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Posted: 9 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: chaudhary_kajal

Lovely update..
I enjoyed reading it.
Ruls is such a chatter box 😆
thanku for pm
continue soon


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Posted: 9 years ago
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chapter 4
Abdul come to see jalal.its been one week jodha is missing.He searched her everywhere
But there is no trace of jodha.but now he was more worry abt jalal than jodha .in dis one
week he become like a stone He is not going to his company or talking with anyone.
Most of the time he is spending in THEIR looking at jo pic..In dis one week he not even eat
properly.he become very thin..Abdul feel more fear looking jalal like dis.Abdul went to jalal
room nd knock door.
Abdul:jalal open the door .bt there is no response.again he call jalal name loudly
Abdul:jalal open the door its me abdul .after 5mins the opens.by seeing room abdul get shock
Room is full of mess..All the things r thrown on floor.Mirror break into so many pieces.
He sees jalal hand bleeding continuously. He ran to jalal and shout at him.
Abdul(angryly): wat the hell r u doing with u jalal.Do u lost ur mind.he shot at jalal at top of his
voice and start to do first aid to jalal hand.
Jalal:silently sits on bed without uttering word.
Abdul(angrily): Speak man wat dis all.wat r u doing to yourself.
Jalal:I really hate her she leaves me and goes away from.I HATE HER.continuously he is saying
dis word
Abdul:he feels more fear by seeing jalal like dis .To divert jalal's mind .he change the topic
Abdul:jalsl u want to come to office today becoz there is important meeting with Mishra's company
Jalal:I'm not interested
Abdul :No jalal it is very important meeting u must attend 4r it
With sooo many arguments finally abdul make jalsl to accept to go to office.
Abdul feels happy by diverting jalal's mind.
COLOR=red]At MGI office[/COLOR]
Jalal entered his office after one week all the employees r shocked to see like dis becoz he become
very thin nd with beared.
Meshaa also feels very shocked to see jalal like dis .she went to jalsl and great him
Meshaa:hi jalal gud mngg .hw r u??
Jalal:He just give fake smile to her nd goes to his cabbine
Mesha to abdul: Wat happen to jalal y he become like dis
Abdul(angrily):dont act like a innocent child meesha with me meesha
Meesha(innocently): wat u mean abdul I'm not able to understand wat r u saying
Abdul:don't act smart with me u bitch I know dis is all ur game to separate jalal and jodhs
Meshha:still acting like a innocent no abdul I really don't know wat r u saying
Abdul: becoz of u they both separate and my baby sister went out from the house
Mesha:she feels happy by listening that jo went from the house.she smile evily that her plan
was worked.abdul caught her smiling evily.
Abdul+angrily): I know that you r the one who separate joja BT I don't have any proof.bt one thing
Ill say meesha that anything happen to my sister I truly will kill abdul said with anger nd rushed to
his cabin
Meesha: smiles evily and says u won't get any proof against me abdul nd goes to jalal cabin
At hospital
Jodha just finished her breakfast and sitting on the bed.mostly her wounds r heeled she was fine
now she heard rukkus voice and open her eyes .By seeing ruku a happy smile krept on her face.
In dis 1 week they both become gud friends.
Runs:hi pari hw r u??
Jo: I'm 5n ruwwuia
Rukus:ohhh pari cal me rukks says with cute pout
Jo:smiles at her says k rukks
Ruks:gud by the way mirza told me that u may discharge today
Jo:ha yes he also says to me
Rukks:where will u go pari
Jo(sadly):I'll be in working women hostel and I want to search for a job
Ruks:pari I have a idea y don't u be with me in my apartment
Jo:ohh no need rukks I can manage I don't want to burden on you
Runs(angrily):who told u r burden on me .u become my friend to me
I don't feel u r my burden.and can help you to search a job.don't say
Like that park
Jo:I'm sry rukks I'm mean to say that just listen to me .
Rukks:no more arguments u r being with and that's final.
Jo: k rukks thank u sooo much
Rukks:ohhh again u stated srys nd thxcc and she pouts
Jo::smiles at her
Mirza:hiii pari by listening mirza voice both turns their faces to see mirza
Jo:hi Dr.Mirza
Mirza:just call me mirza park
Jo:k mirza
Mirza:smiles at her see at rukks and asks
Mirza::hiii chatter box when did u came
Rukks:just now mirza
Mirza:ohh kk by the way now it is ur school time y did u come here
(Guys rukku is a teacher in a private school)
Ruku:ohhh I thought to see pari that's y I put leave today
Jo:ohhh means u r teacher runs
Mirza:ha yes pari she is teacher till now I'm not understanding that hw the
Children nd staff is bearing her.I feel sooo pity on them
Rukku:ohh hello monkey don't say like u know I'm fav teacher to my children
Mirza:ohhh poor them 😕
And they both starts their cat fight
Jo:she is njoying mirza and rukks fight
Recap

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Posted: 9 years ago
#83

Unres dear
Nice chappy dear
Patch up them soon buddy
Please can't see them like this
Jalal's words hating her is dangerous
That stupid bi**h is gonna pay for this
Hope Abdul finds evidence soon
Jo is fine but I want baby to be delivered after all misunderstanding r cleared plz
Precap is so interesting
Update soon buddy
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Posted: 9 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: Kavya_P


Unres dear
Nice chappy dear
Patch up them soon buddy
Please can't see them like this
Jalal's words hating her is dangerous
That stupid bi**h is gonna pay for this
Hope Abdul finds evidence soon
Jo is fine but I want baby to be delivered after all misunderstanding r cleared plz
Precap is so interesting
Update soon buddy


Thanks for pm eshu
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Posted: 9 years ago
#85

😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#86
Wonderful chapter n thnxx for pm dr
eshalli thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: eshalli

chapter 4
Abdul come to see jalal.its been one week jodha is missing.He searched her everywhere
But there is no trace of jodha.but now he was more worry abt jalal than jodha .in dis one
week he become like a stone He is not going to his company or talking with anyone.
Most of the time he is spending in THEIR looking at jo pic..In dis one week he not even eat
properly.he become very thin..Abdul feel more fear looking jalal like dis.Abdul went to jalal
room nd knock door.
Abdul:jalal open the door .bt there is no response.again he call jalal name loudly
Abdul:jalal open the door its me abdul .after 5mins the opens.by seeing room abdul get shock
Room is full of mess..All the things r thrown on floor.Mirror break into so many pieces.
He sees jalal hand bleeding continuously. He ran to jalal and shout at him.
Abdul(angryly): wat the hell r u doing with u jalal.Do u lost ur mind.he shot at jalal at top of his
voice and start to do first aid to jalal hand.
Jalal:silently sits on bed without uttering word.
Abdul(angrily): Speak man wat dis all.wat r u doing to yourself.
Jalal:I really hate her she leaves me and goes away from.I HATE HER.continuously he is saying
dis word
Abdul:he feels more fear by seeing jalal like dis .To divert jalal's mind .he change the topic
Abdul:jalsl u want to come to office today becoz there is important meeting with Mishra's company
Jalal:I'm not interested
Abdul :No jalal it is very important meeting u must attend 4r it
With sooo many arguments finally abdul make jalsl to accept to go to office.
Abdul feels happy by diverting jalal's mind.
COLOR=red]At MGI office[/COLOR]
Jalal entered his office after one week all the employees r shocked to see like dis becoz he become
very thin nd with beared.
Meshaa also feels very shocked to see jalal like dis .she went to jalsl and great him
Meshaa:hi jalal gud mngg .hw r u??
Jalal:He just give fake smile to her nd goes to his cabbine
Mesha to abdul: Wat happen to jalal y he become like dis
Abdul(angrily):dont act like a innocent child meesha with me meesha
Meesha(innocently): wat u mean abdul I'm not able to understand wat r u saying
Abdul:don't act smart with me u bitch I know dis is all ur game to separate jalal and jodhs
Meshha:still acting like a innocent no abdul I really don't know wat r u saying
Abdul: becoz of u they both separate and my baby sister went out from the house
Mesha:she feels happy by listening that jo went from the house.she smile evily that her plan
was worked.abdul caught her smiling evily.
Abdul+angrily): I know that you r the one who separate joja BT I don't have any proof.bt one thing
Ill say meesha that anything happen to my sister I truly will kill abdul said with anger nd rushed to
his cabin
Meesha: smiles evily and says u won't get any proof against me abdul nd goes to jalal cabin
At hospital
Jodha just finished her breakfast and sitting on the bed.mostly her wounds r heeled she was fine
now she heard rukkus voice and open her eyes .By seeing ruku a happy smile krept on her face.
In dis 1 week they both become gud friends.
Runs:hi pari hw r u??
Jo: I'm 5n ruqquia
Rukus:ohhh pari cal me rukks says with cute pout
Jo:smiles at her says k rukks
Ruks:gud by the way mirza told me that u may discharge today
Jo:ha yes he also says to me
Rukks:where will u go pari
Jo(sadly):I'll be in working women hostel and I want to search for a job
Ruks:pari I have a idea y don't u be with me in my apartment
Jo:ohh no need rukks I can manage I don't want to burden on you
Rukks(angrily):who told u r burden on me .u become my friend to me
I don't feel u r my burden.and can help you to search a job.don't say
Like that park
Jo:I'm sry rukks I'm mean to say that just listen to me .
Rukks:no more arguments u r being with and that's final.
Jo: k rukks thank u sooo much
Rukks:ohhh again u stated srys nd thxcc and she pouts
Jo::smiles at her
Mirza:hiii pari by listening mirza voice both turns their faces to see mirza
Jo:hi Dr.Mirza
Mirza:just call me mirza park
Jo:k mirza
Mirza:smiles at her see at rukks and asks
Mirza::hiii chatter box when did u came
Rukks:just now mirza
Mirza:ohh kk by the way now it is ur school time y did u come here
(Guys rukku is a teacher in a private school)
Ruku:ohhh I thought to see pari that's y I put leave today
Jo:ohhh means u r teacher runs
Mirza:ha yes pari she is teacher till now I'm not understanding that hw the
Children nd staff is bearing her.I feel sooo pity on them
Rukku:ohh hello monkey don't say like u know I'm fav teacher to my children
Mirza:ohhh poor them 😕
And they both starts their cat fight
Jo:she is njoying mirza and rukks fight
Recap

Flashback
K guys done with chspter4 don't forgot to hit like and commentscomments 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: natashathakur

Wonderful chapter n thnxx for pm dr


😊 thxccs
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Posted: 9 years ago
#89
Wonderful chapter but plz don't give long flash back...
And Ager ho sake to present story ko bhi flash back ke saath continue kar do...
Plz update next chapter fast I m waiting dear... 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: swriter

Wonderful chapter but plz don't give long flash back...
And Ager ho sake to present story ko bhi flash back ke saath continue kar do...
Plz update next chapter fast I m waiting dear... 😳


😊 thxcc 4r liking dear

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