Akdha SS || Souls Entwined || Thread 2(uptd chp 14) pg 113 / 16 oct - Page 99

Originally posted by: priyadogra

Fantabulous update

Joja part was nice

Hope adham get punished for his deeds

Thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: anu012

Superb update
loved it
cont soon... curious to know about ja plan
loved jajo hugging moments


thnks for pm

Originally posted by: amitaprasad

awesome... left wanting more..i think maham is playing something more dirty that is hidden from us..canteen scene was adorable and what to speak about chance pe romance,it was so soothing,i loved it.. and this aadham kabhi nahi sudharega a filthy jerk..awaiting for next update...

Originally posted by: dellaakdha

a wonderful update avika..sry fr late..

Thanks a lot dear ...and no need to say sorry yaar ...u atleast commented na 😳

I thought something else regarding phone cal..but u gave a unexpectd one,(tats avika..i knw)..

Thanks for the compliment 😆 i know many guessed the phonecall was about salima ...but ...😆

tat maham blackmiled the family with emotions..but ts adham cheap.

Maham is a drama queen ...and moreover Adham is her only family ...so she ought to save him by hook or by crook and she choosed this path .

.the phone cal of jo and ja was nice jo surprised by ja cal..

Thats called telepathy 😉😆

Jo have a faith in ja so she left the process of deciding authority to him..at the same time ja have a faith tat jo wl help him in solving the pblm..wow wat a trust btwn them..

Trust is something very hard to attain and people mostly trust the person close to our heart ...jajo hold special place for each other in their hearts ...they dodnt know why but they have immence faith in each other .

Ja justifies both his jiju and his sister.

Jalal is smart ...he cant say no to his jiju at the same time he cant do injustice to his sister and Adham definetly deserves punishment ...so the teeda man in him choosed this plan 😆

.he has planned for a mission..nice..canteen part was nice..same jo who even dnt lyk his presence nv dnt want to hurt him unknwoingly..what a change jo.!

Definetly she changed a lot ,but couldnt decipher the reason behind her changed attitude .

and tat hitler part s icing on the cake..i too luv her cute angry face like jalal..

Hehehe... thats very sweet ...even i like jodha's angry face

Originally posted by: dellaakdha

As usual fearless jo s determind she ll do what she want..afterall how can she get away frm trouble..?tat too when she has jalal around..

Exactly ...thats our Jodha 😆 she cant resist our irresisteble Jalal...neither she wants him to be aroun nor she can keep herself away grom him 😆

Luv the part of argument btwn ja and jo..and the mission part was nice..a sardarji,mr and mrs iyer..wow..u r adding some actions in ts love story..i just love it..

Till now i didnt start my actual story dear ...there is a lot to revealed which will be done slowly later on...hope u guys enjoy the story in future too 😳

our jo comes as uninvited participant..and the most awesome part comes here..Romance behind the pillar..

Hehehe... no one expected romance behind a pillar that too in such a situation 😆

oh ja s having hard time to control his emotions..jo dnt knw what she has done with this man and the same with jalal..wow just loue their touching romance..xcellent part..

Im glad to hear this Dear ... 😳

And who ll come now..?is jalal accompany her in his plan..at canteen convo i thought he s just joking..but a girl s coming..

Oh so u thought he was joking ...😆 but now u know na he wasnt 😉

waiting to knw tat..just wonderful and thanks for pm..

Originally posted by: Monucute

Avi didu🤗

Monu 🤗
Finally I'm here😃

So happy to see u 😳
Update was shooo chweettt...😳 Just like you😉

Hehehe...thanks re 😉
The first part was shooo cute and the second part.. Uff akdha in action😉

Lol akdha r defiently in action ...but i was wondering which action they were in actually ?? I mean romance or mission 😆
I totally loved it...
Their talk at night just kept me gripped by the chapter, it so simple yet it impacts greatly...

Awieee...u liked the phone convo ...yayy...yeah i know it was simple ...i purposely kept it in that way...mostly to show the immence trust they have in each other
Then secondly I dunno why this maham and adham can't get a life😡

Maham and Adham...😆 will ask when i find them in real 😆
The master plan! eh! That's awesome...

Plan ...definetly yes...and jallu will amke sure it works 😆
Jo can't be away from troubles... could she? Silly gurl!!
Hahaha...
All in all fabulous update di...
Loved it
Sorry for the late reply...
Love you❤️

Originally posted by: divyaJA

Awesome chptr

Originally posted by: durgeshnandini

This is simply simplicity simplified!

Ohk...let me take a deep breath in first ...firstly im on cloud nine ...for ...i was pretty much happy after knowing u r reading this story and commenting on it was cherry on the cake ...so grateful that u decided to give it a try dear .

(Pardon my syntax errors, dint know what better way to put it - but this is exactly what I feel about your story😳)

Sorry ?? Like seriously ...Adwi ...do u even know how happy ur three words Made me ?? U can imagine me doing Bhangda while reading this comment 😉

There is nothing unique, but it is obviously beautiful - there is no bombardment of emotionally draining drama, but the emotions do make it appealing - there isn't a saga full of surprises at every turn with shocking events awaiting you at the cross roads, but it is a journey claiming to be remembered - it isn't exotic, but definitely sweet!

Oh my goodness...now im literally fainting Adwi...my stories r usually simple with a slight romantic touch and i really like it that way ...though i love to read all geners but when it comes to writing ...sweet and simple is the formula i follow 😃

So far, I have enjoyed this journey, so typical of you, full of savoury simplicity which I infer is something NATURAL about your stories - but I loved it like that 😊

Wow ...another huge compliment i would say ...there is a saying ...beauty lies in simplicity ...be it in our dressing sense ,attitude or stories for that matter ...people somewhere or the other gets attracted to it ...and i feel blessed to have such readers like u and all the others who always supported me .

The friends are a treat, the siblings are but eye candies worth a second serving, this college is turning out into a joyride of sorts, with the Jalal and Jodha spinning up and down the cartwheels!

So beautifully u complied all the chapters in just a few lines dear...ur command on english is commendable ...and im jealous of u *pout*

The carnival of togetherness, lighted up with twinkling lamps of friendship, strong bonding - stronger understanding. You have suspended suspense elements, amidst this mega fruit cake, what with a comatose Salima hidden from the family by a visibly weakening Hamida and the college bully Adham, sticking out like a sore thumb.

Hehehe... should i take it as ,u really liked the story ?? Hopefully u do *fingers crossed* 😉 yes their bonding is growing stronger with people like Adham maham and all palying a role of mere pawns .

Little Noor surely deserves a special mention as her charming innocence and Cupid like interventions often serve as a bonus point of the chapter. She is lovely! But not more than you❤️

Omg ...so u too like Noor ...so glad to hear this 😳 and @ blue ...☺️☺️

So this gang is upto some secret mission and we have had the couple stealing some moments of accidental romance, too - that's cute! Waiting for more to unravel, praying for a mission successful and wishing for the romance to blossom soon...

Plan is not very big...but Adham will be back to his place once and for all ...Romance will blossom soon dear ...but before that they need to cross a big hurdle ...in form of...umm...why should i tell u ...i will reveal it in my chaps 😆😉

Thanks a lot for putting up with me, and regularly dropping by pms - my festive wishes for you!!!

Will be waiting for the update and your response! 😳

Finally i replied ...yayyy...thanks a lot for the wishes dear ...hope u had a blast 😊

Adwitiya...

Originally posted by: Priyankaakdha

Sorry aprry diii...
I kniw mainw kha tha i qillcommw t .. Pr m buay thi ... Or abhi mujhe yad bhi nhi maine comment kya krna tha ... Ao chotu sa hi comment kr rhi hu ...
Aww koi nahi re ...atlast u remembered na

...im more than happy
Lovely update ...
Jo is confused towards her feelings ...
Jalal called jo .. Oh so maham did her drama ...
Jalal made aplan to trap adham ..
Yeah maham palyed her drama 😡
Oho joja hugged each other ...
Jalal ki toh lottery lg gyi ...
Both were enjoying their hug ..
Aur hamari bhi 😆
Waiting for next ...
Update soon

Originally posted by: swetiii

update