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Durgeshnandini

@Durgeshnandini

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Posted: 9 years ago

#601

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

Good night, Aunty! 😃

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Durgeshnandini

@Durgeshnandini

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Posted: 9 years ago

#602

Originally posted by: cute.manasi
^ international disputes...🤣

Aur nhi toh kya 😉

One kutty stays in Sri Lanka and another one in United Kingdom😆

Edited by durgeshnandini - 9 years ago

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Kavya

@Kavya_P

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Posted: 9 years ago

#603

Originally posted by: Kavya_P
awesome chappy di

sorry for the late reply di

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@old_charm

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Posted: 9 years ago

#604

Originally posted by: durgeshnandini

Aur nhi toh kya 😉
One kutty stays in Sri Lanka and another one in United Kingdom😆

😆😆

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harshal

@harshu27

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#605

Originally posted by: durgeshnandini

Aur nhi toh kya 😉
One kutty stays in Sri Lanka and another one in United Kingdom😆

SL v/s UK🤣

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sho123

@sho123

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#606

Originally posted by: lashy
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tell ur guest u r busy with us

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Shinning_Stuti

@Shinning_Stuti

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#607

Needless to say that it was a beautiful chapter! 😳

The very first portion of the current chapter filled my heart with an uncanny melancholy thought for a while... Not only for Mohan Banna, whose sincerity for his heiress along with love and respect reflected every moment of the conversation, from his eagerness to know about every details of the function to his concern for Heera's safety even in his agony which was clearly visible in the whole scenario, and simultaneously Heera's concern for Mohan and his health; but also the first line suddenly reminded me of Durga...😭 The 17 years old valiant girl was preparing herself for getting into bridal outfit after some days... her closer ones were preparing themselves for the celebration of her colourful marriage, and today what an irony of fate... they are conducting her funeral function! 😭 😭

Felt very sorry for Mohan too! You have described his pain so well with his stammering, drowsiness after taking drugs and all, that one can feel the pain he is going to! The level of faithfulness of this common worker of a little mansabdar is so deep-rooted that he does not hesitate to choose his death over his Baisa's safety! So Mohan Banna is going to have a major surgery of his leg! 😔 And I know with this we will get to see another important incident to move the flow of the story forward...

Gauri is not only very intelligent and mature, she cares for her friend just like her Jiji used to do! Loved this little instance of Gauri, how she understands Heera even before she herself gets to know about her heart, and her concern for Heera as she can foresee her future can be affected by the red eyes of the society... Heera is never alone in this world till she has faithful peoples like Mohan around her and a friend like Gauri...

So the seaech for Heera is going on! Hope Chittaranjan Kakasa does not get to find Heera soon! Else Heera will be in the clutch of that devil Mahindar!! 😡 😡

The self-talks of Heera in the form of her exchange of thought with her Jiji comes very beautiful to me... It shows Heera's dependency on her Jiji and how she achieves positive vibe from the remembrance of Durga... 😳

And then came the most important and rocking news, that Khan Sahib accepting Heera's invitation, attended the luncheon, and enjoyed their hosting fully. 😃 Though I would like to relish the scene Heera serving Khan Sahib food from her own hand, but its okay, more stored for future. 😃

And the gang of ladies of Parnagarh!! My God! Nowadays their favourite gossip id Akbar Khan's each and every details! What he eats, how much he ate blah blah blah 🤣 Want to know how AMK will react when he will know all the beautiful girls of Parnagarh are literally drooling on him! 😆 😆

The full conversation part was rofling! 🤣 🤣 🤣

The constant gaze of Harka on Akbar was☺️ The whole description was so so so beautiful!

🤗 And the exchange of Adab, thank you-welcome and the rare smile reflecting from humourless Khan Sahib's lips... so regal and sweet as well!!⭐️ Can imagine the whole scene in front of me!😳

The Hakim was 😡 so indecent😡 Idiot!😡😡🤢 Loved the way Akbar handled him!

But the best part was Akbar's self-talk, his fight with his inner soul...👏👏👏 Just can't express how much I loved it! Perhaps this was something I was looking for!😳 Great!

'It IS your fault... you shouldn't have allowed it get to this... because it's YOUR decision to adopt a lifestyle so dangerous, that it has no place for women in it... and, why are you bridging gaps now... that too, with THIS Sahiba, out of all ladies! What would you gain by knocking on this door now? Is it to find out if she holds the cure for this never-ending pain of yours? Even if she has the secret remedy, you'll never live to enjoy it... you'll die and get her killed too! So muster that adamant determination of yours... don't let your wall of resistance show cracks... you need to show discipline... fight temptation, now more than ever!'

^^^❤️

With this the curiosity on him increases much! What is the truth behind this mystery man! What is his actual identity... Why he has chosen such an abandoned and risky life-style? What is there in the dark side of his life? When they are going to unveil? 😲😲

Waiting for the next chapter eagerly like always!😃 Thank you di for bearing this stupid and silly comment. 😆

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melovesja

@melovesja

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Posted: 9 years ago

#608

Originally posted by: .AkDhian.

Thank you,aunty 😆
'Ayyoo' is MY word,now 😆

Good night! 🤗

Aiyoo now you are possessive about it🤣

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Sandhya.A

@Sandhya.A

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#609

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

A cute conversation between Lashy kutty and Kalgi kutty.

(Kalgi and Lashy are 5 year old kids)

Kalgi: Lashy'kka, are you angry with me?
Lashy: Kausi chellam, don't talk to me..
Kal: Why, what did I do?
Lashy: Don't you know?
Kal:God promise I dont know..
Lashy: Did you say "Aiyoo"?
Kal:😕 Yes.. but you know'kka, my friend said I look cute when I say that..😆
Lashy: 😡Thats what...thats what.. how can you say my word.? "Aiyoo" is my word! I have used it so many times..That's why it is my word..but no one said that I was cute..😒 But you have used my word and your friend says you are cute..
Kal: 'kka, it is not your word.. anybody can say that..
Lashy: NOOO...
Kal: It is my word..
Lashy: No it is mine...I am using it for ages..
Kal: Come.. lets go and ask Adwi...
Lashy: Why Adwi..she wont know.. it is a tamil word.. she speaks different language..
Kal: Then we'll ask Peryamma..
Lashy: Periyamma is busy with Baby and Babloo...
Kal: We'll ask Shyamala aunty..
Lashy: Aunty is having guests and she is not well..
Kal: Shall we ask Bindu'kka?

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Karkuzhali.

5 yr old Sands kutty: Nobody calls me cute. Nobody calls me chellam. So what if I don't say aiyoo. I say so many other things.😭

I also want that doll Lashy and Kal are fighting for.😔