Akdha TS || Love u..Hamesha Forever || part 2 updated (28/7) - Page 5

Originally posted by: Priyankaakdha

wow wow ...
amazing starting ...

Priyu 🤗thanks a lot dearie ...
jalal found a phone in cafe nd heard melodious voice of a girl but proudly rejected her plea ... very bad jalal

Ab jalal hai ..toh thoda attitude toh banta hai na 😉
i thought jo will give mast lecture for behaving rude wid her to jalal ... bur nothing happened like that

Why will Jo give him lecture ?? Firstly he is a stranger ..secondly it was her mistake that she forgot her mobile ...and thirdly Jalal told her he will handover the mobile to cafe manager and she could collect from him ...so there isno chance of her giving lecture to him 😆
jalal fulll on latoo seeing jo's innocent beauty

Love at first sight 😉
waiting for next

Will update soon 😳
update plzzz

Originally posted by: divyadaya13

Amazing story. Pls update next part soon. Waiting becomes unbearable when its abt akdha😆

Originally posted by: Rajat_loverr

Hi akka finally you updated

Hemu ...umm yes i finally came up with something other then my stories 😆
Awesome TS

Thanks dear
And best gift for harshu

Hope so 😳
The name is fab

Glad u liked the title
The word "googal mama"

I always give weird names to our darling google 😆
Hehehe awesome
Ooo he leave his motherland

Hmm yes
But feel that he leave something presiou behind him and which dreg him back to India

Does it sound very filmy ??
Oo and he feel the name "JODHA" familiar

Hmm familiar toh hai and why?? U will get to read in next part 😉
Wow super duper TS akka 👏 👏

Originally posted by: Rajat_loverr

so sorry for late reply akka
Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: harshu27

1st of all thnx so much for a lovely and cute TS 🤗

Harshu ...its the smallest thing i can do for a sweetheart like u yaar .🤗

and I simply loved d banner... 😳 ⭐️

Hehehe ..thanks yaar ...😳

and dis made me wonder dat after u retuned back from tirupati u mite have written dis...dat means so soon u posted dat too such a cute one... 😲 😳 for me it takes 15 days or 1 month if m going to dedicate an TS/OS for anyone... 😆 😛 but hatsoff to u...

Aah im not at all great harshu ...actually i had this concept im my mind from long time ...but was too lazy and sometimes busy to pen it down...par ab jab mauka hai dastoor hai ...so i thought it will be a cute give for u

u have amazingly penned down d feelings of jallu... 😛 😳

Really 😳 Thanks yaar

hmmm toh he has badly fallen in love 😉

Love at first sight 😉

m interested to read d part m sure she would turn out to b his childhood frnd... 😉

Umm may be ...who knows 😉😆

d time was with him d meeting got cancelled at d perfect timing so dat he could meet his beauty queen and hand over her mobile... 😉 😳

Totally filmy right 😆

lovely avi...waiting for part 2... 😛

Will update soon harshu 😳

Originally posted by: divyadaya13

Also waiting for the update of super duper cute story 'ek vivaah aisa bhi'😳.

Originally posted by: Hm1608

Amazing story buddy ... Sorry for late

Up soon

Originally posted by: chaudhary_kajal

Awesome update

Thank u so much kaju
Firstly jalal rudely denied to give her mobile back but when abdul informed him about cancellation of meeting, he thought to return her mobile back..

So much attitude at first right ...but then he decided to return her mobile
He was clean bowled by her beauty ..

Jodha's magic 😉😆
He returned back her mobile and she left from there..

Yes ...but now lets see how they will meet again 😉
Thanku for pm
continue soon

Originally posted by: zuytre

Update soon

Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: dellaakdha

such a cute story..love story of a teenage boy who fel in love at 1st sight..nice..may be they had some past.. Waiting to read further..thanks for pm.