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Posted: 9 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: eshalli

Superb start dear..
Plzzz pm me



Thnkxxx
I just sent u buddy req add me i will surely pm u next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
Sad chapter
Moti is so supportive
I m excited for the precap our new hero's entery after all
How can they abandon jo for their sons death
Amazing👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: moni_06

Sad chapter
Moti is so supportive
I m excited for the precap our new hero's entery after all
How can they abandon jo for their sons death
Amazing👏

Hey nd plz buddy me nd pm me i love reading



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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
Awsome update dear
loved story concept
loved it...
update soon

thnks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: moni_06

Hey nd plz buddy me nd pm me i love reading





Just send buddy req accept it i will update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: anu012

Awsome update dear
loved story concept
loved it...
update soon

thnks for pm


Thnkxx for cmmnt
I will update in few min
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
Sorry guys in this part i cant finish my story i need one more part jalal entry will be in next part

And guys for pm plzz buddy me



Part 2

PRESENT

moti see jodha who is crying hiding her face in between her knees. She go towards jodha and lift her face and see her eyes r red and puffy bcz of continues crying anyone can say that she is crying for so long time.

Seeing this conditions of her bhabhi moti get tensed and said," bhaibhi kya hua ap ro kyu rahi he ? Ma - bauji ne kuch kaha kya ? "
Jodha move her head negatively and says " thankuu moti tumne muje yaha rat bhar rehne diya per ab me yaha nahi reh sakti "
Moti surprised and ask " to bhabhi ap kaha jayegi ? "
Jodha smile faintly and replied ," jise is duniya me kahi jagah nahi milti use kisi nadi ya kuwe me to mil hi jati he "

After hearing this moti get angry and without think she slap very hard jodha.
Jodha shock seeing this behavior of her sister in law . moti replie with anger on her face ," tum esa soch bhi kese sakti ho ?"
Seeing jodha's tear moti calm herself and realize what she do in anger she immediately hug jodha and apologize to her ," hame maf kar dijiye bhabhi hame apki bat sunke bahot gussa aya ap 'atmahatya'( suicide ) karne ke bare me soch bhi kese sakti he ap kese ye bhul gayi ki me hu abhi apke liye koi nahi to me apka sath dungi "
Jodha aldo hug her back and replied ," hame maf kardo moti per us samay hamre man me bas ye hi tha ki jis ko khud ke ma-bap ne apne ghar me rakhne se mana kiya ho wo kese kisi or se koi umid rakh sakata he ? "

Moti break the hug and says, " bhabhi ap esa kuch nahi karegi me hu apke sath ap yahi rahiye or taiyar ho jaiye ham meri college ja rahe he '
Jodha confuse and ask ," college why ? "
Moti replie with smile , " wo apko sab pata chal jayega ap sirf taiyar ho jaye tab tak me ma bauji se bat karke ayi "
Jodha moge her head positively and go towards bathroom and moti go to hall where she expecting her parents.

IN HALL

moti come out side and see her parents sit on dine and giving her angry look.
Moti sit infront of them and says , " me college ja rahi hu sath me bhabhi ko bhi le ja rahi hu wo bhi ajse mere sath collage jayegi "
hearing this her mother shouted on her ," pahele to tumne bina hamri marzi ke us chudail ko hamre ghar me rakha ab hame keh rahi ho ki ham uski kahtirdari kare uska boj utjaye ye kabhi nahi hoga wo abhi ke abhi is gahr se ja rahi he "
Moti gets angry on her mother " ap ma he ki kya he agar esa kuch mere sath hota to ap kya karti ? "
F ," ye kesa sawal he tum hamari beti ho ham tume kese ghar se nikal sakte he "
Moti , " to kya bhabhi apki beti nahi wo bhi is gahr ke bahu he so wo bhi is gahr ki beti hi hui "
M ," lagta he us abhagni ( unlucky ) ne tum pe kuch jadu kar diya he ye kesi bate kar rahi ho jab use uske ghar walo ne nahi rakha to ham kyu us boj ko pale"
Moti replied emotionaly ," or agar kal mere sath bhi esa hua to kya ap muje bhi ese hi gahr se nikal doge? "
F ," dekho moti tum is society ko nahi janti tum abhi bachi ho? Beti ki sadi ke bad sasural hi uska ghar hota he "
Moti smile faintly , " so ap jodha ko kyu nikal rahe he uski bhi bhai ke sath sadi hui he to ye uska bhi gahr hua '
M , " tum kyu apne ap ko uske sath compare kar rahi ho wo ate hi 10 dino ke andar mere bete ko kha gayi "
Moti ask directly , " so agar esa kuch mere sath hua to ap log bhi muje ghar se nikal doge ? "
F ," ye tum kya keh rahi ho ? Esa kuch nahi hoga tumhare sath "
M ," or yaha vat tumhari nahi he yaha bat us chudail ki he pahele to tum muje ye batao ki tum use ghar se pyar se nikal rahi ho ya ham use dhake mar ke yaha se nikale ? "
Moti replied , " na me use nikal rahi hu na ap ko nikal ne dungi kese ma- bap he ap wo ro suicide karne ja rahi thi wo to mene use rok liya wo kaha jayegi ap hi bataiye ?"
M ," acha he marne do is duniya se ek boj kam ho jayega or me use nikalne ja rahi hu tum bich me boli to ... "
Moti cut her in between and replied," to kya ? Ap muje bhi ghar se nikale gi ? Apko to me vese bhi nahi pasand na bachpan se jab bhi me kuch magti tab muje dat ke chup karva dete or badi ho kar jab muje age padhna tha tab bhi nahi padhne diya agar bhai na hote to aj me bhi gahr ke kisi kone me padi hoti"

F," esa nahi he moti ladkiyo ko padha- likha ke koi faida nahi tum logo ko to wese bhi sadi karke ghar sambhal na hota he "
M, " or wo chudail kya apne maike se koi bahot bada khazana layi he jo use ne yaha apne ghar me bitha ke uski arti karu ma bap ne bas kuch gehne ir kapdo ke sath hi bhej diya tha . agar beti ke vivah me kuch de nagi sakte the to beti ko pala kyu pahele hi fek diya hota kahi to aj ye nobat na ati or mera lal aj jinda hota "

Moti just enough of her parents behavior after hearing her mother she is totaly get mad how can she talk like that for anyone and she just standup and shout loudly ," muje sharam ati he apko ma kehne me ap kese kisi ki beti ke bare esa keh sakti he ?
Or ap kya keh rahi thi ki wo kya layi ?!
Aj tak mene apka asli chera nahi dekha tha but aj dekh liya. Or jaha tak lane ka sawal he sayad apko pata nahi ki dahej ( i dont know what it call in hindi and English but i think u guys understand what i trying to say ) lena or dena dono hi crime he or bhabhi chahe to wo apke khilaf case bhi file kar sakti he. "
M ," so ab tum khud apne ma bap ko jail me bhijvaogi ? "
Moti ," ha agar meri jagah bhai hote to wo bhi yahi karte or rahi bat bhabhi ke yaha rehne ki to wo to yahi rahegi or agar ap us ke sath nahi reh sakte to ap ghar chod ke ja sakte he "
F ," what r u saying this rubbish ? Tum hame ghar chod ke jane ke liye keh rahi ho tum esa kese keh sakti ho ? Ye ghar hamra he mere bete ka so ham yahi rehenge or wo ladki ghar se bahr jayegi or ab agar tumne ek sabd bhi or bola to me tumahra admission cancel karva ke ghar me hi bandh kar dunga "
Moti just smile , " good dad i just want to listen this only and i m not jodha jo me apke samne gidgidaungi me aone bhai ki bahen hu apne Rights ke liye fight karna ata he muje and rahi bat babhi je or mere yaha rehne ki to ye bat bhi sun lijiye ki ye gahr mere bhai ka he apka nahi so legally ye gahr bhabhi ka hua and govt. Ki or se jo help amount ayega wo bhi bhabhi ka hi hoga na ki apka"
And added that ," and mene aj ap logo ka asli chehra dekh liya apke liye me bhi ek responsibility hi hu jise ap bhi bhul jayeneg so thnkx muje ye pahele hi realize karva diya"

Moti's eyes get wet and she just go towards her room and lock room and cry hard jodha who is listing there conversation from long time she come near to moti and take her in warm hug and console her. After some time moti calm her self and ask jodha, " bhabhi muje ye to pata he ki apne college ki he but kya padhai ki he ? "
Jodha replied , " mene bsc. kiya he but fir papa ne mana kiya so mene padhai chod di"
Moti smile and replied," ok ab ap age padhana me apke sath hu aj hi chal ke admission le lete he "

Jodha again hug moti and says ," moti agar tum na hoti to sayad me aj... "
Moti stop her saying further and says " no jodha no now no tears we will fight for ourself "


Precap :
Entry of jalal


Edited by Hm1608 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
No need to say sorry dear you take your time to give update
I just love this story
Keep it up
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: Rajat_loverr

No need to say sorry dear you take your time to give update
I just love this story
Keep it up



Ty for understanding me 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40
Ohhh poor Jodha cry the whole night
Wow moti is best sister in law
How cheap are moti 's parents
Poor Jodha how much she feel pain
Waiting for jalal's entry 🤔

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