to tumhare proposal ki band baj jayegi, smjhe?"

"kuch nahi hoga. Btw tumne mera holi gift ot dia hi nahi."

"kaisi gift. Tum bolte to le ati."

"le ane ki kya baat hai,woh to tum abhibhi de skti ho"

"kya de sk..."

Mirza didn't let her complete and pull her to him and smack her lips on him and started sucking her lower lips. Shivani was shocked first but then held his hair and pull her more to her and keep on going.

Male:

Kaise Bataaon

Teri Dhadkanoon Ko

Banaaya Hai Kisne, Deewana

Jalal sing while going towards her.

Female:

O, Begaane Ko

Apna Kehne Lagi Main

Baana Mera Apna, Begaana

Jodha climb down from the stage

Male:

Kaise Bataaon

Teri Dhadkanoon Ko

Banaaya Hai Kisne, Deewana

Female:

O, Begaane Ko

Apna Kehne Lagi Main

Baana Mera Apna, Begaana

Both look at each other, while having tears in their eyes.

Male:

Pyaar Ki Har Ghadi

Mushkilon Ki Ladi

Ye Na Samjho

Ye Aasan Hai

Female:

Ajnabi Mujhko Itna Bata

Dil Mera Kyoon Pareshaan Hai

Dekh Ke Tujhko Aisa Lage

Jaise Barsoon Ki Pehchaan Hai

Male:

Kitni Bholi Hai Tu, Kitni Naadan Hai

Dil Ki Baaton Se, Anjaan Hai

Female:

Ajnabi Mujhko Itna Bata

La La La La La La La La La...

Precap: same as before😃

A twist 😉


** this is not as usual bengali VASANTUTSAV its kind of holi party.

*** soo will update yeh ishq hawa hai



Song info:


"woh kisna hai" from the movie Kisna

"saahiba" from the movie Phillouri

"ajnabi mujhko" from the movie Pyaar to hona hi tha



Edited by Senapatichandri - 8 years ago
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Lovely update dear
Aww both jodha and jalal lost in their own world
Jodha unknowingly feels for jalal
Where as jalal don't want to come closer to jodha for her own benefit
Jalal indifference hurt jodha
God mirza is too fast
He planned everything to introduce shivani in his family
In front of everyone he confess his feelings
Hamida and humayun quite surprise
Jodha was so happy to see jalal in the party
But Jalal try really hard to ignore her
So beautifully jodha express her feelings in form of song
Jalal also add his own feelings
Both lost in their dream world
Beautiful songs you added dear
Perfect for the situation
Waiting for next chapter
Thanks for pm

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