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Posted: 9 years ago
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This story clicked my mind few days back
Thought of giving my writing one more chance

Kon hai wahan par ?? Baatein sunayi dey rahi hai but awaaz kahan se AA rahi hai ??
Itne ghane jungle mai ek ladki ki awaz !! Pata nahi kahan hai ?? Ek aur musibat mere liye ??
Hey bhagwan kya Maine apni pichle zindagi mai koi anuchit kaam kiya hai kya , Jo aap mujh par itne meherbaani dikha rahe ho ??
Chaliye aap tha mujhe test karthe rahenge but mujhme insaaniath bachi hai !!
Iss ladki ko dundhna padega !!

After walking for about half kilometer he saw a small room which is locked from outside .
And soon he listened to that voice but quite clearly .
She was asking for help .
Then he realised the voice is coming out from that small room but he could not find out any way to enter into it .
He went near to it and asked
Kahan SE chilla rahi ho ?? Andar kaise pahunchi ?? Aur tumhari awaaz mujh tak kaise pahunchi rahi hai ??
Kuch tho bolo ?? he asked .
Then he heared a voice no but a very sweet voice .
Arey upar dekho !! Wahan ek khidki hai !!
He looks up and found a small window but he cannot reach there .
Mai itna aur ye khidki mujhe 10 foot lambi
Kaise pahunchu...!!!


Hehehe a small beginning
Plz post your views about this
I haven't named it yet .

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Posted: 9 years ago
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congrats for new story monu
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congrats for new story, monica😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Please continue. Hey dear few months back i think you wrote a story of jajo where jalal comes to india after few years and introduces rukku as his fiancee and refuses to marry jo on the pretex that she is not equal to his status and later on jo comes to know rukku is blackmailing him. Why did u not complete it dear?
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congrats for ur new story 🤗
Very interesting prologue
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congratulations for the new story monica
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Posted: 9 years ago
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congo for new story monica...
nyc prologue... continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congrates for new story
pm me
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congo for ur new story monu...⭐️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Actually I have posted this to know how is this story ???
So depending upon views I thought of continuing

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