Originally posted by: shahbhavini
👏 U Know... So So So many lines in this chapter I would like to tag👏👏👏... but I can't because u have blocked it copy the chapter...
>>> I wonder how lashy copied those lines and leave that.. Zhanna copied two chapters to read from translator😆 I don't know how.😲😆
Payal you know what I like in this chapter... No doubt the language and the way you played with words was outstanding but I like the most how it was written and the flow of the chapter... smooth like butter and it was gripping. I was totally captured into while reading.⭐️
Payal🤗... Simply hypnotic...😃
>>> Thankyou so so so much bhavi di🤗🤗
At first, I was so shocked when you introduce Rukaiya's character. Good hearted women forwarded her hand' Simple with minimum makeup... (You were imagining Pari while writing... no Just kidding I like Rukubaby too...)
>>> Till now, I have only written this for jo, describing her beauty but I really had to put a stone on my heart and write this for rukaiya😆 This was first!!😛😆 U like her??😲 That's a news!!
As u always let out your frustration,for her in ur updates.🤣
Jodha was unable to hide her displeasure😕... Even though she was meeting Rukaiya for the first time, she was her guest still she behaved cold and rude. I am glad at least she was in her senses to notice Jalal and Rukaiya's longing for each other.
>>>> She don't like her and this jo don't care about anyone so it doesn't matter to her that she's her guest or what but.. when she noticed jalal, she smiled at her.
I loved how Jalal retorted her like a protective and loving husband👏 when Jodha tried to demote her by asserting as a boring person.
>>> She actually find her boring as she likes drinking, loud music and such parties but when jalal said he likes her then her anger and annoyance, aggravated.
Why suddenly she is obsessed? Is It Jalal's charming look😳? Or her ego bruised😡? Or when she saw him with Rukaiya jealousy took over and suddenly she realized her inner subdued desire😭?
>>> She was confused and angry because she didn't know the reason, why she's feeling like that for Ruks, for Jalal. She's egoistical girl.
I enjoyed Jodha and Jalal's ironic casual chat.😃
>>> Thankyou di!! Glad u liked that part😃
Am I right??? Is Jalal is flirting with Jo not for long, but I felt for few minutes he was charmed... I can feel his ego also battered when she rejected him. Somewhere deep down I sensed he loved her and now he is over that and began to love Rukaiya. (Maybe I am totally interpreting wrong...) for a second, I thought Is Jalal playing a game so she realizes her love for him? But then why Rukaiya was crying seeing both of them in the bed and Jalal was shocked to see him in bed with her.
>>>> Yes, he was lost in her beauty for a moment. He did like her but she rejected him and he was disappointed so now when she was there, with him.. talking so casually.. words came out from his mouth as he wanted to know the reason. 😊
Also, after the slapping incident👏👏👏... Jalal was trying to cheer her up like he was concerned. (Maybe, he loved her that is why he proposed and still he care for her.)
>>> Love!! Do u really think they will fall in love in this story??😆
But whatever it is I am enjoying because it's so different than any other story.
>>> Thanks a lot di🤗
I was glad that Jodha respects Jaya honestly... Orange Juice part was hilarious...very cute... (She regard for her foster mother which explains her royal values) >>> Yes, she loves Jaya😃
and the way she fought for her and hit that man... shows how brave and protective she is towards her loved once...
No doubt in this story is obsessive... annoying... obstinate... egoistic... stubborn and somewhat rich brat and kind of vulgar ... but-but-but... she is kindhearted and courageous... she is also protective towards the people she loves...
>>> OMG.. " obsessive... annoying... obstinate... egoistic... stubborn and somewhat rich brat and kind of vulgar " but whatever adjectives u used for her.. are right🤣 and she loves only jaya and ranvijay!!😃
Let's she if she really loves Jalal or not... if she does then she might not hurt him... i can just hope... my love for Jodha after all... I am trying to find good qualities in negative character...😃
>>> Try this for Ruks, in this story!!😆
( Somehow something wrong with my computer ... I see entire comment before posting and it post only half... something wrong with my computer)
>>> I know.. u were saying this few days back na.. is it ur personal computer or of office?
Payal... I have no words to praise your outstanding talent of playing with words... Omg... I have read your first FF and I am reading this one... You have really exceeded yourself... OUTSTANDING👏 I AM ENVY IN A GOOD WAY... OF UR FLAWLESS WRITING. 😳👏
>>> @ Bold and Underlined: Bhavi di.. This really really means a lot.. I am so delighted and smiling like an idiot now.. I am so happy to read this.
Thanks a lot di🤗 for your lovely words and for this beautiful comment😃
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