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Posted: 9 years ago

#351

Originally posted by: cute.manasi

it was...

how powerful this scene was...

thnx manu...😃 ya dis scene was powerful both in update and d show...😉😛

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@old_charm

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Posted: 9 years ago

#352

Originally posted by: melovesja
Manu itna atyachar na karo right know start refreshing page in waiting and you ask for evening 😆

mitali di , i hope you have forgiven me...

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.AkDhian.

@.AkDhian.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#353

Lashy dii🤗

Thanks so so much for updating now..I got to read it peacefully and enjoyed it more than you can imagine😳

For me,this is the best chapter till date👏👏 You are the best-est and awesome-est author without an iota of doubt⭐️⭐️ and the sweet-est person too🤗

Love you loads❤️

I feel guilty for having forgotten abt Mohan Banna till I read today's update and it was immensely painful to read his condition😭.Even I don't understand why Heera is unable to cure him.A gut-wrenching situation for Heera.She was forced to suppress the pain with the stern demeanor

I hope,he gets cured..don't want Heera to endure another loss.

So,Gauri's eyes are on Heera always.She is really a sharp observer,even in such an unpleasant situation,she observed Heera and Akbar's verbal and non-verbal interaction😉

Will Parnagarh team really leave in 3 days??I dont't think so..will Mohan Banna continue to play cupid or someone else takes up the role?😆

Why haven't the scrolls reached Bansi,yet?Even if Maharaja isn't available at Bansi,he could've got the information from Maharani if the message had reached.I feel there is some conspiracy,here.

Have you disguised yourself like a commoner, amongst common folk? Or are you hiding amongst strangers? My heart tells me that you're fine... but a father's worry, is a father's worry!'

@Bold..Yup..she is hiding behind a stranger😉😆

I loved this one..Heera is blessed to have a well wisher like Maharaja Chittaranjan😊but poor him,he is happy with the marriage alliance fixed Well,no issues as we know what happens ultimately.

No good news anywhere... misery at every turn... how long am I supposed to act calm and confident? For once, why couldn't there be an encouraging turn of events... show me a positive sign, jiji... something... somewhere...'

Ahh..my heart goes out to Heera😭 but what a PERFECT timing it was!!Just when she was seeking help from her Jiji..Gokul turned up with a positive sign..as if Durga heard her beloved lil sister's plea.I know this indicates a lot..loved it so very much❤️

If Heera was surprised with the news of Khan Sahib's arrival..Banjaras are elated with the news and I'm sure,Kal di must have heaved a sigh of relief probably with a drop or two of happy tears too😆😆

Will continue the rest in next post ASAP...wanna relish the smiles and salutations again before commenting😉

Edited by .AkDhian. - 9 years ago

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.AkDhian.

@.AkDhian.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#354

Akka,

I relished the entire scene of Akbar and Heera Maids' comments😆,Heera's staring session😳,Akbar's reciprocation😉,HIS Adab and smile(which shocked everyone😆) followed by HER blush☺️...EVERYTHING is pure magic that it takes lot of time to come out of the spell👏

'Kadhi... achaar... kichdi... ghewar...'

'Dal... gatte sabzi... rice... Marwari mirchi...'

'He ate it all...'

'He liked most of it...'

'But baisa, what he loved the most, were Maharaj kakasa's laddus... he must have eaten at least 4 of them...'

'And the khoba roti too... kakasa made fresh khoba rotis, especially for Khan Sahib...'

>>I was laughing while reading this🤣 specially for the 4 laddus thing😆.Wondering how many laddus Chachajaan must have had😆

Having abandoned his rustic cotton tunics, the young man had chosen to don a more appropriately formal Persian-styled attire of fine red silk, embroidered with threadwork of beige and gold. His sharp features had somehow forgone their severity too, trading it for expressions that were more peaceful. Expressions that made him appear charming. And refined. And gentlemanly.

>>Uff..

With the ongoing hunt for suitable candidate for AMK,I was confused as to whom do I imagine in this magistic avatar😆 Anyways,I settled for Rajat😉Don't know why he is the only one my mind accepts😆

But those longer-than-should-have stares hadn't gone entirely unnoticed.

>>Thought its Gauri,again😆But,this time they were noticed by the right person and the result was ☺️❤️

Either way, he had to admit that it was her unselfish invitation, that'd ultimately persuaded him to give up his pledge for one meal, put on a formal attire and arrive here. A decision he did not regret.

>>So,this is why he accepted the lunch invitation😃.

Therefore, before returning to his desolate existence; he wanted to look her in the eye, and thank her once, for bringing a few rays of sunshine into his dim world. For giving him this opportunity to taste a selflessly satisfying meal. And for giving him a glimpse of how a real home felt.

>>How beautiful,akka👏👏I'm happy as well as sad to read this.

As soon as Heera realised what it was that the Sahib was doing, a soft gasp replaced the half smile that'd been adorning her lips. Her stoic features that'd never known of any such emotions, felt their first rush of heat - leaving her fair cheeks a few shades closer to the colour of her glossy lips.

>>Wow..wow🥳 Such a fabulous description of Heera's reaction⭐️

And of the few instances in life that she regretted suffering from poor sight, this was one.

>>😭😭..consoling myself saying she would be the reason and witness of his smiles soon(at least,not too long)..am I right,author sahiba??😉

Moving on to Akbar rocked😎 and Hakim shocked😲 part😆

I initially thought the chubby old man is our beloved Chachajaan but the reading the word 'barked',I knew it's someone else😛

Loved Akbar's warning to the arrogant,over-confident Hakim.Khan Sahib's no-nonsense attitude is awesome⭐️

I really wanna see Hakim's face when he gets to see the OLD & AMATEUR Hakima Sahiba😆😆

The last part:

This was the most intriguing thing of this chapter..a touching one too😭.I'm awestruck with your writing prowess,yet again👏👏.Akbar's POV was written so brilliantly that I could feel his anguish and the fear of giving into those forbidden feelings.

A normal businessman has nothing to do with battles and scars..I'm damn curious to know what's that dangerous path he is walikng on.What's the truth he knows and Heera doen't??😕😲

Are you going to reveal us this one in ur next chapter..b'coz this is what we are impatient about😳

'I have to leave tomorrow morning to catch up on my work... wouldn't return to Aidabad for two days... hopefully, the Sahiba and her party would've left the haveli, before I get back!'

>>Sorry,Mr.Khan Sahib..your Sahiba has no plans to leave Aidabad for three more days😆

When the destiny has already planned to entrap HIM with HER CONTAGIOUS SMILES,INNOCENCE and PERFECTION,how long can he run away??😉😉

Eagerly waiting for the next chapter,akka😃

Edited by .AkDhian. - 9 years ago